| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:48 EDT
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Interesting chapter. Let's hope Kagome is okay. Hope you update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:02 EDT
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More, please??? Again, the story is great and I'm really enjoying it. I'm just impatient. I hope you can write more soon... BTW, how many chapters do you have planned? Is the story going to go all the way until she's 18? How pissed is her mom going to be when she gets called by the police about her daughter breaking curfew? When is Inuyasha going to meet Kagome's Mom?? ok, I'm really impatient, but those are some of the questions I have running in my head right now...
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Reviewed By: Annabanana On: July 02, 2004 16:54 EDT
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OH, MY GOTHESS! This is truly dark and disturbing on so many levels, as is its companion piece. Nice bit of self-insertion there, too, in the later chaps. But I still wonder about Inuyasha's character. Seems rather odd that someone with his 'recreational affinities' AND with a prior for statutory rape would have such qualms of conscience where Kagome is concerned. Or a conscience at all, for that matter. Weird, wild stuff!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: June 29, 2004 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter. I couldn't help but laugh. I can't wait to find out whats going to happen next! Keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (too lazy to login again) On: June 28, 2004 22:35 EDT
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Heheh...nice touch with the Russian there...but you got the tense wrong, and the pronunciation. 'sabaka yibuchaya' would be more like it *nods* but that's okay, I doubt there are any Russian people/people who understand Russian reading this fic XP *whines a bit* Why'd you leave off at that part? That's almost like a cliffie! Evil! Evilevilevilevil!! Gaah! Please update? Pie...? More pie~~? who are you on devTART anyway? Hm? Who? Tell me! Pleeeeeeease? Whoa...haha...just heard a cat meowing outside my window...I don't even own one...kitty...eheh.....nyanko-chan ga hoshi~~...nyuu.....*slinks away* hissssssssssssss!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:39 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Hope you update soon :)
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 17, 2004 19:04 EDT
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OMGoth!! This way the chapter that tickled me raw w/the scene with Inu having an argument w/his dick! I was too done! I loved it! It was great! I know some guys actually do this! That scene where he goes to be punished...I didn't need to be there to feel his agony- well done- Please keep writing-
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha. Sexual frustration....I would have just called Miorku...*grins evilly* I wouldn't mind spending one sleepless night w/ him.. te he. Well please keep up the great work an update asap. I love this story soo much and can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 02:31 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Don't have anything else to say... heh.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sikaria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit! I love it pls writte more soon and thank you for making my dreams and nightmares one in the same.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 20:30 EDT
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I feel so bad for Inuyasha. Why does he think that he has to resort to that kind of self-mutilation? Maybe 500 years has warped his psyche alot. Was the Kikyo thing really that bad for him? ////////// Also, if Kagome and Inuyasha are going to stay together once they get together, will there be a way for Kagome to live as long as Inuyasha will? ////////// I hope you write a way for Kagome to help Inuyasha soon.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: June 14, 2004 13:50 EDT
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I love this story. It made me take up smoking...uhh..not really...I just had to try clove. Not bad. And I used to smoke grass so that was a plus. I never wanted fang piercings but reading this it made me want to get them. I already decide that because of anime I was going to get one fang done. I havent' changed my mind...but I love InuYasha in this story. He kicks so much ass. InuYasha sounds so cool and surpriseingly so does Kagome. I can't believe how incerditably cool he is...I would worship him like the Demon he is...ahh sooo cool...keep up the good work and please update soon...I need more to feast on!!!! Love MissNikki
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: June 10, 2004 16:07 EDT
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Another chapter to yank us in. You've teased us by revealing a bit more, I liked the torture! That Naraku is a slimey so-and-so! And I really like that you brought up the fetish about Kouga. I watched a whole segment on people who into that fetish where they dress up completely or partly as animals or stuffed toy animals. The situation w/Miroku and Sango reminds me of the flick "Chasing Amy". It works. And last (but best of all) the limey scene with Kag/Inu in the storage room. I liked it alot. The only probably is I wasn't clear that Kagome was into that spanking and that Inuyasha was aware of it until the end. Anyway, please, please update. It got harried in there and they almost got caught! But the tension and desire is there so strong. I can't wait to see how it flows hotter.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 03:52 EDT
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oh man that was hilarious. You must keep up the great work! i can't wait for the next chapter. I love your story so much. Please update asap. I'll be waiting. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: morly On: June 07, 2004 15:21 EDT
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wooo hooo a spanking from Inuyasha lucky girl! And what was up with those brownies? For some reason I thought they were laced with cannibus, but you didn't show what happened at the restaurant.
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