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Title: Meow!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say you are improving on your writing style so much. *sniff* *sniff* They grow up so fast. You write so much more detailed fics. Though I am sad to say that it is a bitter sweet moment. Why? O_O I...I... I wasn't ready for a lime/lemon scene yet!! But it was still good. So whatever, as you know you rock! I am seriously proud of you, although it sounds stupid, I seriously am. Unlike in The Ad, you are showing character developement. You are showing their relationship developement too, and what-not. Yea! I think you get it. Well anyways, I love you and you rock. Can't wait for the next chappy! ^_^ P.S. School is seriously a killer.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so we can assume that Sesshoumaru has claimed Kagura, now how long will it take for Inuyasha and Kagome to work things out?
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 18, 2004 17:50 EDT
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Absolutely fantastic chapter! Sorry, work is getting to be a pain, big project coming up so time is limited...^_^; I have to say the moment with Kagome hoping for her knight in shining armour and Inuyasha showing up almost had me in tears, that was very very funny! Excellent moments between Sango and Miroku, nice to see their relationship progressing so well... Sesshomaru and Kagura...I just knew it was coming. Nice way to keep them busy while someone infiltrates the building, wonder what will happen if daddy finds out... Ok, got to go. Sorry all the reviews won't be this long, or longer...not much of a thank you for all your hard work is it? Sorry. On a final note, still stick in the ladies dressing room from the other story, haven't made it back to this one. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot whether or not I reviewed your story before. Great story. I like the plot alot.
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Title: excellent!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:14 EDT
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Oh, that was good! Too bad you didn't elaborate on the motorcycle with InuYasha. I can't wait to read more Inu/Kag fun.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:05 EDT
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well... (fans self) that scene could certainly have been more citrusy. although i did enjoy the beginning of it. i hope for a little more detail, ne? i love this story and i can't wait for more between inu and kago-chan. (panting) inuyasha... on a motorcycle wearing leather.... (thoughts wonder off...)
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Reviewed By: skne On: October 18, 2004 15:32 EDT
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Marvelous, quite marvelous. I'm loving the relationship between Miroku and Sango. Also, Inu Yash is quite adorable (although, is there ever a time he isn't?). Well written as always. Looking forward to the next Chap.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 18, 2004 15:26 EDT
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Love it!!!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 15:10 EDT
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"Now Sango, you have spent the entire day following me around. It's obvious you've been trying to work up enough courage to ask me to dinner, so I'm going to make it easy on you." That line had me falling out of my seat laughing! *Grr* for the cliffie though - that was just cruel! That scene was hot and to cut it off like that ... I haven't the words!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 13, 2004 23:26 EDT
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serious lime duh =P tho if its a really good cliffie then that too...as long as u update soon lol =D great chapter. i adore the story!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 13, 2004 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so addicting! like The Ad!!! ahhh! hahahah i absolutely love your story if you can't tell... you never dissapoint me! i'm so happy =] >hands pocky< hmmmm and you put... Ch. 3: The Kidnap ... when it's suposed to be Ch. 4: The Kidnap by the way. awsome chapter! i'd rather have.... a serious lime! hahaha i can't wait for chapter 5!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the plot. Very interesting. Keep the updates comin'...
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 13, 2004 19:16 EDT
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Sorry, I appear to have developed a Ryoga like sense of direction and am presently unable to find my way out...so it's not just because of the girls ^_^ Excellent chapter! The little moments between Kagome and Inuyasha and Miroku and Sango were perfect. I can't help but wonder if and when their relationships will go further. I suspect that Kagome isn't just a reporter...that last part already raised suspicions as to her other occupation... Cliffhanger...hmmm...well there do seem to be a lot of them but it does make the story more fun. With regards to a hint of lime, depends on who's involved. Look forwards to the next chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love the story and all the rest of them that you have written. I'm getting used to mm.org I'm used to reviewing to you on ff.net. Anyways, I have to say that you rock! I just love your writing style, its so awesome. You would make Rumiko Takahashi proud. *tears* Oh yea! It was her b-day on sunday, if you care. Just to let you know I am not ready for one of your limes or lemons just yet, they are awesome and all but I am still recovering from the honeymoon of Inu and Kag from one of your other fic The Ad. It was awesome but I am still recovering from the...limes/lemons. Your great so hugs to you. P.S.Just to let you know you write off when you mean of and of when you mean off sometimes.
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Title: hi!;P
Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: October 13, 2004 18:54 EDT
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I love it! This is one of the best; dramatic, authentic, a rockrolling story that twists and turns like its in the climax, though its just beginning. I hardly got a chance to pause for breath. please update soon, and I would like both please...if not, go with the cliffhanger, their better. rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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