| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 17:24 EST
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Nice. unfortunately this chapter held alot of vile people. i can only hope that the almighty author will dish out the punishment these creatures deserve. Justice is a sweet thing. tho i dont think in real life Naraku would stand a snowballs chance in hell agianst fluffy. thanks for your time and efforts they are appreciated greatly.
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Title: AW
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:56 EST
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This is so good!!! Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 18:37 EST
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inuyasha's in trouble but i think that kag might be overreactin a bit. plus what koga said about yash sayin he'd already 'mated/ kags was so not true. hope he gets his ass kicked. naraku and kikyo to. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 18:22 EST
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Part of my brain can't get over just how partially slimy you've made Inuyasha. I'm not used to fanfics that give him such a...sordid past! Yet, you've also managed to make him seem somewhat sympathetic in the last few chapters. Now of course I'm wondering how Kagome will be persuaded to give Inu another chance...how can she believe that he really cares about her and not just about getting into her pants? And then there's that sicko Naraku...now that Kags is going to isolate herself from Inu, will Naraku see it as his opportunity to get to Kags? My one plea is that there be no more rape - Kerensa and Rin - that's already too many victims. But of course it's your story :) I am a very blatant Inu-Kager and can't wait for consensual lemons b/w them!
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Reviewed By: modra On: November 13, 2004 07:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i sooo love this story! i've seen a lot of these high school inu/kag fics and they're almost always disappointingly similar... but yours is well written, original and interesting. some minor grammar mistakes but nothing too distracting. the relationships between the characters are actually progressing in a way that's pretty realistic. they are a bit ooc but i think it works realy well in this case, since you seem to have put a lot of thought into why they act the way they do. so, kouga has managed fairly well to fuck this up, huh? i wonder how inu will dig himself out of this one :P any plans on bringing evil-slut-kikyo back in to complicate things more? just curious... anyway, naraku needs to get his ass kicked and pronto. please please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Nightstarangel On: November 12, 2004 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story. Keep going at it u r a wonderful writter. I hope that u update soon. ;) Ja ne.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it it is so sweet. not to mention that you portray our lovable puppies as the sex gods that they are. I like your style and cant wait for the next update. Your fawninf fan. me Au Revoir.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 14:06 EST
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I love your story. It protrays Inu-boy as a bad ass and a sweetheart, but with a little secret twist. I think that in the next chapter you should have Naraku try something to get kagome and then have Naraku kick his sorry butt. Lol. Just an oppinion. I'm trying to write my first fanfic myself but it seems to be going no where. I love your style and think you are doing a great job. Keep up the kick ass story!
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Reviewed By: Evangelion842 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 05:42 EST
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I really like this story, but please give Kagome enough strength not to give in to Inu Yasha before he shows her some real tenderness and respect.
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 08:28 EST
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Very awesome story. It's so much more gritty and real than all the others I've read. Congrats. And don't pay any attention to those who criticize you for putting in that stuff about the drugs and stuff. While I definitely don't condone it, it fits with the story. Oh, and your depiction of the relationship between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha is fantastic! I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: lonely girl On: November 09, 2004 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY (ya get the idea) love this fic, it's really original and good to read and you update quickly, thanx for that.
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Title: KiraLily
Reviewed By: lovekitana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 17:14 EST
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BRILLIANT!!!!! Thanks for updating. Inuyasha is way ooc, however, it fits with your story well. Besides, he has a heart, that's obvious, but circumstances have left his inner compassion in hiding. Who doesn't wear masks these days? I like the other pairings, I have a feeling this story will have many chapters, but I'm up for it-Especially since it appears you put so much effort into it. I'll be waiting for another update.
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Reviewed By: thread On: November 06, 2004 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I couldn't stop reading it!! I just wish Inuyasha would stop smoking and that he would stop swearing too!! but i also wished that in the anime...lol. what i'm trying to say is that I like Inuyasha's character, he might be a bit meaner and cynical than the one in the anime/manga, but nicely done! I was just wondering if he was ever going to start acting nicer towards Kagome in his thoughts about her and his actions...he's really obnoxious...grr...please continue!! i love this story!
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Reviewed By: thread On: November 06, 2004 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like how Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha don't really hate each other!! Well, I'm not too sure right now since i just read the first chapter but I'm loving it so far! No constructive criticism here! Just praise for your fic!
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veary good. Just i my opiion, I don't like as much Sess-Rin , and Mir-Song. Make mor Inuyasha and Kagome together. It's funny,the other guys just don't hold my attention as much. But thats just me! I'm drooling over here for Inuyasha so please don't make me wait to much longer for more.!!^_^
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