| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Title: Yeowza!
Reviewed By: kagomesjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it's possible, I love this story even more that Caught in the wrongful hands of desire. ... Yep, definetely possible. This story is so awesome! I love your raw and powerful and just wonderful writting style. I just can't wait for your lemon pieces for this story. Hee hee...;) I hope you continue, cause this has GOT to be one of the best stories I've read so far. In fact, if you have the time, check out LadyDi's Fate and Destiny. It's awesome, wonderful, twist-filled, and the fact that LadyDi is my beat has nothing to do with this plug...Seriously though, this authoress is so awesome and wonderful and stupendous that you will feel very nice when you read this story. There are even lemons here and there in it. It's a reincarnation story and on ff.net. ^-^ Until next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:59 EDT
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Yay! They kissed! hehe so... How hard is it going to be for them to keep their hands off each other now, hmmm? ::chortles with glee:: ok, I'm being weird. Sorry. But the chapter was good. I've gotten really excited about reading this and it's probably because it's pretty different from most things I've encountered. I like your writing style. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: June 06, 2004 21:08 EDT
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Haha, awesome chapter. Thanks for updating ^^
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Originally, I was kinda worried aobut reading this but you know what? I was being an idiot. This is damn good. And I can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 02, 2004 14:20 EDT
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Gomen, for not being clear. Hmm...I may have been talking about his personality since you illustrate how he his nice and quite nasty, which works b/c it stays with his personality in the manga, under all that bark and bite, he has a heart of gold. Yes, that must be it b/c you did explain that he was more into girls than boys, not "switching" back and forth unless it was a hot hottie guy that you couldn not blame anyone for not passing up! Agree Jonny Depp! Yes! This chapter was really good, but is it deliberate pacing thus far? Not a lot has happened jsut yet. You're keeping the cards close to your chest. We jsut get a glimpse of things. B/c the story is building brick by brick and not layer by layer. Is this torture deliberate? Cuz if it is...well you are doing a good job of it. Looking forward to the next chapter. I didn't know I was a masochist. Ha!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 02:16 EDT
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I'm glad you write what you know. It's better than writing nothing at all, because with your story, you wouldn't have much of anything if you didn't describe and elaborate on everything. I like it that way. Anyway, awesome chapter. I finally got around to reading it. Hope you update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Morly On: June 01, 2004 03:50 EDT
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Oh man last chapter I felt the fear when Naraku yelled at Kagome! Of course being me I'd have been so what would you have wanted me to say when the lady presented her charge card. So suspenseful and i can't wait to see what Kags want to talk to Inu about.
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Reviewed By: morly On: June 01, 2004 03:49 EDT
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I'm really enjoying the story, Inu has me intrigued with his plans for the future. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love evil twists, they rock! lol well i can't wait till theres more. I'm totally in love with this story and i think it's one of the best that i've read so far. Keep up the great work and update asap. I'll be waiting...lol te he ...Krystal.
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl (not logged in) On: May 30, 2004 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man is it gettin hot in here or is it just me? Please update this is the best!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 27, 2004 20:11 EDT
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I really was vibing on this last chapter. I love Inuyasha's dominant/assertive aggression, but I see that wench Kikyou has hurt him in this story. I'm glad Miroku was there to "comfort" him. The scene was by no means offensive. You could have went further with it and it would have been fine cuz it worked *shrug*. It wasn't out the box and far flung. Oh Kami! Poor Kagome! I pray she is okay, but I know she is NOT! I know she is badly hurt! I could feel it when she fell. How in the hell did she get up after all? Sheer determination I guess. Please keep write, your updates are worthwhile-
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Reviewed By: Opheila [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fic, update!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 04:40 EDT
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lol poor poor Kagome.. that chapter was good. keep up the good work and please update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 22:42 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Took me a little bit longer than usual to read it though. Hope you update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 25, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Thanks for answering the questions and comments! This chapter was awesome and quite fun! I like the intro of Miroku, Sango and the two new OCs. It works! Please keep writing! My question though is why doesn't Kagome have a problem with Inuyasha's switch tendencies? Not that I would either! Nor am I sayig that she should. Does it have to do with her living abroad? The way you are writing him, he reminds me of a gorgeous close guy friend of mine who I refer to as "greedy" not bi!
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