| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: January 18, 2005 03:43 EST
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Hahaha! That was great! I especially loved the part when InuYasha brought her into the break room and hugged her. I had tears in my eyes! And I screamed "YES!" Oh man, I'm so happy now that they FINALLY got back together. Wow, it was worth waiting for. I can not wait to see what happens in their relationship after this! LOL
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Title: arcticslap@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: ArcticKitsune On: January 18, 2005 01:25 EST
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You know there are so very many things that I could say about this story and your writing. But I have neither the time nor the inclination to expend that much of my energy. So I'll make this succinct ("short and sweet" for those lacking a proper dictionary). I could talk about everything from your butchery of English grammar to your repetitive habit of creating new words that make no sense whatsoever. Your habit of shortening words to slang at inappropriate times is particularly juvenile. On the other side of that, there is no reason to use thirteen words when one will do and make a greater impact. You also don't appear to be aware that you can't slap a random suffix on a noun and make it a verb. It's perfectly apparent that the finer aspects of creativity completely escape you. As for your attempt at writing a lemon scene, I believe I can sum up my feelings in one sentence. "Chi no namida ga dete dete tomaranai yo."
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok, right now I'm totally giddy with just how fucking GOOD that was! wow... I love this story, have I said that before? Your writing is juat great and I love your perspective through this whole thing. It's totally amazing... and what an awesome lemon! ::fans self:: wow. WOW.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 01:12 EST
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That was well worth waiting for. Great work, as always. There's not much for me to say, really, but there never really is. Best of luck on the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 00:30 EST
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w00t! *does a happy dance* that last part was hilarious. Please keep up the great work and update asap. XD Krystal.
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Title: Wow!!!!!
Reviewed By: Cindygirl (NSI) On: January 18, 2005 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! That chapter was well worth the wait. Great JOB!!!! You out did yourself. That was one of the best lemons I have ever read. Keep up the good work and I'm glad he got over his problem. Can't wait for the next chapter. THAT WAS JUST TOO HOT!!!!! ^o^ :)
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Title: Amagad...
Reviewed By: Ary-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET JESUS, what an update! Excellent character interaction (especially Inuyasha and Miroku...LOOOOOVED it!), excellent lemon, excellent CHAPTER! Action-packed. *giggles* You are my favorite! ^()^
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Title: Taku mo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn impatiant hentai people pissing of the author. It worries me, there's a complete after the status of the fic. Its not over is it...I hope not. Well anyway I've been spending the last week reading this fic when ever I could, and I have to say I'm a real baka for not reading it when I first saw the title. I hope you find the time to update soon, and I'm more then happy to be teased until forever as long as the story is as good as this one is. The sex scene isn't everything people.
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Title: .......
Reviewed By: KikyoKiller (not signed in) On: January 10, 2005 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful!!! I really hope you update soon!! PLEASE!!! I can't wait to see...errr...read..what happens with Inuyasha Kagome next...Well...till then...ja ne!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 01:44 EST
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I just finished reading through all of what you have up of this fic in like a day. >.< It's a great fic. Sorry I'm not writing reviews for specific chapters, but I don't feel up to going back and digging for ones in which specific things happend which I want to comment on. Anywho, I loved the whole not into doggy-style, leaving mating marks, and such thing since I think that is just some bullshit one person did and then like the rest of the fricking world decided to copy. The whole she's legal thing, but then he changed his mind was an awesome twist that, atleast for me, definetly came out of left field... there was more, but now I've forgotten. =\ Heh, another kind of amusing thing was the fact that I was reminded of certain parts of this story while I listened some of my music. Girl Anachronism by The Dresden Dolls for instance for when Kagome was questioning why her parents didn't have her a year earlier, and Daisy Duke by Rooney with the whole "I'm sorry, for cuffing you to m bath tub" when Inuyasha cuffed her to Kouga's bed. I know, I'm lame- and you probably don't particularly care, but still. ;P Anywho...keep up the pretty damn good job with this fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 02:55 EST
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i can't wait for more. it's cool what he said about kagome. i just hope he doesn't want to push her away. well, i know he doesn't, but you know...anything can screw with a relationship. i can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 21:59 EST
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I like this AU story very much. Thick-meaty chapters, lots of tension, both good and bad types, between Inuyasha and Kagome. Keep up the great details of the world around them both. I'm also looking forward to the downfall of manager from hell. Can't wait for an update alert!
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Title: Ooops...^_^;
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:07 EST
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Heh heh heh...I just realized I WAS one of those who asked for a lemon...But now that I remember the chapter, The title threw me off...I totally forgot the title! Sorry, rough couple of weeks...*smacks myself*
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Title: Dang...
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...Chiho Higurashi has guts, doesn't she? I honestly would not have had the guts to call my daughter's boyfriend to make sure he was an honerable man. Wow...Good chapter! The only thing I'm glad about as far as this chapter is concerned is that he's starting to make sense as to why he's avoiding her. Now, as far as the upcoming lemons, just to let you know, I am very patient, and being a writer myself, I know you can't screw up the story just to make others happy. It just doesn't work that way. I know what it's like to have impatient writers asking for more or certain things, but you have ultimate control, and I trust you to put those long awaited lemons in at the right times. You are one of my most favorite writers, and I have faith in the chapters to come ~_^ Happy Holidays to you too!
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Title: SQUEEE!!!
Reviewed By: Ary-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amagad, he finally said it! You have no idea how much I loved this chapter - really excellent! I'm so excited for your next update...hopefully ickle Yasha will figure all this out soon, ne? Well, looking forward to the next chappy...
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