| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 03:56 EDT
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hey keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I so love this story!! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: kagomehigurashifan001 On: July 13, 2004 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I think its the best one iv read so far, please hurry and update, i just want kagomes bday to come and all that other shit so her and inu get to gether, oh by the way does kagome do drugs too or is it just inu? OR will she start because of inu?
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 01:15 EDT
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It's relly good... please write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 01:15 EDT
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Damn. What a chapter. I never thought Naraku woud get that evil. A baseball bat? Damn. Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: zardoz582000 On: July 12, 2004 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done and entertaining to the max! Never would have thought IY would have been into the piercing scene (and wonder if he'd branded as well), but when you think about it, why not - it's such an animalistic/primal thing, it would be natural for him. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: July 08, 2004 18:48 EDT
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I really liked this chapter. It was very, very realistic. You address various issues, and I've met my share of Wiley-scum in the world-they come in different shades from all over-sad but truth-Good riddance! Poor Kagome! My close friend, adapted brother was stationed in Japan and he used to tell me about how ostracized peeps of mixed ancestry like Kagome were and her painful feelings about the matter are very real. Thankfully, everyone is not hateful, bigoted, racist and so very xenophobic (although the US does hold its share of hypocrisy in claiming to embrace its mult-diverse, multi-ethnic, multi-cultural denizens). I truly, honestly abhor ignorance-what makes me sad is that I just saw a headline today stating the stats for reading books in the US has plummeted-and there is an intolerance twds intellectuals also and no questions anything it seems- Enuff of my rant-Gomen! Please keep up the excellent work, seeing your update made my day! But why didn't Inuyasha catch up with Kagome so she would not have to walk home alone?? Bad puppy!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 01:10 EDT
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Wow. what a chapter. Poor Kag. I forget what happens past crewfew. I know you get a ticket right? But do you spend the night in jail too? Love the story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Reviewed By: The Impaler On: July 06, 2004 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be my all time favorite fan fiction. PLEASE UPDATE!! I usually don't go for fan fiction that actually has a plot, but this one is really intriguing, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 07:08 EDT
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lol well great chapter. Poor Kag, she doesn't get a break does she? Well Keep up the good work and update asap. I cannot wait to find out what happens next and I totaly love your story! It's spiffy! lol Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:48 EDT
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Interesting chapter. Let's hope Kagome is okay. Hope you update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:02 EDT
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More, please??? Again, the story is great and I'm really enjoying it. I'm just impatient. I hope you can write more soon... BTW, how many chapters do you have planned? Is the story going to go all the way until she's 18? How pissed is her mom going to be when she gets called by the police about her daughter breaking curfew? When is Inuyasha going to meet Kagome's Mom?? ok, I'm really impatient, but those are some of the questions I have running in my head right now...
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Reviewed By: Annabanana On: July 02, 2004 16:54 EDT
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OH, MY GOTHESS! This is truly dark and disturbing on so many levels, as is its companion piece. Nice bit of self-insertion there, too, in the later chaps. But I still wonder about Inuyasha's character. Seems rather odd that someone with his 'recreational affinities' AND with a prior for statutory rape would have such qualms of conscience where Kagome is concerned. Or a conscience at all, for that matter. Weird, wild stuff!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: June 29, 2004 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter. I couldn't help but laugh. I can't wait to find out whats going to happen next! Keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (too lazy to login again) On: June 28, 2004 22:35 EDT
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Heheh...nice touch with the Russian there...but you got the tense wrong, and the pronunciation. 'sabaka yibuchaya' would be more like it *nods* but that's okay, I doubt there are any Russian people/people who understand Russian reading this fic XP *whines a bit* Why'd you leave off at that part? That's almost like a cliffie! Evil! Evilevilevilevil!! Gaah! Please update? Pie...? More pie~~? who are you on devTART anyway? Hm? Who? Tell me! Pleeeeeeease? Whoa...haha...just heard a cat meowing outside my window...I don't even own one...kitty...eheh.....nyanko-chan ga hoshi~~...nyuu.....*slinks away* hissssssssssssss!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:39 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Hope you update soon :)
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