| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess (lazy) On: August 17, 2004 02:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Akia:Yay! Yay! Yay! Update!Update!Update!...*glances down at characters left* *sniffs* WHY!? I love writing unbelieveably long reviews. Me and my friends would fight trying to give the longest ones...now now....WHY?! *shakes nearst person* WHY? Person: I don't know. *beats me off* Akia: *smiles* I can't wait for you to update! And what kinda Film did they stick her in....*snigger* I wanna know what happens! At the party! Everything! You must update! For me! Cuz everyone(once they've been forced in my company long enough) loves me!It just takes a while! So do it for the future! Update soon! For me! For everyone who wants to find out what happens Crowed: *CHEERS* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE...!!! Akia: See I'm not the only one! I love inu...Kag is such a lucky bitch. hate her guts...ED:*growls* *runs into fic and rummages through Kag's stuff* *finds pics takes them and hides* *snarls at anyone to close* Akia:Update please!....i wanna finish using all teh characters...shoudl i ramble? D: No you shouldn't! Akia: Fine *is mad* *turns to author* PLEASE UPDATE!!! Poor Kag it gotta a be frustrating. you have an unbelieveble hot guy like inu up on you..and you can't do anything. I would Rip out my own throat. I have to say you have made like the coolest inuyasha and kagome. Sometimes they get on my nerves(even in the anime) but inu can get away with it cuz his looks..*drool* But i liek yours. So this is just to day that you HAVE TO UPDATE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! UPDATE!(ncl) |
Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 01:20 EDT
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HEY!! Great story!!! The idea of your story is very original. And the way you detail how people work at a Movie Theater sounds like you worked there yourself. Well please continue with your story and update soon!! ~ViciousVamp~
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 14, 2004 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok now that was a fucking awsome story!!!! BUT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!! Please i got to know what happens at the party i mean come on you have to make kagome and inuyasha be alone in a room together!!! HeHeHe!! You know its really not fair that inuyasha gets to have little sessions and kagome doesnt you should make her go to someone to get relieved and i mean come on wouldnt inuyasha think that she might go to someone else sence he wont fuck her????? You should make kagome fallow inuyasha one of these times to the club and make her sneak in and fallow inuyasha to see what goes on when shes not with him! hehehehe **im so evil** Are you gunna make koga hit on her?? lol i shouldnt really ask that cuz i think i know the answer ^-^ I cant believe she thinks the black haired boy is hot even though its inuyasha but of course she dont know that and she thinks hes hot!?!?!?! Inuyasha seems so mean to her and it just makes me wanna cry!!! Well not really but it makes me feel angry at inu! When is she gunna see his ears anyways!?!??! I mean come on cant you at least let her know anout the ears??? Oh oh oh and let her rub them and make inuyasha like it!! ALOT!!! hehehe. I just need to know what happens next so you HAVE TO HURRY UP AND UPDATE!! UPDAT UPDATE UPDATE!!!! PLEASE!! ELSE ILL SEND MIROKU SO GROPE YOU TILL YOU DIE!! MMMMMMMMWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAA!!!! **sry i forgot to take my medication this morning** ^-^ Neways im gunna check on this story every couple if you updat |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, thats all i can say about this fic, is WOW! i love this story (ok so maybe i can say that too, but thats not the point!) please update soon! danke, daniy jinx
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Reviewed By: Mikhail On: August 12, 2004 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAAAAAAAHCK! I can't get enough of this facfic! It's excellent, and very creative. Please update! I can't wait to see what's going to happen at the party. (Can InuYasha stay in control?! Teehee!!) I also want to thank you for having such LONG chapters! I love it! Most fanfics have extremely short chapters, that don't have much detail in there. Your attention to detail is GREATLY appreciated! Keep up the swell work. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Trice On: August 10, 2004 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great but you should finish this
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 05:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter. please keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what Miroku has planned for the party.. I so love your story! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 01:12 EDT
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Colieo. great job. keep up the great work. I love this fic.
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Reviewed By: Opheila [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 02:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your story on AFF.net and Im in love with it. I can't wait for you to update again!!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 01:47 EDT
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(Chapter 7) Hehhehehehheheh!! Kagome should wonder if he's got premature balding underneath that bandana. (Chapter 9) Man, what I wouldn't give to see Inuyasha go head to head with Cloud...
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Title: Yay!!!!
Reviewed By: Iwas tolazytologin,butit'sme,Tammy On: August 08, 2004 05:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pimp, as usual! I am going to have to say it, as far as fanfic one-liners go....."Now, the dental retractors." is taking the cake. This story is just. too. MuCh. Just Tasty. Good job!!!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 00:21 EDT
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you know, this gets more and more disturbing the more I read it, but I'm totally more and more into it every time. She's going to ask Sango about the pictures, isn't she? God I am SO looking forward to reading more of this!!! You're so awesome. Please wite more as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: kikyou_104(not online) On: August 07, 2004 20:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
great chappy...please update soon
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Title: grrrrr!
Reviewed By: kanome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
u r so mean for not updating! but i love the story and really really want u to continue! well love it read it update it PLEASE!
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Title: you only go 70 review...well 71 counting mine???
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: August 02, 2004 16:06 EDT
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okay...i'm waiting for a update...this story is good and it still hasn't updated...why???? why??? why??? and why doesn't why has an 'a'? damn it!!! well anyway...i like that you revise cuz' i was rereading the chapters i was printing out and i found tons of mistakes....and now that i noe youv'e corrected them i feel better...love you and thought i'd get on your nerves..
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