| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 21:01 EDT
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lol u seem 2 b really into goth nd cars my frend. Also i like how u add an older nd stronger family member to inuyasha and sesshomaru's lives, its a very nice touch. just finished the chapter called 'the Rave'...
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Title: not done yet...
Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEYY! I'm not up to it, but did Naraku kill Diegosan? He could have done it to gain power, and when he speaks of revenge behind the bleachers, he never said anything about avenging his father, because HE IS THE KILLER!! hehehe did i solve it?
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 22:54 EDT
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OMG, i feel like an idiot for not reading this story sooner. I've seen it before but never indulged, and boy am I glad i did. I'm not even up to chapter 20 and I am in love! I am going to carry on with it now...
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that story was amazing.. i finally finished and it is a little sad to see it go, but it was worth it... that has to be the best story i have read... great job!!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg did you have to make the first epilogue like that.... i think my heart exploded out of my chest... that was soo sad....
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 04:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good song for inuyasha... i liked that chapter..it made me all teary.. can't wait to see what else happens!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 07:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude so i just read the amusement park chapter and lets just say wow... that HAS to be my favorite chapter so far... so many of the lines that were put in there had me rollin... literally on the floor...lol
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Reviewed By: brekay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this 5 times and i still cant get enough of it!!!
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Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i was just going to say that the song kouga sings "you should be mine", well someone made an amv for that song on youtube and it was to kagome from kouga... i just thought that it was rather funny..lol... well on with the story!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 02:26 EDT
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"To be in love, InuYasha, means to sacrifice your needs to meet the others…to be able to open yourself up without reserve to your significant other…to be able to trust the other." This was amazing.... sessh being deep..i mean he is always pretty deep...lol... i loved the way he described this...
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 00:50 EDT
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well i stayed up to figure out who ryen was and its really sad that i didn't put two and two together i mean it makes complete sense that "Ryen" is who he is... lol... can't wait to read more.. this story is going great!!!!
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Reviewed By: *sniff* loved it On: September 04, 2008 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sango nodded and the two walked another lap in silence, questioning what unanswerable question. Slowly, Sango turned to Kagome, "do you regret anything that you've done with Yash?" Kagome pinked and stopped walking to lean against the wall. "Do I regret it? No…not at all. I don't regret a single choice. I wish we had waited a little longer to become so…intimate….I mean, the boy's stamina is nothing I can compare to. He's ready to go onto thirds while I can't recover from the first. It's amazing though, that when I see him, I see this man who I know I love and want to marry. It's scary too…its like he has such a big piece of me that I don't know if I could live without." She sighed again and slid down to the track. "At times it scares me…that's why I pushed him away in the beginning. I knew it would get this intense…I knew it. I fear leaving my life in his hands…I fear giving him that much control over me…control to where he can make or break my day with one look, one touch…one kiss. He can make everything go away when he holds me…he can make life better with three words. He's…he….i love him Sango, desperately. I love him so much and it's scary…" she felt a tear slid down her face and laughed ruefully at it. Wiping it away, she gave Sango a small smile, "if that's any consolation, I mean."
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 01:58 EDT
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ok still not done yet but i just had to post on the little bit about "thats what she said" ol i was rollin, it totally made me think of "The Office" I love that show!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this story just keeps getting better and better.... man i am so excited about this... I love the way you write it really brings people into the story... just had to let you know that...can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! I am glued to this computer for the next like 30 chapters until i finish this...lol...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so right now i am on chapter 27 and i have to say that this story is so great.... i really can't take my eyes off of it... it's amazing i mean at first i kind of thought that InuYasha was a little OOC but now i kinda like him like that, it sorta reminds me of him but in a modern way... lol... modern bad boy that would be him.... and i love all the back stories to everyone i think that that just makes it that much better can't wait to see what else there is in store!!! it's great so far if i haven't mentioned it..lol...
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