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| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] | | Pages (23): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 ] | Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 18:03 EDT
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Awesome chapter. I think that even though this chapter was a filler mostly, other than just show feelings for each other, lust, curiousity, etc. I really hope you update soon, this feels like it's becoming one of my favorite stories.
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 06:49 EDT
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The only problem I have is in the summary you said that Inuyasha is bi. First of all, I haven't read past chapter three, so I don't know what you have written past that point. Second, it's not that I don't respect people's choices on that kind of lifestyle, but I'm just not comfortable with Inuyasha being bi.
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 06:37 EDT
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Um. Actually, Bakayaro is the cruder term for a foolish person, and used almost exclusively by males.
| Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 05, 2004 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am truly into this story. The mangers from hell! Who has not worked someplace with jerks like that?? And eventhought Naraku is human, he is tainted with the ugly "demons" of pride, self absorption, dishonesty, bigotry, vanity, who know what else. That Allen is pathetic wuss! He put up with Naraku calling him "gay" ragging on his girl, dissing him and calling him a "half-breed"- I hope he goes postal or something-what a lame! I don't have an issue with Inuyasha being bi as long as it works for this story, and is not an excuse just to write some yaoi. If it fits it fits. I don't mind change a bit of OOCness but it has to be believing that's why stories with Sess/Inu having an incest sex crazed relationship don't work for me! Anyway, girl you can't write this fast enough for me! I'm dying to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 02:17 EDT
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interested in* eheh sorry ^^;
| Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 02:17 EDT
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Good chapter, not sure what else to say, but only that I'm really interesting in what is going on at the movie theatre. Good luck with the next chapter :) By the way, thanks for emailing me back about my review.
| Reviewed By: someish On: May 04, 2004 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more. just more of everything. huge fan
| Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 03, 2004 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always noticed the better the story, the stingier people are wiht reiveiws :-). I saw your story posted on AFF.net and didn't get a chance to read until on here (I like the MM formatting better I suppose). This is really an excellent story. I hate that you only are at chapter 5! I got soooo involved, b/c it caught me off guard. The setting is so detailed and I'm wondering did you work at a movie house?? And this new twist on Inu is fascinating. Kagome's past is interesting and Kagura is not in the story yet. I can't wait to see if you're going to bring Sesshoumaru and others into it. This review is rather long, but I like this story alot. It has some angst and is very, very well written. Please write more!
| Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 00:28 EDT
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First I'd like to say I love your desciptive writing. It was enough to give me a complete mental image but not so much that I wanted to skip it. Love the chemistry of InuYasha and Kagome. And I like that you have given them the moive theater as a enviorment. Unexplored territory. I like InuYasha's new look. And it seems to go prefectly ith his demon side. And the "spanking" as well as the tongue ring must stay! I smile everytime he makes a advance on her. It's just too amusing. I know something is going to go down at the theater but I can't wait to see what you do with the age gap couple. Be looking for your next chapter.
| Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 01:23 EDT
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I supposed I'm the first reviewer... heh. This might be a long review--mostly because I wrote down a few things I wanted to talk about in my review. One thing is that I'm amazed with is that there is more than a ten year gap in their age, while I thought he would be younger in this fanfiction, probably not older than 25. One thing I really liked was how you had Inuyasha not like Hot Topic. I absolutely love this fanfiction... just, literally, for that. ^^ And the names for the ears were funny... 'lefty' really got me going. XD I also think this is very realistic, not forgetting details or skipping them. Such as the part where Kagome had to do cleanup duty... anyone else would have put something about cleaning up--nothing more. I also like how you have mentioned the Japanese words at the bottom... which really help, me a lot since I don't strain myself to learn all the Japanese I can get my hands on. Very good description of everything, also like how you use REAL places, such as Ground Zero and Hell's Kitchen, instead of just making up a bunch of bullshit. Also, picked up on a little mistake... the age to work at a movie theatre is 15, not 16. Or, atleast the ones here. Just something I picked up from chapter one. To make my ramblings short, I really like what you have and hope you continue to write more chapters very, very soon.
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