| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: December 09, 2004 16:40 EST
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Screams out loud...Grabs BelleDayNight by the hands and jumps up and down in pure glee while both of us hum a lulliby....giggles
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Reviewed By: Sephress On: November 28, 2004 00:42 EST
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Oh yes I finally got around to reading this and I was so happy to see all the new characters. The intro to the villians was great. I don't know why, but I love villians. Whenever we do plays or aloud reading in school, I always take the part of the villan. (I spose its my inner nature mwhahaha) But yes, plot = good. Tho I admit I missed the citrus. It's just not Tsuki-san without the lemon! keep up the awesome work, Tsuki! Sephiress
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Reviewed By: Razz On: November 24, 2004 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fan-freakin-tastic! I loved this latest chapter, and as always, I was completely sucked in by your vivid descriptions. Your take on the relationship between Shishio and Yumi was fun to read about, and I was happy for more information on what the Pack is really all about. Kenshin's role was quite interesting as well - I wasn't expecting the turn you took with him. This was a very well developted chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: twishinky-san On: November 22, 2004 19:13 EST
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Hi sweetie!!!!! another great job!!! I've been back in the philippines (i'm not new guinean... although that made me laugh quite a bit...mistaken identities?) for about a month and I'm glad you wrote updates, even if I'm still lost within my own writer's block. *sigh* I wish i could get back in the game, but these things take time... Anyway... it was a great POV... I never considered Shishio to be human, though, now that was another shocker. Take Care, dear girl :)
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Reviewed By: ...... On: November 20, 2004 14:09 EST
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I enjoyed the description of New York, but let me tell you, traffic may be bad there but nothing is compaired to California Traffic with melting ice cream in the trunk. Yeah, this was a nice little chapter, looking into the minds of the "enemies," but I feel sorry for Yumi, getting into everything...I get the feeling she doesn't want to betray either of them...almost anyway, for Aoshi's part. But I didn't get the beginning: what was going on there??? Or maybe I'm just a little confused and all...And before I forget *hug in return*.
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: November 16, 2004 11:11 EST
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And Kenshin enters the picture!!!! YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!! 'The Bloods'...? Nice name, lol! I loved it even tho there was no lemoniness....ur the best Mangetsu!
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Reviewed By: glasclach On: November 14, 2004 06:31 EST
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Thank you, and yes that was me on "Life at Saitou's Ranch." For all that Kenshin/Kaoru are my first love, I am drawn to Kaoru's alt. pairings (I blame it on RK's obscene wealth of fascinating and attractive men :). I'm so glad my comments were helpful!!! This chapter was interesting, and, I think, Shishio and Yumi are not so OOC in an AU sort of way. Well, perhaps Shishio is less competent and more pathetic, but oh well, writer's prerogative :). This background on the other side of the story will make the ending more interesting - very cool. As always (and more so than usual 'cause I miss my Aoshi and Kay!) - can't wait for more! (I'm sorry, these aren't very good comments, but between writing class and my own fanfic [scary!] my writer's brain is worn out, and apparently that affects reviewing too. Please forgive! You should've seen how excited I got when I found out it had been updated, though - I actually bounced up and down in my chair ^_^;)
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Title: Sarcastic Sympathy
Reviewed By: Sarcastic Sympathy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you don't know how happy I was when the notification of your fic update rolled into my inbox ^_^...another brilliant chapter I must say...update again soon.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 12:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written. So THATS why you were researching Yumi so much. I really like her and Shishio's relationship. This chapter really did add a whole other dynamic to the story. Bad guys hardly ever are inheritly bad, ususally just get in over their heads when greed clouds their mind. I like how Aoshi gives so many ppl second chances, but still I wonder why he 'attacked' Kaoru in the park that night. That sounds rather OOC for him to have done. It worked out well, since he's got a relationship with his victim now...but still. And Kenshin is here now! Of course your Kenshin's are always awesome!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono-baka-deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai On: November 11, 2004 15:54 EST
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God, that sounded like my first marriage!! Kenshin? kick boxer, lolol (all of a sudden Billy Banks pops into my head; aaaaa). Great chapt, we all knew that you would have to write about Shishio and Yumi; now on to the good stuff; lolol Bows in supplication catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai)
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Title: me again:)
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER On: November 11, 2004 15:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!finally!thank you sooooooooo much!i was so nervous that the story was not going to continue!but here is the next great chapter!thank you so much again!the story is getting better and better!i have nothing more to say!god bless you and update soon!:)))))))))
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Title: Awesome Writing
Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! You are an awesome writer. A reader can really get lost in the story. And believe you me whenever the story includes someone as sexy as Aoshi--getting lost in it is a good thing! Love the sex scenes. They have an original touch to them with the dialogue and thoughts that come from the characters. God, having a man like Aoshi! What a lucky girl! I am sure problems will come about- they alway do. But, I wonder where you will take the story now that they found each other and they are happy. Will an ex-girlfriend or boyfriend try to come back to they picture? Will a new interested person come into the picture causing friction? I cannot wait! Please update soon, when you have the time. =)
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Razz On: October 19, 2004 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so it's been forever since I've read fanfics to begin with ((the start of college sapped all my time.)) But for some reason, I clicked on yours and just couldn't stop reading until I finished chapter 7. It's been ages since a fic has drawn me in like that, and longer still since I've reviewed. This might actually be my second review ever. But I had to leave one to let you know how really spiffy your story is. I absolutely adore te way you have written the characters of Aoshi and Kaoru... not quite typical, but still close enough for me to really love the characters. Plus, you get high points for pulling off a serious "swoon factor". *swoons* And wow, I'm still surprised I just spent the past hour and a half of my day off from school to read a fic when I should be studying for an exam. But it was well worth it!! I sincerely hope you update soon, and I'll definately be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. This story is written extremely well, and I just can't tell you enough how much I loved it!! Just curious... is Kaoru ever going to call him "Aoishi", and is he ever going to call her "Kaoru"? That was the one question tugging at my mind all thru reading the story. Anyways, God bless, and please, please continue!!!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Land Lady O' The Universe On: October 11, 2004 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an amzing story. Its been awhile since you updated so please please plaese iupdate in the near future
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Title: update please
Reviewed By: paline On: October 08, 2004 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!i was wondering will you update soon!i i sooo whant to know is your story going to have a love triangle like misao-aoshi-kaoru?please update soon!cant wait!the story is soooooo great!thanks!
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