| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 18:56 EST
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im really liking how this is going...its very intense. anyway keep up the good work..cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic, I really like ones with a badboy Inuyasha and goodgirl Kagome.... I'm interested to see how this story all plays out, though Naraku is a bastard for what I suspect he's doing to Rin -even if hes not doing what I think, hes still a bastard like Kikyou's a slut- and the whole thing with Souta and Kagome is sad... but anways you've got me hooked and I'm eagerly awaiting your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:43 EDT
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Ok...even though your Inuyasha is a heckuva a lot more badass than I'm used to (drugs and binge drinking?!) I still am a sucker for good girl kagome and bad guy Inuyasha get it on. I want to be sure that Inuyasha is a good guy tho - I mean, is he deeper than just being a smartass who obviously likes to flaunt his power with the ladies? I'm really interested in seeing how you'll get Kagome to be honest about her feelings for Inuyasha. I'm a HUGE Inu-kag fan and can't wait for them to get it on! At least some heavy lime...and soon please!
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Reviewed By: Nado On: October 19, 2004 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! Keep it up ;)
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Title: KiraLily
Reviewed By: lovekitana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:05 EDT
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It's me again. Great chapter. His persistance is enticing isn't it? Anyways, can't wait to read more- How loyal you are to your story to stay up till 3, hope you're not too tired, but thanks for the update. I do have something to add, now, I have a huge thing against drugs, especially being used by teenagers (and 48 year old father's/grandpa) Unfortunately it's not an unusual thing amongst kids-and I think you put it in to fit the characters well. It's not something I like, but it doesn't shock me at all to read it in that way. Please don't change your characterizations for anyone. It's only a fanfic. Now, the projects & crack houses, although I'm used to seeing it everyday, those people never siese to shock me!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:53 EDT
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i like it =D (cept for the drug crap) great story! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:52 EDT
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i hope they quit with the drugs
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:29 EDT
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:29 EDT
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ew kikyo...*barfs* good chapter!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:15 EDT
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interesting!! =D
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Reviewed By: WorldWonder On: October 16, 2004 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic....keep updating- and soon too!
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Title: oh yea
Reviewed By: sesshomarusgirl567 On: October 16, 2004 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 5 was the best chap yet! and your the best!! i cant wait till you update I really want to see what happens next!! sesshomarusgirl56
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Title: KiraLily
Reviewed By: lovekitana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 01:57 EDT
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Funny, funny stuff. You brought me all kinds of interesting memories from high school! I remember my " 6ft 3" pot-headed god" And he was real sexy in a hood sweatshirt! Anyway-I'm enjoying your story. The more confrontations between Inuyasha & Kagome the better. Especially if there's a lot of touching.
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Reviewed By: artificial intelligence x On: October 11, 2004 20:21 EDT
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nice story, and sesshoumaru totally kicks a$$. Hope you update soon Please. Ja
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: October 11, 2004 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story started out. Who wouldn't love a badass Inu and Sess? Is this story going to have pairings? Just wondering. Update soon!
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