| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Second chapter in a row. I liked this one better than the last one. It had the humor,with pretty much everything else. It was good. I'm going to take a wild stab in the dark and say the lime/lemon is going to be between either kag/inu or sess/kagura....more than likely its going to be with kag/inu. I like the whole Jaken slurpping part where Kagura wants to stick the spoon down his throat. That was funny. ^_^ Also the whole Jakotsu part. That was funny too. Poor Sango-chan. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 02:16 EST
Comment/Review:
keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 25, 2005 23:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=O aw i'm really sorry to hear about your wrists. i hope you get better soon =) thanks for the chapter =D
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Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: March 25, 2005 22:42 EST
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OH! EVIL, EVIL, EVIL! That is a wicked cliffie for the weekend wait. Oh my, Sess finally got it! Way to go Sess! Keep it coming... I really enjoy this story! Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 25, 2005 20:09 EST
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That was an excellent chapter. However, as you sound like you are getting repetitive strain injury, not a good thing at all...don't worry about the update...I don't know how to say this...don't injure yourself on our account. I think I better stop now before I tie myself in bigger knots. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Beautiful Miscommunications
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata(nsi) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 18:41 EST
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Wow....that ending was just BRUTAL. I totally thought there would be a lemon between Inuyasha and Kagome o.0
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Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:57 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Absolutly amazing!! i've been reading ur stories for a long time and just love them all!! keep up the awesome work and i hope this review will encourage u to update soon!! :D
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo! Poor inuyasha! Please tell me he's alright! Well, I did like the scenes between Kagura and Sesshoumaru-sama! YAY! *grabs her money and walks away*
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_- *sigh* not a lime/lemon...I could not read it but I don't want to go on ff.net. Oh well... Yay for the update happy to read it...yea I've been missing for a while but glad I came back when I did cause now I have two chapters to read. Yay!! On to chapter 17.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 13:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o MY GOSH THIS STORY IS SO GOOD
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Reviewed By: DragonFlyHuntress On: March 23, 2005 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to tell you this, please don't get mad. YOU ARE A HELL OF A WRITER!!! I love your stories and please plese update real soon!!! SOON!!
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Title: Beautiful Miscommunications
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 15:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 22:41 EST
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Very exciting chapter! I particularly enjoyed the scene with Miroku, Sango and Jakotsu. Shippou was good, too. I'm hoping for Inuyasha/Kagome fluff, etc in the next chapter.
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Title: I'm a gammbling girl
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 21:43 EST
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I'm gonna side with Hououza on the guesses. Just cuz I didnt see such a development between Miroku and Sango(course this last event kinda took a leap) A) Kagura is in Sesshoumaru-sama's house B) Kagome never made it out of the room. So yeah...*throws down cash* This much on shess/kagura!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000(not signed in) On: March 22, 2005 21:24 EST
Comment/Review:
I love your story oooh i cant wit 2 see the next chapter
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