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Title: chapter 15 Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: November 13, 2005 12:53 EST Comment/Review: Well thats sad at the end about Misao not letting Kenshin in. She really is a brat! I knew Yumi would do the right thing! Er...sort of. Naturally I enjoyed the Aoshi/Kaoru scene more than I should have. =)
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Title: Chapter 14 Reviewed By: belledaynight (not signed in) On: November 13, 2005 12:35 EST Comment/Review: So...I bet your husband is really enjoying all the 'inspiration' for this story. Don't forget to go back and unbold the last section of this story. And I'm actually growing quite partial to the Kenshin/Misao pairing... And Aoshi still rocks.
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Title: KEEP WRITINGGGG Reviewed By: Sa-chan-708 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 21:33 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ohhmyyy goddd you are AMAZINGGGG when i got the email saying you updated i practically died with joy andteh 2 chapter have been aweeeeeeesome i've passed yoru story to almost everyone i know who can take nc-17 and i started writing and my fav compliment if all time was "dude you write like Mangetsu" that was oen of teh greatest moments of all time not im having writers block but i think im coming out of it thanks to yoru chap can i just say the kenshin outside teh door thing was so unexpected i ket rereading it and going OMGGGGG THATS SOO CUTTEEE *dies* i admire you man i sound liek a crazy stalker haha.. im not..trust me Sarah-Chan
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: October 28, 2005 14:07 EDT Comment/Review: AHHH! So sorry I've been gone Mangetsu-sama! Computy problems have been driving me mad. I read all the chapters I've missed in the past couple hours, and PHEW what a ride! I hope to God that Shishio won't get his hands on Aoshi and Ken. And what a brave move by Yumi! Can't wait for more Mangetsu! Love, Your Jenni Girl
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Title: HI THERE!!! Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:34 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As usual another totally beyong magnificent chapter. I hope all is well with you and all us reader are readily awaiting all that you still have up your sleeve for this story. Thank you soooo much for writing such a wonderful piece. Take care...your 150 review fann!!! woohoo!!! ^0^!!
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Reviewed By: the evil one On: October 23, 2005 05:21 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: okay the reason i gave those ratings is because this is the first fanfic that i have ever read and wanted to continue it. it never bored me and i love the way you write it. if maybe you can email me when you have a new chapter up. ripleyhoward@hotmail.com please. if not thats okay as well. hope your doin okay and thanks for such a good story. I thourghly enjoy every word of it.
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Title: catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai) Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 01:57 EDT Comment/Review: Poor Kenshin and Misao....Poor Kenshin can never cut a break....Was not expecting Misao to act like that though...who would have thought...laughs....love this story but I think you already know that....
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Title: Untitled Reviewed By: cede On: September 08, 2005 13:24 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Iluv this story i read it over and over again, i was one of da people who read it since it was written, please update, i check back every now n then 2 see if you did. U left us wanting more, please please pplleeaassee update! Lubb ~Cede
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Reviewed By: msky On: August 23, 2005 08:22 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ooohhhhhhhhhhh! I love this fic. I also think it's hlarious how u paired aoushi with karou and kenshin with misao. i love kenshin's and aoushi's sarcastic bad boy characters. BTW, can saitou make an appearance puhleees? (puppy eyes) ORO! LOL, update soon!
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Title: write update Reviewed By: allleeezzzzzz On: August 11, 2005 17:28 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yayayayayayayyayayayayayayayayay i luv your story.......geuss wat its in my favourites..pwleeze keep on writing its the first kenshin fan fic i read and i really like it..yay...lol
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Reviewed By: Blood_fae On: July 29, 2005 03:50 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy this story. The characters are fun an interesting, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 02:59 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. The fifth chapter was the last time, I think. Sorry! But my computer died, and so we got a new one, then all sorts of stuff happened (family issues, but we're dealing) and I completely forgot about this entire site, let alone this story. But I'm back and I have to say that I absolutely love the recent chapters (for me, that would be chapter 6 and up, lol). Your work is excellent, as always, and I really hope you are able to get another chapter out soon. Sorry for the short review, but it's 3 in the morning so I've already stayed up way later than I should have reading this, and I have a huge, really important End of Course Test tomorrow (today?) that is 15% of my grade. (It's summer school. The family issues messed with my grades, and Biology is a difficult subject for me anyways and so I managed to fail. *sigh*) Whoops, I'm blabbering on and on and I really need to go do my homework and then get some sleep. Again, it was wonderful reading your work and I hope you can update soon!
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Reviewed By: garbage On: May 28, 2005 11:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: gosh, i have'nt read a fic that is so close to reality yet very chimerical. keep up the good work.
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Title: WOW!!! Reviewed By: AngelAngel On: May 14, 2005 13:19 EDT Comment/Review: Rather deep this chapter is ... you're keeping me on the edge of my seat with the plot. Looking forward to your next chapter. All the best and many blessing to you & your family. Take care : )
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Title: Chapter 13=GREAT!!! Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:13 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the new chapter....I had a feeling that was going to happen with Sou and Nina. Anyway, still loving your story and my heart goes out to you and your family!!! Take care!!!
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