| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 20:56 EST
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ok, I finally cought up lol. Pay attention, cuz I got things to say. First, your expressions. you use the same ones over and over again. I suggest you try a little diversity. Second, I realize that the entire story doesn't spread over that much time, but it was really hard for me to follow the actions. Perhaps you could revise, and maybe find ways to make it more precise? Well that's it.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because i am still freakin' over the last chap, i guess i'll have to put all of my trust in that you know what you're doing. : ( *sniffs* you definitely conjure up feelings of disgust in me where naraku is concerned. you make him so EVIL! uh, what a nightmare. great chap!! i'm counting on that next update being posted soon! i need resolution. *__^
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 03:56 EST
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Ah hell... thank goodness Sesshiles has tokijinn... You can't kill Miro off. She loves him. :( And yes, I did laugh at Rin jumping on home-dude's back, but when you left that AN about family guy, I like to have died I laughed so hard. :D I love Ryen, I told ya that. :D I can't wait until you start writing the new story, although I will miss this one. I still say you've far surpassed your "mentor". I guess I'd say. :D And you'd better give sesshiles a lemon before this fic is over. Poor guy needs some ass, no wonder he's such a prig.
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Reviewed By: InuFreakFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 03:02 EST
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Discard the last review cause my comp was being stupid. Sorry bout this.
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Reviewed By: InuFreakFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 03:01 EST
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What happened to Miro was so gay. I can't believe that happened cause he was like a really cool character. Still though, it had to happen for a reason right? Right? Cause if he just died for no reason I am so gonna bitch. Still though, nice chap. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuFreakFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 03:00 EST
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What happened to Miro was so gay. I can't believe that happened cause he was like a really cool character. Still though, it had to happen for a reason right? Right? Cause if he just died for no reason I am so gonna bitch. Still though, nice chap. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inuchan89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 19:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your story its so awsome but then its sad w/rin please update soon i wana read more
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 14:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a "climax"! that was so creepy. the bodiless souls screaming silent warnings. ahhh. *shivers* f*ck, now naraku is free and the group is seperated. man, i can't take all of this anxiety. i feel like i'm there!! oh, and sorry about that pervy bus guy...been there. blech!!
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 03:13 EST
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That...was....AWESOME!!! :D I can't believe you went where you did! I never saw this coming, any of it. Freaking brilliant! And sorry about that stanky dick-sock guy. :( *gives asprin and a nice hot bath* :D
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Title: Congratulations
Reviewed By: XHanyou_LordX [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 20:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well dont on making the top 15 fan fics. Keep at it this story is awsome!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: GreenAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 13:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My favorite fic on here!! not kidding, this one is the best written, and best everything else! god do i love it, you're doing an amazing job...im kinda sad that the ending is coming up...or so you said...ya...well i love it XD!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 11:03 EST
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I really love your story, I'm at chap 35, and I've been reading it during class and the teacher is coming. AAH! ok, just need to point out, you have a few recurring spelling mistakes, you should check them.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 11:02 EST
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I really love your story, I'm at chap 35, and I've been reading it during class and the teacher is coming. AAH! ok, just need to point out, you have a few recurring spelling mistakes, you should check them.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the sh*t DID hit the fan, and i have a feeling it's going to get worse before it gets better. kagome seems like she's about to "miko-zap" someone. : ( so sad that it's almost over. ha! i love sanzo. "urusei baka saru!!" X D
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Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 14:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still not completely caught up, but i just had to leave this note. OMG..chap 72, i laughed so hard i woke up the whole house!!! Sano your pants are backward and Rin you just sucked my brother off....fucking hilarious beyond reason!!! Very good dialogue!
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