| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Morly On: June 01, 2004 03:50 EDT
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Oh man last chapter I felt the fear when Naraku yelled at Kagome! Of course being me I'd have been so what would you have wanted me to say when the lady presented her charge card. So suspenseful and i can't wait to see what Kags want to talk to Inu about.
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Reviewed By: morly On: June 01, 2004 03:49 EDT
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I'm really enjoying the story, Inu has me intrigued with his plans for the future. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love evil twists, they rock! lol well i can't wait till theres more. I'm totally in love with this story and i think it's one of the best that i've read so far. Keep up the great work and update asap. I'll be waiting...lol te he ...Krystal.
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl (not logged in) On: May 30, 2004 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man is it gettin hot in here or is it just me? Please update this is the best!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 27, 2004 20:11 EDT
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I really was vibing on this last chapter. I love Inuyasha's dominant/assertive aggression, but I see that wench Kikyou has hurt him in this story. I'm glad Miroku was there to "comfort" him. The scene was by no means offensive. You could have went further with it and it would have been fine cuz it worked *shrug*. It wasn't out the box and far flung. Oh Kami! Poor Kagome! I pray she is okay, but I know she is NOT! I know she is badly hurt! I could feel it when she fell. How in the hell did she get up after all? Sheer determination I guess. Please keep write, your updates are worthwhile-
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Reviewed By: Opheila [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fic, update!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 04:40 EDT
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lol poor poor Kagome.. that chapter was good. keep up the good work and please update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 22:42 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Took me a little bit longer than usual to read it though. Hope you update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 25, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Thanks for answering the questions and comments! This chapter was awesome and quite fun! I like the intro of Miroku, Sango and the two new OCs. It works! Please keep writing! My question though is why doesn't Kagome have a problem with Inuyasha's switch tendencies? Not that I would either! Nor am I sayig that she should. Does it have to do with her living abroad? The way you are writing him, he reminds me of a gorgeous close guy friend of mine who I refer to as "greedy" not bi!
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Reviewed By: Morly On: May 25, 2004 11:13 EDT
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I'm really enjoying the story, Inu has me intrigued with his plans for the future. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 16:41 EDT
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Awesome chapter, I can't wait to see what you come out with next. I've heard of Ground Zero before so I'm really interested in what you plan on doing with that. I'm happy you introduced what seems to be main characters that aren't so main but aren't that minor. Update whenever possible ^^ Oh, yay for Kagome and Inuyasha lime in chapter eleven. I hope it rolls around before I know it... XD
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 06:34 EDT
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Hey, nice chapter. I've thought about it, and I think that in 500 years, Inuyasha wouldn't exactly keep his prefrences so narrow. Maybe he even went a couple of decades as a scholar-type person. Or he liked the athlete kind of life for 50 years. So why not try all kinds of $ex when you have 500 years to live? //////////////// That's my reasoning, and it may be a bit flawed, but it makes me less uncomfortable reading the story. And it was just that one aspect that was odd to me, but I like the plot of the story. Also, the bakayaro thing is used exclusively by the male population because it is very crude and women didn't tend to be that way. However, this was during WW2 where this information came from, so it may have to do with society then.//////////////// Keep up the good work! ^___^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 05:30 EDT
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lol that's cool. I'm still kinda confused to why Sango's a lesbian, but no worries, Miroku ca always keep trying. lol well please update asap. i love your story and can't wait for the next chappie. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 12, 2004 19:13 EDT
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Hey! Must you torment us?? Yes, the story is interesting but you tease, tease, tease and tease us! Yash is doing his thing and poor Kagome is lost and confused. Stop the torment and please write another chapter. That was good but more, more, more-
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 17:26 EDT
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hey great story! please keep up the good work. i'm addicted to your story! Update asap. Krystal.
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