| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: June 01, 2005 19:51 EDT
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Wow! I totally guessed right about Miroku and Kagome, although I was uncertain since I thought there was a reference to them protecting Kagome or something....anyway. I'd be MORE than happy to be your beta! =) Let me know, my AIM is PrncessS2 and my email is PrncessS85@aol.com And of course, great chapter. Hope you can update soon and end the cliffie!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 17:30 EDT
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Very interesting plot twist. I agree with you about how there are so few stories where kagome is the one that screws up the relationship with inu yasha. One question, who is Chikai? Is she just a character that you put in that is playing a minor role? Was it Sesshomaru's house that was evacuated? Nevermind, i'll just go back and reread. I'd be happy to help beta. i'm over 17 and don't mind mature stories, my e-mail is jazzytrombone@hotmail.com just e-mail me back and then i'll respond as soon as i can. oh, ignore all bad grammar in this review, i'm lazy. great job hun. looking forward to the next chapter
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Title: Beautiful Miscommunications
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 21:21 EDT
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YAY! AN UPDATE! I loved this chapter. I love anything lemony ^^I cannot wait to see who the twins are. I would guess, but I'd porbably be way off and make myself look like an idiot...
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Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! another update...i have a guess on who are who are the twins and i think i sent an email to you regardin it...hope u reply interesting chapter
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy the interaction between sess and kagura so much. they are just something else! i like that kagura is so feisty. i hope she gets her heart soon. and i think i want to guess on who the twins are. i'm probably wrong and sooo off the mark, but is it mir and kag? i mean who else could it be? oh well, hurray for kouga. he's all better, and gonna go kick some @$$. there wasn't too much on inu and kag in this chap., but they sure seem to be getting (closer). hehe. btw. i like being notified of your updates the way i have been. a journal would be cool, but i wont lie. i know almost nothing when it comes to my computer. i'm not sure of all the alternatives that are out there. thats why i have my husband do it all for me! ^_* i'll learn one day.
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Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 08:44 EDT
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Yeah, you finally updated. I'm so happyy!!! So just keep updating your great story!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 26, 2005 01:52 EDT
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great update! love it!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 01:23 EDT
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this recent chapter was a bit confusing. Also, a few times you jumped ahead too quickly instead of explaining things in a way that would have allowed a smoother transition. Remember that detail is only important when needed. Some of the scenes definitely needed more detail in describing the actions of the characters. Also, watch for grammatical errors. Other than that, well done. Looking forward to the next chapter. sorry about your ex. DC is fun, isn't it? I live not too far away. though I do try to avoid DC. traffic and whatnot.
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Title: aaaaaaah!
Reviewed By: fudge On: May 17, 2005 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.M.G. I know you are not the kind to dissapoint! Sooooo please update soon! your story is so good. Keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: Netsui [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 22:04 EDT
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I love it! take your time with the updating if you are troubled. Its so awesome!
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Reviewed By: Animegrl02 On: May 15, 2005 16:31 EDT
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Thats like the best story I have ever read and im sorry to hear about your troubles, take your time with updating
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: whoknoez On: May 12, 2005 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story, and it's so original! I loved reading it, and it was a beautifully written work. It all flows together so nicely, and I hope things work out for you and your boyfriend, and the physical and all that. I'm sorry it's been going so badly for you, but believe me when I say there's always something worse, and you should be glad that the worse isn't happening. Of course, if I were you, I would be throwing things into the walls and screaming things about an unfair life. But still... It's not a bad thing to remember all the good things... if that makes sense. Hope everything turns out okay for you!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (not logged in) On: April 23, 2005 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awsome chapter! :) I loved it, even with all the drama! :) I was surprised though that Myoga thought that Kagome was somehow involved with everything...stupid flea. Anyway, loved everything! Keep up the good work and I hope everything turns out alright for you. Try and think positive, if you can.
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Title: chapter 20
Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, I absolutely love this fic, it keeps getting better and better
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just found your story and have been reading it non stop. i had to tear myself away to leave you this review. i swear it's like reading a novel or something! you are so talented. there are only a handful of good stories on this site and you are in the top 5. please continue this story. i love it.
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