| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: March 07, 2005 00:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to tell you "WOW"! I'm so defently hooked. I read the whole story from start to now in 2 days, i just couldn't stop, you had me wanting to know what was going to happen next. There's not that many authors or authoress who can do that. I agress with you about how inuyasha can't be all goody-too-shoo, and i feel quite strongly that you've made him into a wonderfully believable charactor, and the same with shessh. Though I'm still curious about what happened with their mother/stepmother? and also what u have up your sleeve concerning Ryen and Kagome's mom..HEHEhe? and for the rant it does every body good to let off alittle steam, especially when the little "stupid shit-drip" deserves it. I think those two words thrown together describes that person very well don't you think? so keep up the great work! So intel the next chapter I'll be reading ya!
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: March 06, 2005 15:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for months now, but I've never bothered reviewing. I figured that someone with talent like yours doesn't need any encouragement from a sap like myself, because surely you must realize how amazing a writer you are. But I must say, that I am thoroughly delighted at the way you shot down AngelBaybee. I read the review that she posted, and was utterly appalled at her opinion, and yet stunned at her idiocy. Someone with a fifth grade reading level should not be allowed to review your story. I just wanted to say that I'm impressed with the way you stood up for yourself. And since, I'm taking the time to review now, I'll say that this is one of the best stories out there and truly original. I also want to thank you for updating so often, because sometimes you get authors who will post another chapter months after the last one, which can be very aggravating. I can't wait until you update next. But should I forget to review again, know that I am certainly not disappointed.
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Reviewed By: Master of the Universe On: March 06, 2005 07:09 EST
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This fanfic keeps getting more and more awesome. Though I'm still wondering why Rin isn't carrying protection. Sesshies can't be around all the time. AngelBaybee, you fail at the interwebnetsuperhighwayofinformation.
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Title: Rant all you like, we still love ya!
Reviewed By: lbdp On: March 06, 2005 05:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please do not apoligize for ranting over stupid / rude people. You work is wonderful, and I am so glad to see that while you posted a little rant, you did not decide to let some baka cause you to stop writing. I am always so sad when a favorite author stops writing wonderful stories because of flames. :( Keep up the wonderful work, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT just keeps getting better with every chapter. I mean it's hilariuos and yet has a very interesting plot. I say that the person who dissed this fic needs to check their reading comprehension skills 'cuz it's obvious that they don't understand it if they don't like it. Keep you chin up and don't let the crtics get you down. Alfred Tennyson once said that critics were 'barborous people, blind to the magic and deaf to the melody.'
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Title: Favorites
Reviewed By: foxfire730(i am a member just not loged in @ the moment) On: March 05, 2005 12:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story practically ever since i started(lets say since ch. 8) but have honestly been to lazy to review.(sorry) but know i got my ass up and lokkie here... im reviewing! i am absolutely in LOVE with this fic! and i did mistake your most recent update for a chapter... and was disgusted by that stupid review that one person wrote. i mean... the review didn't make sense (except thst i h8 u part) that perdon is clearly jelous of you writing, for they can't even write themselves. ON WITH THE PRAISE AND WORSHIP.... you have an excellent plot line, and you constntly keep up with it in every chapter! once i finish one, i can't wait till you update again. your writing is simply marvelous with no faults in it what-so-ever. you portray the characters with more excellence, and i am so happy that you havn't changed inuyasha from badass playboy to heavenly angel*.(personally i think it adds mor spice to inu's and kag's realationship. From now on i swear i will update, though i can't promise that my reviews will all be this long. i will depart by saying I am a huge fan of your work and as usual... UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: bk On: March 05, 2005 10:58 EST
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Face it there are idiots out there that have nothing better to do with their time than to annoy others. These people need to get a life. They wouldn't know a good story if it jumped out in front of them. All you can do is ignore them and remember there are more of us out here who like your writing skills and not let this one fool discourage you. Keep up the good work.
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Title: blaze417
Reviewed By: blaze417 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 07:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i say keep up the good work, now this slightly angry and tall person named ryan wants to meet bitchy 13 SOB face to face in a back ally. just to show them how to have fun.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 02:52 EST
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Hum i dono if i'v revied this one or not.. I really can't remember.. Anyway It's great. I did mistake your note as an new chapter but hey no worries keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 01:44 EST
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I love this story! You've done an excellent job with both your writing style and your characterization. The plot has me hooked! I also hope it doesn't turn into a "ruined life" story, but I definately trust your judgement. Don't let vulgar reviews get you down...they just show a lack of taste. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Thats my teachers name!!!!!
Reviewed By: Umi7 On: March 02, 2005 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg the gym teacher has the same name as my coach, Coach Floydd. Thats so cool^-^ im soooooo happy!!!!! Keep it up i no im just starting but its GREAT!!!!!!!!***** five star rating out of 5!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeishDwarf On: March 02, 2005 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, though, I wonder what is going to happen when and if Ryen/Kagome's mother find what happened. And don't, I repeat, let Kagome be pregnant, I hate those stories, that then turn into, "ruined life" stories. Otherwise, great job
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 04:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where to begin...........even though you claim the the story takes place in Japan the over dramatic use of American slang gives it more of a suburbia setting and they don't use a school bus in japan. The story is good however the fact that you post the story as a NC-17 gives the reader a big clue that adult things will happen (don't you think) so giving the reader a heads up to close your eyes is not only irritating but you totally spoil the moment and that is enough for me to want to stop reading it any further.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 01, 2005 03:28 EST
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aw yay they made up, but I'm glad Kagome let Inuyasha have it and know there would b no future similar situations. and the locker room scene how embarassing, but o no u sed "before it gets nasty." o the angst, but looking fwd to the next update! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: jadependat(too lazy to log in) On: February 27, 2005 02:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go great chappy keep em comin
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