| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sa-chan-708 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 16:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story...keep up teh good work
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Reviewed By: tameka On: February 25, 2005 12:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH, great fic...it's the best Aoshi/Kaoru pairing i've ever read.....can't wait to see what happens with Sou and his sister..im sure their gonna bounce up with Aoshi and Kaoru....i loved how u changed up the characters to suit their scenerios, it's the best OOC i've ever come across...Your one of my fav authurs and this is just another story that has keep u on top of my list.....i started reading this story with 10 full chaps so that's how im now reviewing...on't worry i'll review again....see yuh next chap....
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: February 23, 2005 22:11 EST
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Bravo! Heh. Another very cute chapter :) The plot is advancing really well! ^^ Aww now I have to wait for another chapter to come out... That's okay though I will just have to suck it up and wait! lol I'll catcha later!
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: February 23, 2005 21:09 EST
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Hey!! Aww this was such a cute chapter! Oh hyena Misao... Well I have to go read more! Great job as always!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Oneida On: February 23, 2005 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an amazing Writer! I could not put your story down for in a minute. You have created such a great detail of character and story. I can't wait for the next chapter...and I hope it is up soon! The story has evolved in all aspects...I hope there is maybe a kidnapping of some sort...or an unplanned pregnancy. There is so much you can do with your story!...well anyways I am just rambling about stupid stuff...so Please update soon! ;)
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Title: 11 and 12
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: February 22, 2005 10:29 EST
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Great job, I love the AK love. Yeah, I don't know that Kenshin and Misao would work. How about Katsu? He's hot! I'd love to read about Katsu. Wonder if Aoshi will admit he thinks he's falling in love with Kaoru too.
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Reviewed By: ...... On: February 13, 2005 15:45 EST
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Kiddo? Well, at least it doesn't make me feel old--and its just a little over a month since I turned 18 and I feel incredibly old! Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter, especially Kaoru's confession. Will he tell her about what he feels? His thoughts from before she told him only makes one think he will--or at least try to. Will he even be able to exactly say it in the first place? And poor Misao...I hope she finds someone...and the "desert"... I am so glad you updated, my day is complete now...yeah...So...keep up the wonderful work and update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, and I feel honored. ^.^
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSuns (not logged in) On: February 12, 2005 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!!! I really love this story... OMG!!!!! lol. UPDATE DARN YOU!!! What ARE you waiting for anyway?
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Reviewed By: Blondie B-Ball Star or Blonde All Star On: February 12, 2005 12:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.. Great chap.. 2 bad media miner messed it up with the A in place of " and the @ in place of " and some other various mistakes.. thats why I personally prefer fanfiction.net… 2 bad they don't allow anything over R anymore... but even still fanfiction.net has its problems too.. darn.. why can't things can't be perfect?!? Oh yes and if I KNEW how to add u to an author alert list I would.. I know how to if u were a ffnet user (Which you are but this story is not ON ffnet so it wouldn't contact me for this particular story..) and I DO have a profile here because I did it when I wanted to review your fic.. but alas things are complicated and IF U want to be add me I guess I would need to give u my e-mail.. which I failed to do last time heh blonde_all_star_23@yahoo.com.. and IF u DO know how I can put u on an update notifier without being a media miner user (b/c sorry I'm not gonna deal with media miner for a while.. it just pissed me off THAT much) please tell me heh… ok now on to the actual review... Sano CRACKS me up... I love em... not 2 big of a fan of Misao yet.. but hey.. I know how it is u can't give em a bad rep.. I was surprised on how innocent I made Misao seem in my story.. I wanted to kill her off for even suggesting she likes Aoshi-sama heh.. well uh the dinner CUTE... I LOVED the end… Kaoru is still VERY unsure about herself.. that is priceless I love the whole work scene to where Aoshi calls… everything is just great. PLease update soon
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Title: ~This Story is Coo!~
Reviewed By: ~Soph~Lady~ On: February 10, 2005 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV dis story soooo much!!! I don't even kno how u came up wit dat. I luv how all ya characters r tight and I luv your pairings cause I am an Aoshi n Kaoru fan! I love how u made Aoshi all sly and I like how u didn't make Kaoru all goody-good like in themother stories.This story is 1 of the best I have eva read welcome to da top 10!!! U got some serious talent to be able to write like dat. Well anewayz I LUV this story n don't disappoint me in the end like if they were ta break up of somethin! Update soon...
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: February 10, 2005 11:21 EST
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Ah, stupid mediaminer format. Makes me angry! HEHEH. Oh well. Loved the chappie Mangetsu-sama. And yes, you are so evil! And Kaoru-chan at the computer sounds like me, lol! Keep it up! Love, jenni
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Title: me again:)
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello from here too!the new story is great!i reviewed at adultfanfic too!soo i have nothing more to say!hugs and kisses!update soon good luck
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Reviewed By: AngelAngel On: February 10, 2005 05:31 EST
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Yippie (a new chapter. bounces on chair) ... Do u know how many times i had to re-read this story to curb my craving for a new fic .. and it's all worth it (grins). So much passion and love(enough to set a forest on fire) : ) .... wow wow wow ... Update soon ... coz i'm dying to know how it all jells together (and i'm a sucker for A/K fics .... signs ... don't they look so dreamy together). I wonder if M/Ken will hook up somewhere down the road. Hee hee, love the way you are placing more and more of the characters into the storyline. PS : Thanks for the tenshi comment, i so like angels tooo (hint hint as u can tell from the name). Must say, you're truely a angel of RK fic ... (grins). PSS : Keep up to excellent story writing. I so look forward to you next chapter ... (sucks i lied, i'm soooo looking forward to THE WHOLE & COMPLETE STORY n what other RK stories that comes out of your wonderful mind). Wah i'm addicted to RK stories now!!! .... Update update.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: February 09, 2005 18:29 EST
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Shin-yuu....We have added Soujiro to the mix....hmmm...wonder who he is going to try and steel from??? Laughs....hmmm.... wonder who is going to hook up with in the near future....laughs....wondered since you got quite a few flames with the last chapter...giggles....oooh did I give away too much??? By the way whats up with the formating??? catti (I know, I know dialogue, dialogue, dialogue)
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Reviewed By: Dark Moon Queen On: February 07, 2005 13:31 EST
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this is a good fic hurry and finish pls
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