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Reviewed By: BlueThunder [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 04:16 EDT
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i'm really sorry i haven't reviewed before this. the story was just drawing me in... but this chapter i couldn't help but wonder who the good policeman is.... i have a feeling that he's Inu and Sesshomaru's old man. i wonder. i wonder. i wonder... i guess i'll have to find out. love this story. it's not like others i've read. it's unique. wonderful. keep on writing. =]
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Reviewed By: BlueThunder [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 04:09 EDT
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i'm really sorry i haven't reviewed before this. the story was just drawing me in... but this chapter i couldn't help but wonder who the good policeman is.... i have a feeling that he's Inu and Sesshomaru's old man. i wonder. i wonder. i wonder... i guess i'll have to find out. love this story. it's not like others i've read. wonderful. keep on writing. =]
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
opps sorry..I totaly forgot to rate....lol...Ten on everything..everything is like perfect..I love it..lol
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: HanyouGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 22:09 EDT
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Im like on chapter 20..or so...and the Inuyasha and Kagome relationship going on is really sad..I hope it gets better..But so far..I heard this song..it's called wishes by Superchi(k)..that song is like perfect for the relationship they got going on ...u should listen to it....but I hope they end up getting togther..lol..keep up the awesome wrk you got going on.....lol
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Reviewed By: Ilona On: February 04, 2008 04:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!! I fell in love with your story!! Granted there were some parts where i wanted to whack inu and kag over the head for ;p but still!! You made the transition from in their personalities so realistic! Just imagine, i read this story in 3 days!! Ya, that's a lot of chapters per day.. and it kept me from my school work, but oh well... I think im going to keep coming back to read it over and over and over.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: anonymous? hah On: January 26, 2008 04:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your writing is truly incredible. and i absolutely adore your typos. i know, thats probably really weird, but its just that the way your writing style is, it makes it seem like the words are just gushing out of your head and through your fingers. it makes the story so raw and powerful, because it truly seems like you're not going back and rewriting everything and over thinking the story, the creativity is just bursting through. ive read this story 34899328748932 times, but ive only gotten to the last couple chapters because i dont want it to end. hahahaha! i enjoy your stories so much. your writing is so powerful. kudos! :)
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Jiwe On: September 29, 2007 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I've been reading this story for over a week now...and of course that means being able to catch my attention and keep it for more than a week is quite an accomplishment! (I'm one of those people with very short attention spans -_-;;) So far I'm on chapter 25 and this is my opinion so far: The Good: -I absolutely adooooore your style of writing. All of the conversations between your characters are very witty, especially Inuyasha's lines, because between the swearing and innuendo, I find that his disses are awesome! Hehe :D -Your vocabulary is quite impressive, as well as your ability to describe scenes. That's very important ingredient to an outstanding story. -Your plot and overall background. It's very original -I like how Kagome's not just some goody two shoes...I love it when she swears! It makes her seem more human lol. The Bad (just so that you'll be better next time :D) -Some parts are unrealistic. Like how Kagome stated casually that Souta might have killed a man. If I knew my brother *might* have killed a man I would go insane... -When Kag's mom heard that her best friend was dead, her reaction was kind of cold. She only "frowned"...I would've expected at least some tears, if not full out bawling -You seem to use the word "glare" a lot lol...even at places when it should've been "glanced" or "stared" ^_^ -..."winched..." ( I think u mean winced?) Thats it for now! I'l probably be bac to comment some more!
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Reviewed By: Cattykit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I really like the plot of this story and I'm pretty interested to see what else you have written for the rest of this fic (I'm only at about chapter 18)! I'm a bit turned off by the whole cliques thing; it's just a little bit overbearing and pretty narrowminded. But I really adore the interactions between Kagome and Inuyasha! It's really cute. I can't wait to read more but at the same time I'm finding it hard to push through because of all the grammar errors. Yes I'm one of *those* kind of readers but still all the your/you're and to/too mixups (*shudders*) as well as 'i' instead of 'I' really tickle my pet peeves and distract me from what is otherwise a pretty darn good fic. You said you're making revisions but I still see an abundance of repetitive mistakes. My suggestion is to get a good beta reader that really knows her stuff. I'm also looking forward to reading your fiction, Shades of Gray, but hopefully after I finish this one. I hope you weren't offended by my review; I'm just a picky reader expressing her opinions. Good luck with your writings!
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Title: OM-FLIPPIN-G
Reviewed By: Kagome093 (just not logged in) On: June 14, 2007 01:20 EDT
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ummmm ......are u aware that this story is 790,000 words....and that the average is 25,000 ummmm ......thats alot :D
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Title: typos
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, this is still one of my favorite fanfictions ever, but you have a few typos. nothing serious u just left a word out in some places or switched 2 words. its still really good, i just thought you'd want to know.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 18:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its me again.... yeah my computer decided to fry its hardrive so i lost everything!!!!! Well i do have a backup hardrive but that was before my story came in and well i kind of need a copy of it ^.^' So if you could PLEASE!!!! send it back to me (or at least a copy of it) to anl2u@comcast.net again it would be greatly appreacitated. Thanks!!!!! Alexis
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 16:27 EST
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I've just finished reading this story, again. For, like, the fourth time or so. Everytime I reach the end, I feel like how I did when my favorite show ended. I'm glad that they had a happy ending, but sad that it's the ending. I seriously think that you should do a sequel with their kids after your done writing shades of gray. You are an awsome writer! This is my absolute favorite fanfic I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: kitsune-koinu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 23:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic!!!!! i really enjoyed reading this!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Neko777 On: January 02, 2007 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY like reading your story, it was the best one i had read in a long time. It got a little confusing and somewhat boring near the end but over all it was great. I actually have hacked into the inuyasha anime t.v series in japan and have had a glimps of the story that there not going to telivize or publish, if you want you can email me and ill tell u all about it. You can even use the ideas for another fanfic if you want. velvetrose777@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!! I have lost count with how many times I've read it!!! I can't wait for more stories from you in the future!! ^_^
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