| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: *~ Ebony Rose ~* On: April 15, 2005 03:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil! Absolutely evil! If only Sesshoumaru and Rin could talk to you about the way you keep teasing them. First you keep them from consumating their relationship by constant interruptionz, then when they finally get to be alone, Rin's mental health gets in the way, THEN when it seems that she is momentarily distracted from her mental problem, you have them interrupted again! That is pure evil! BUT, it makes for a great fanfic. Loving every chapter so far! This one was really adorable, but it was such a teaser! Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you feel better, sorry about your loss. Till Next Time . . . *~Ebony Rose ~*
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: InuHanyou480 On: April 13, 2005 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is my first time to review but i wanted to read all that you had goten posted before i reviewed. i love the story. though i like to point out i may not know a bunch about the two medicines that the "good" doctor is giving Rim but i'm sure that they could easily kill her. if not then put her in a deep coma like sleep.
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Title: valcors
Reviewed By: valcors [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful tale please update not continuing would be a crime
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Title: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Reviewed By: essie2 On: April 13, 2005 12:01 EDT
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man iwas lokking all over this story well i found now this is great update when you can.And sorry for your loss.
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Title: FLUFF!!! awwww....
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Sess and Rin, but still alot of good fluff. NIce character development on Ryen's part NE who keep up the spectacular work.
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Title: a sympathetic note
Reviewed By: sexymama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so sry for ur lose and i hope u feel better! :tears and hugs: loved ur chap like always but i hope u talk about kag and inu next time cause they're my fav. buo bye now!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragonman On: April 12, 2005 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad I could come up with a decent idea. I'm beginning to see a window idea with Rin. Naraku put a big "spiderweb" (lol) crack right in the middle, and now the doctor is breaking the leftover pieces, one by one, while Sesshomaru tapes and glues the pieces back together. Can't wait to see what Ryen digs up on Yamaoto and what happens if you decide to go with the Kagome & Jakotsu talking idea. Also want to see what Inuyasha's doing now. How many other side memories that you haven't mentioned before (or only very briefly) are you going to go through before he comes back? You don't have to answer that or anything, I'm just a little antsy. The stuff is interesting, but the wait for more kag/inu action is a little frustrating. Unlike books, I can't just keep reading a fanfic to the end, I have to stop where the writer does, so it happens to me alot
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Reviewed By: rhiara_123@hotmail.com On: April 12, 2005 12:16 EDT
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Heya, very nice chappy.... lol, thanks for the reply, too! Are you hinting you want another beta?? Cos I would love to. I am soooo obsessive about spelling and grammar it would be a PLEASURE to beta your chappies!! or any other story, or even assignments if you need it. Also, any questions you have on japanese school/life if you need it for another story feel free to ask.
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(too lay-z to sign in) On: April 12, 2005 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe way to go on the chappy girl, very kawaii, i know what you mean about using the inu cast in projects, i did that for an english paper, man ppl just dont get it. grr oh well keep them chappy's comin k i need more, definately addicting
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Title: can't wait for the next update
Reviewed By: sadsoul On: April 10, 2005 22:58 EDT
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Why do you have torture Rin and Sess like that :( This will only end up in more misery... and angst. And let's point out everything they are going through and they haven't even been going out for a month :( The sad thing is Sess picked this doctor.
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Reviewed By: Dragonman On: April 07, 2005 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew she had to be evil (I've been reading, but it took me forever to find the stupid review button) That doctor was just too nice to fit into this story. It seems like the only reliable people in the story are the main characters of the anime. Everyone else is corrupt or evil. The doctor's messages to Rin and Sesshomaru were clever. She's beginning to make Rin think Sess might not love her and is forcing Sess to back off. But then again, it would take a decently clever trick to trick Sess. I just hope he talks to Rin and realizes it before she screws up Rin even more. And how much you wanna bet that Rin's "meds" are indeed the drugs Sess said they are? And I mean real drugs, not medical ones. Interesting idea with InuYasha. Would love to hear another of Kagome's "talks" with Jakotsu over Inu's phone. Lots of directions you could go with that. Need to see what happens next. (btw, if anyone else is using the name I put, oh well. Just tell me and I'll use a different one)
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Reviewed By: Rhiara On: April 07, 2005 05:33 EDT
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YAY, update! hehehehehe, I told you the Doc was evil! I dunno who she is, tho... :'( how sad, I love Pocky!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: April 07, 2005 02:56 EDT
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omgosh is the doctor a bad guy?! noo that would be soo bad! haha *happy dance* an update! looking fwd to the next one
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 20:18 EST
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Soooooooooooooooooooo many chapters, read all at once, stayed up past 1, woke up at 5! eyes hurt, blinded by computer screen...so tired! i hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i did like you fic! : ) Wheeeeeeee, energy back! (Got me a boy friend and a with him, a little tongue gose a long way!) still blind though. oh well, (the sleep depravation is making me wayyyyyyyy too perky, i'm goth you know.) 'k bye.
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Reviewed By: AnimeishDwarf On: March 31, 2005 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter. The last line killed me though, because I can visualize it. Though the cell phone call got me wandering, who the hell was on the other end. Hopefully Kagome doesn't blow up at poor Inuyasha. Anyway, once again, good chapter. Please keep updating
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