| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: I'm not a member but they won't allow me to use my name?! On: November 08, 2004 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't kill Kagome and leave her dead! I am really enjoying this fic so far, but I am also a sucker for happy endings. You can have angst and good endings at the same time. It's possible! Anywho, thank you for writing yet another high quality, hear-pounding fanfic. I eagerly await your next update whenever it comes. ^_^
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 18:56 EST
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i love your story! i am so glad that i found it! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 09:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why does she have to die!!!!! Your so mean sometimes. I really like your story though, i love it when they bicker playfully. I am still waiting for that kiss!! I figure Inuyasha's just going to break down and kiss her sooner than later. (hint, hint, wink, wink)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 02, 2004 18:34 EST
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Excellent chapter. Like the way you are setting out the various couples, be interesting to see if love can truely blossom in such a dark and stormy environment. Good luck with the GRE's (sorry, but I don't actually know what they are ^_^;). Hope Meche recovers soon, please send my best wishes. Ok, dangerous ground here...as being myself a guy in the age range of 22-26 (although whether I am good or not is open to discussion) I would say that most of them are either in a relationship (as two of my friends are) or still looking for the right woman or horribly tormented by a seemingly near ending supply of work...(^_^;) But seriously, I am sure there is someone outthere, just have to keep looking... Ok, moving swiftly on I better finish now, lest I dig a bigger hole for myself to be burried in...^_^; Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I would just like to say that, that Don Juan name looked soo formiliar. Next, its so sad that you have to go but good luck getting your degree. I feel so sorry for Miroku though, with the whole lonliness thingy. I know how he feels. *tear* ^_^ oh well life must go on. Their probably are some good guys out there but until I find one I'm alone. *sigh* See u in two weeks I'm gonna go read your new summary.
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Reviewed By: Wren On: November 02, 2004 12:57 EST
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You're turning me into a huge Kagura/Sess fan. At this point it seems weird for either of them to be with anyone else. Keep it up. Wren
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Reviewed By: great job! On: November 02, 2004 10:13 EST
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i love your story. i'm sad that you won't be able to update for two weeks. what'll i do in the mean time? hope things go well!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 09:14 EST
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2 weeks?! E'gast! I don't know if I will be able to handle it!!*sigh* I suppose the GRE is important though. ;) Good luck on it! Oh and Fantastic Chapter too!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: November 02, 2004 06:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 15:48 EDT
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another wonderful chapter to incite the imagination of the reader. good job and keep this story going. i can't wait to read the next chapter! update soon! although, if i may make a small suggestion, i noticed quite a few grammer and spelling mistakes (english major, kills me all the time!) i would suggest doing a read over before posting. (reading it aloud as it is written) great chapter. *pouting and whining* don't kill kagome!
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: October 27, 2004 02:39 EDT
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Great chapter, I love the buildup of tension and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 01:43 EDT
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Fantastic chapter as always! I have to put my vote in for Kagome coming back to life ... maybe it is from the series but I have trouble watching Inu Yasha suffer such a loss - I feel like he has already been through so much. I know that in your story he hasn't led the same life ... but the feeling still lingers. Also, I feel that people who are "protective" tend to suffer a great deal when someone in their care falls to harm. Or maybe I am just a "softie" that likes happy endings ... who knows!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 00:11 EDT
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Awwww, you cut it off. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Title: another great fic! ^_^
Reviewed By: smittin kittin (nlo) On: October 26, 2004 23:56 EDT
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What can i say...ur writing another amazing story! i'm intrigued by the layers of this fic & love how complex ur making the characters. as a reader it's nice 2 see depth of characters Kagura is especially interesting possibly because she is such an underanalysed character. thanks 4 the long chap! can't wait 4 the next update! smooches kittin!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 26, 2004 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo a kiss! it's not going to have some person ruining right in the begining of the chapter is it?? hahaha well i understand how the kagome thing wasn't a threat and you have a reason... hmmm i'd vote for kagome staying alive! aka miraculously coming back to life :P awsome chapter again! brings up the urge to read the next chapter..... love your story!!!
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