| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2012 08:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
found a mistake its heed instead of head. heed/hēd/ Verb: Pay attention to; take notice of. Noun: Careful attention: "if he heard, he paid no heed". Synonyms: verb. mind - notice - pay attention noun. attention - care - regard - notice - consideration (found in chapter 3, in the below sentence.) “Thanks Naraku, I'll head your warnings.” She couldn't help her teasing tone. Her despise for this man ran deep through her veins. |
Title: HOLY CRAP
Reviewed By: The Real Lala13 On: July 19, 2012 16:44 EDT
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So, I was doing some math (don't ask why) and with 86 chapters, and an average of 12,000 words per chapter (some are longer and shorter, I know), this entire fanfic is over 1 millions words long. That's more than 7 Twilights. My mind is blown. |
Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2011 19:20 EDT
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the best fanfic i have ever read! i think i read it about 5 times. just thought id let you know :) i also wanted to ask you... have you ever thought about writing a sequel to this story? |
Reviewed By: misato_1471 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2010 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I've read your story twice and am absolutely in love with it! I had a great time reading it. Thanks for the fic!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2010 03:17 EDT
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I love your writing. Finally got to finish reading this story.... oh the crying... :( I love you.. wish more people with your level of talent were able to actually get into this stuff for careers...
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2010 02:50 EDT
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so good!!!! love this story sooo much!
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Reviewed By: asdfghjkl;' On: April 16, 2010 23:07 EDT
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Also, a joint and a blunt are two different things. A joint is rolled in a cigarette paper, a blunt is rolled in a cigar paper. Blunts are much bigger.
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Reviewed By: asdfghjkl;' On: April 16, 2010 22:53 EDT
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Mix is too pussy a word for anything metal. Heavy metal mixes don't exist. Maybe playlist. Mix is for love songs/pop music and shit. Plus, heavy metal is not hyphenated. Either way, this story's pretty good. :]
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Reviewed By: asdfghjkl;' On: April 16, 2010 22:52 EDT
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Mix is too pussy a word for anything metal. Heavy metal mixes don't exist. Maybe playlist. Mix is for love songs/pop music and shit. Plus, heavy metal is not hyphenated. Either way, this story's pretty good. :]
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2009 21:43 EST
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OMG!!! This story was WONDERFUL!!! it took me foreverrrr lol but i'm finally done and i was not disappointed! your a great writer and this was an amazing touching story which i loved : )
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 22:37 EDT
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-pounces fallenangel- ZOMG! I'm back to read this again because I loved it so much the first time! It took me a year to read it before, but hopefully I can finish it faster than that now that I don't have to wait for updates. Have I mentioned how much I absolutely love your writings and have missed you and this website? Idk if you remember me but Curse of the Dragon has been a big part of my life for a long time. (It sounds hokey, but it's true!)
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT!! I ALMOST CRYED AT THE END!! You are a great author!! AWSOME STORY!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY IS AWSOME I AM STILL READING YOU ARE A GREAT AUTHOR N IHOPE U WRITE MORE N MORE STORIEZ.....
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Reviewed By: death_of_sky On: June 20, 2009 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this long ago on ff.net, and decided to read this version. The reason I'm reviewing in the middle is, after the sappy part of 45- I couldn't stand it. I have to say that the "mama" disgusts me! It's so surupy sweet I wanna strangle her, or myself, every time I read it...way back even when Kauai first appeared. It was at this part I couldn't take it any more. Just had to get it off my chest. *siiiigh* I will never read that part again. Well, gotta love Ryen, as I said before on ff.net gooood work and still reading "Shades of Grey".
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 01:22 EST
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just reread the whooole story, and man it still is awesome!
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