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 Title: pelen
Reviewed By: plexesfics [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2004 06:11 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the story is great!keep up the good work!update soon please!please please!
 Reviewed By: Loves all things Chocolate  On: August 21, 2004 00:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm usually a die hard Aoshi/Misao fan but I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story. I look forward to reading more.
 Reviewed By: twishinky [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2004 00:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aieeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! not only a cliffie, but a sexy cliffie?!!! Great update, but cruel... cruel!!!! Hehehe... it leaves me hanging on to the next update... but it a great coming home present (just got in last night from Hong Kong). Never go there during tourist summer season... its a mess!!! ok, enough about that, so take care and love you! update soon...
 Title: catti-dono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2004 22:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
We all have your fantasies, mine is Kauro and Saitou, Misao and Megumi (but thats for another time), and Yahiko getting the Sakabatou rammed up his you know what, sorry I do not like Yahiko, he is such a brat!!Mou!!! Anyway, see what I mean you already have 30+ reviews alone on this story; why because it is soooo damn good!!! This chapter was really deep, if you know what I mean!!I dont mind, though, because I love you very much Magnetsu!!! Your the best keep it up Bangs forehead on floor until it bleeds catti
 Reviewed By: ......  On: August 20, 2004 19:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
You updated! Yes! This chapter offered alot into their relationship, hasn't it? With both of them being afraid of having their hearts broken and all. It was rather sweet, and I hope Hawke/Aoshi gets his energy back soon. I also hope that Misao and Aoshi get off on the right foot in the morning. And I hope you update soon, please update soon. Pretty please with a cherry on top? Keep up the wonderful work and update soon (I just can't leave that alone, can ? ^.^)!
 Title: super
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER  On: August 20, 2004 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thank you sooooooooo much!This chapter is also a great one!thank you so much for continueing this story!and you are really turning me into A/K fan!thank you for the chapter!i hope that the next will come sooner than this one!please update soon!
 Reviewed By: paline  On: August 20, 2004 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What do you mean?Why wont you continue?It would be a shame not finishing the story!you are great autor!you story is great and i beg you to continue!please please please!
 Title: update!
Reviewed By: blueberrylove  On: August 20, 2004 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story!update soon please!
 Title: i love it!
Reviewed By: Kres  On: August 20, 2004 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh please update soon!cant wait for the next chapter!update update update update update!
 Reviewed By: blackshadowz  On: August 15, 2004 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love ur fic. keep on writing, please. love Aoshi and Kaoru in this fic so dont stop writing. ciao :D
 Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER  On: August 15, 2004 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh please please please update the story!I like it so much!After i read the story i became fan of the Aoshi/Kaoru pairing!So please update!I cant wait!I check every hour when Im on the computer if the next chapter is here!Please dont delay too long!Im sure that many people love your story but they are too lazy to push the review button!They are just like me!I hope you will forgive me and update soon!Thanks again for the incredible story!OK enough with my blabing!I PROMISE THAT I WILL REVIEW YOUR NEXT CHAPTER WITHOUT DELAY!THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR EVEN READING THIS BULLSHITS!BYE!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2004 19:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA; I WAS RIGHT YES; ITS AOSHI!!!! DAMN GIRLFRIEND WE THINK SO MUCH ALIKE, sorry had to do the caps for that....yesyesyesyes.... you know you have to continue this story!!!!!!the only reason you are not getting the reviews is because we only know you as Tsuki-sama on AAF.net and not Mangetsu of media... We love you, please do not leave us hanging....if AFF ever comes back online bring this story over and you will get the raving reviews that you love....well except for the K&K fans you know them....their so hard to sway over...I still have fantasies about Kauro and Saitou, giggles evilly, dodges thrown fruit catti
 Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2004 19:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Mangetsu-sama sensi: Gashi, shin-yuu why was it when reading this chapter the theme song from Pretty Woman kept going through my head, aaaaaahhhhhhaaahhh... (giggles and starts humming Pretty Woman).. I really like this story, but am still waiting for Hawke to rinse the dark hair coloring out (giggles again) I see RED roots.... Bows to hide her giggles... catti
 Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2004 18:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
Mangetsu-sama sensi: Wait, wait, wait!! How come you did not make the "Hawk" Kenshin??? Who is this dark haired man, if you had described blue eyes, I would have thought maybe Aoshi(giggles evily, I LIKE Aoshi!!). Good writing, though, I am going to keep reading. Bows and blushes (I like the park scene, so naughty) catti
 Reviewed By: Some Person  On: August 13, 2004 18:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow... This was a great story!! I loved it so far... It actually has a really nice plotline which makes for an enjoyable read. Plus it's partly angsty which just makes it all the better. I hope you update this fic soon.. Please say you will.
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