| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Title: Beautiful Miscommunications
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 01:39 EST
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Yay for an update......I would type more but I'm going to bed now^^
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Reviewed By: Roane On: March 14, 2005 22:42 EST
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Whew, I've read the next chapter as well. The mural kind've left me hanging there, but it all sounds very interesting. And Kagura... and Sesshoumaru's house... ^_^ Good stuff. I hope that road block works out for you! Update soon? ^.~ ~Roane
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 14, 2005 18:29 EST
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Excellent chpater. Sorry about the question, like I said I don't think I've seen the episode with them ebcause to date I can't recall any twins...might be my memory though... Well, Inuyasha and Kagome are getting closer, Sango is at risk, Sesshomaru is trying to claim Kagura and the rest fo the world is shot to hell...I look forwards to seeing what comes next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 14, 2005 17:32 EST
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I was surprised that a bunch of you didn't bother with the question. Generally I don't ask many plot questions because I like to simply see where the author is going to take me - so I try to keep my comments to clarification questions and fawning. This comment is all about the fawning. I hope you don't stay blocked too long because I really do enjoy your story and my mind is ablaze with curiousity over the many different plots you have going on.
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Title: Nani?
Reviewed By: Miroku 1 On: March 14, 2005 17:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter. It was good I liked it a lot. I got really confused at some parts because of the grammar mistakes, but other than that it was good. Ok I am sooooooo confused about the last paragraph. What happened? I just don't understand what happened. *pouts* I didn't ask anything for the last chapter b/c u said you would answer questions of the 1st three people who reviewed first on mm and ff...I wasn't one of the first. Still loved it though. Hope to hear from you soon. Curses they won't let me in again. I'm 1 Miroku by the way. *sigh*
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Another chapter.^_^ It was a really good one too. *smile* *pout* that was bipolar. ^_^;; it no fair I just found out today that you updated. O well I love you anyways. Happy you updated. Can't wait to see what happpens next. *hugs* Chow!!
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Title: Beautiful Miscommunications
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 20:09 EST
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Wow..Kagura has no heart. I didn't see that coming. This'll sound bad but WHEN IS THE LEMON!?!! Not that the story needs one, it's just that it'll be 10x better with one(in my opinion). I'm glad you update so often^^ Now if only some other authors would follow your example.....
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 18:44 EST
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I'm so glad Kagura didnt die! Awsome chapter I'm so glad you updated! YAY!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATEING!!!!! I cant wait for the next chapter...cant...but I must! I must wait! NOOOOOO!Uhhg, my cat has her butt in my face...I have to go feed her...bye bye!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 08, 2005 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no questions here just wonderful comments =D great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: ~A~ On: March 08, 2005 15:35 EST
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I guess I'm not the first to review, but whatever. Your story is so good! Complicated plot, lots of mystery and well written, and a nice amount of romance without deteriorating into PWP. I have read a lot of fanfics and I have to say I think this is a truly original idea. You also did a very good job of translating the characters into AU. Seriously, I love your story, if it was a book I would buy it. I only wish you could update more! ;_; Anyway, in conclusion, I love it, it's good, please update soon! ^_^ ding
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Reviewed By: Roane On: March 08, 2005 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Whew, finally caught up with you again. If you've been taking long breaks, I've been taking longer. Must work on my reading time, I don't have enough. Anyway! This story is so good! :) I enjoy all of the elements, and I'm having such a ball with the fact that it's SOOO involved, makes me sit there and have a try at picking out all of the answers. Not that I'm getting very far... ^.^;; And you had me going for a chapter! Grr! I thought you had killed Kagura!! My favorite character!! But... the fact that Inuyasha kept saying 'she's been shot' not 'she's been killed' kind've made me suspicious, so when she moved, I was not too surprised, though definitely happy. Yay, more Sesshy/Kagura moments, always my favorite in all of your stories. Please keep up the good work! I'll try to keep reading more often as time permits! ~ Roane
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 08, 2005 12:30 EST
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Excellent chapter. Glad to hear the writers block receeded. I have to agree that scene was a perfect place to close the chapter, leaves just the right amount of suspense. To be honest I can't off hand recall any twins in the anime...at least as yet. I think I might need to watch more of it... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! It took about a month, but hey, atleast you updated. It was worth it!! ^_^ I like the way it was written. My fav chapter really. There were so many cliffhangers. I love it. For some very strange reason I found it funny when Kagura was announced dead though. *shurgs* ^_^ Just don't make me wait that long *glare* just kidding I love you. Hope to hear from you soon. BTW this is the 1 Miroku who is a member on this site. For some strange reason they I'm not being allowed to sign in and review. Oh well I still did. I loved it. Hope to hear from you soon. Sorry about you being overloaded with work and whatnot. *hugs* Thats about as helpful and I can be really. *shurgs* ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 14:36 EST
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Woo-hoo! That was an absolutely AWSOME chapter! So much suspense though! I really want to know, most of all, who exactly the twins are?! Well, anyway, please update again when you can, your fabulous plot and story in general is very captivating and I really need more...:) MUST HAVE MORE!! (When you have time that is...rushing could be very bad for the plot.)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 14:36 EST
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Woo-hoo! That was an absolutely AWSOME chapter! So much suspense though! I really want to know, most of all, who exactly the twins are?! Well, anyway, please update again when you can, your fabulous plot and story in general is very captivating and I really need more...:) MUST HAVE MORE!! (When you have time that is...rushing could be very bad for the plot.)
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