| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Great story, interesting plot... *is grinning insanely* I loved how you had Kagome thinking that Sango was Miroku's new boyfriend... so, so amusing! :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 11, 2004 18:56 EDT
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Excellent chapter! Really love how this is developing. Never would have expected the killer to be after Kagome, I expect that will be the first of many twists...like Miroku being Kagome's brother. One more thing...Sesshomaru is married? But to who? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza *Rushes off in the direction of wardrobe*
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HER BROTHER!? wow that's new! Never read a fic with them related. I like it! I can picture Kagome as a reported too, she's usually very nosy but has a big heart so could do all the sweet/sad documentaries. Love the fact you added real life events!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 18:07 EDT
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update soon! i love this story and i can't wait for you to update again! i love the whole twist and it makes sense now why miroku is always with kagome, ne? but she's got to be lying. or is she! cliffies and twists! update soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: caxXxEllExXxny On: October 11, 2004 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I have read many of you fanfics and truly enjoyed all of them. Although this storyline has been used by many, I know that you usually will twist something up to stand out from the rest, establishing your uniqueness and your ability to hook readers to your story. The way you write interests people to keep on reading, it is not long and boring dragging along every component of the story, but it flows and is kept in a steady pace. It is also written in a way that most people could understand. Great story, keep on writing (can't wait for the next chapter)!!!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't give you a ten on the enjoyment factor only because I just started reading and it can change any time. I have always liked your stories and writing style so I am really looking forward to how this story goes.
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 12:31 EDT
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Fun! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 07, 2004 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i'm hooked onto this story! >SMILES REALLY BIG< i really love your stories! all your stories are classics! =] the chapter wasn't that short compared to many other stories... you never dissapoint me! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:31 EDT
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way more than love the begining of this story. good job, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 07, 2004 18:54 EDT
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Interesting start, like how this works so far although I'm a little worried about the remark involving guys in tight pants...how about some women in tight pants for the guys? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: minasraye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 18:11 EDT
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i enjoyed this chapter. it was a good start and i am most certainly intrigued. i can't wait to see what you have to do with this one, i'm very interested. please, update soon! ja ne! ~hanyou-elf
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: October 07, 2004 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea. I loved the elevator scene...I thought it was cute and hilarious at the same time. But then again....i'm weird too. :) I love the idea, and I love your fics to death, so I'm looking forward to more from this fic. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: okibi_usagi On: October 07, 2004 15:06 EDT
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to funny update soon please verry interesting
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 07, 2004 15:01 EDT
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wonderful!!! bit confusing but i love it =D
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Title: Hell Raiser
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 13:49 EDT
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Awesome! I love your other pieces and this one is set to be killer. There were some minor grammatical/spelling errors that a dedicated beta reader or editor would find in a heartbeat. Thank you for sharing your work. :) Joy
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