| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Morly On: May 25, 2004 11:13 EDT
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I'm really enjoying the story, Inu has me intrigued with his plans for the future. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 16:41 EDT
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Awesome chapter, I can't wait to see what you come out with next. I've heard of Ground Zero before so I'm really interested in what you plan on doing with that. I'm happy you introduced what seems to be main characters that aren't so main but aren't that minor. Update whenever possible ^^ Oh, yay for Kagome and Inuyasha lime in chapter eleven. I hope it rolls around before I know it... XD
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 06:34 EDT
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Hey, nice chapter. I've thought about it, and I think that in 500 years, Inuyasha wouldn't exactly keep his prefrences so narrow. Maybe he even went a couple of decades as a scholar-type person. Or he liked the athlete kind of life for 50 years. So why not try all kinds of $ex when you have 500 years to live? //////////////// That's my reasoning, and it may be a bit flawed, but it makes me less uncomfortable reading the story. And it was just that one aspect that was odd to me, but I like the plot of the story. Also, the bakayaro thing is used exclusively by the male population because it is very crude and women didn't tend to be that way. However, this was during WW2 where this information came from, so it may have to do with society then.//////////////// Keep up the good work! ^___^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 05:30 EDT
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lol that's cool. I'm still kinda confused to why Sango's a lesbian, but no worries, Miroku ca always keep trying. lol well please update asap. i love your story and can't wait for the next chappie. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 12, 2004 19:13 EDT
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Hey! Must you torment us?? Yes, the story is interesting but you tease, tease, tease and tease us! Yash is doing his thing and poor Kagome is lost and confused. Stop the torment and please write another chapter. That was good but more, more, more-
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 17:26 EDT
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hey great story! please keep up the good work. i'm addicted to your story! Update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 18:03 EDT
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Awesome chapter. I think that even though this chapter was a filler mostly, other than just show feelings for each other, lust, curiousity, etc. I really hope you update soon, this feels like it's becoming one of my favorite stories.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 06:49 EDT
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The only problem I have is in the summary you said that Inuyasha is bi. First of all, I haven't read past chapter three, so I don't know what you have written past that point. Second, it's not that I don't respect people's choices on that kind of lifestyle, but I'm just not comfortable with Inuyasha being bi.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 06:37 EDT
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Um. Actually, Bakayaro is the cruder term for a foolish person, and used almost exclusively by males.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 05, 2004 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am truly into this story. The mangers from hell! Who has not worked someplace with jerks like that?? And eventhought Naraku is human, he is tainted with the ugly "demons" of pride, self absorption, dishonesty, bigotry, vanity, who know what else. That Allen is pathetic wuss! He put up with Naraku calling him "gay" ragging on his girl, dissing him and calling him a "half-breed"- I hope he goes postal or something-what a lame! I don't have an issue with Inuyasha being bi as long as it works for this story, and is not an excuse just to write some yaoi. If it fits it fits. I don't mind change a bit of OOCness but it has to be believing that's why stories with Sess/Inu having an incest sex crazed relationship don't work for me! Anyway, girl you can't write this fast enough for me! I'm dying to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 02:17 EDT
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interested in* eheh sorry ^^;
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 02:17 EDT
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Good chapter, not sure what else to say, but only that I'm really interesting in what is going on at the movie theatre. Good luck with the next chapter :) By the way, thanks for emailing me back about my review.
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Reviewed By: someish On: May 04, 2004 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more. just more of everything. huge fan
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 03, 2004 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always noticed the better the story, the stingier people are wiht reiveiws :-). I saw your story posted on AFF.net and didn't get a chance to read until on here (I like the MM formatting better I suppose). This is really an excellent story. I hate that you only are at chapter 5! I got soooo involved, b/c it caught me off guard. The setting is so detailed and I'm wondering did you work at a movie house?? And this new twist on Inu is fascinating. Kagome's past is interesting and Kagura is not in the story yet. I can't wait to see if you're going to bring Sesshoumaru and others into it. This review is rather long, but I like this story alot. It has some angst and is very, very well written. Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 00:28 EDT
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First I'd like to say I love your desciptive writing. It was enough to give me a complete mental image but not so much that I wanted to skip it. Love the chemistry of InuYasha and Kagome. And I like that you have given them the moive theater as a enviorment. Unexplored territory. I like InuYasha's new look. And it seems to go prefectly ith his demon side. And the "spanking" as well as the tongue ring must stay! I smile everytime he makes a advance on her. It's just too amusing. I know something is going to go down at the theater but I can't wait to see what you do with the age gap couple. Be looking for your next chapter.
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