| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: thread On: November 06, 2004 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I couldn't stop reading it!! I just wish Inuyasha would stop smoking and that he would stop swearing too!! but i also wished that in the anime...lol. what i'm trying to say is that I like Inuyasha's character, he might be a bit meaner and cynical than the one in the anime/manga, but nicely done! I was just wondering if he was ever going to start acting nicer towards Kagome in his thoughts about her and his actions...he's really obnoxious...grr...please continue!! i love this story!
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Reviewed By: thread On: November 06, 2004 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like how Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha don't really hate each other!! Well, I'm not too sure right now since i just read the first chapter but I'm loving it so far! No constructive criticism here! Just praise for your fic!
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veary good. Just i my opiion, I don't like as much Sess-Rin , and Mir-Song. Make mor Inuyasha and Kagome together. It's funny,the other guys just don't hold my attention as much. But thats just me! I'm drooling over here for Inuyasha so please don't make me wait to much longer for more.!!^_^
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 18:56 EST
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im really liking how this is going...its very intense. anyway keep up the good work..cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic, I really like ones with a badboy Inuyasha and goodgirl Kagome.... I'm interested to see how this story all plays out, though Naraku is a bastard for what I suspect he's doing to Rin -even if hes not doing what I think, hes still a bastard like Kikyou's a slut- and the whole thing with Souta and Kagome is sad... but anways you've got me hooked and I'm eagerly awaiting your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:43 EDT
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Ok...even though your Inuyasha is a heckuva a lot more badass than I'm used to (drugs and binge drinking?!) I still am a sucker for good girl kagome and bad guy Inuyasha get it on. I want to be sure that Inuyasha is a good guy tho - I mean, is he deeper than just being a smartass who obviously likes to flaunt his power with the ladies? I'm really interested in seeing how you'll get Kagome to be honest about her feelings for Inuyasha. I'm a HUGE Inu-kag fan and can't wait for them to get it on! At least some heavy lime...and soon please!
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Reviewed By: Nado On: October 19, 2004 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! Keep it up ;)
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Title: KiraLily
Reviewed By: lovekitana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 00:05 EDT
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It's me again. Great chapter. His persistance is enticing isn't it? Anyways, can't wait to read more- How loyal you are to your story to stay up till 3, hope you're not too tired, but thanks for the update. I do have something to add, now, I have a huge thing against drugs, especially being used by teenagers (and 48 year old father's/grandpa) Unfortunately it's not an unusual thing amongst kids-and I think you put it in to fit the characters well. It's not something I like, but it doesn't shock me at all to read it in that way. Please don't change your characterizations for anyone. It's only a fanfic. Now, the projects & crack houses, although I'm used to seeing it everyday, those people never siese to shock me!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:53 EDT
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i like it =D (cept for the drug crap) great story! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:52 EDT
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i hope they quit with the drugs
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:29 EDT
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Title: 2
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:29 EDT
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ew kikyo...*barfs* good chapter!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 15:15 EDT
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interesting!! =D
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Reviewed By: WorldWonder On: October 16, 2004 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic....keep updating- and soon too!
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Title: oh yea
Reviewed By: sesshomarusgirl567 On: October 16, 2004 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 5 was the best chap yet! and your the best!! i cant wait till you update I really want to see what happens next!! sesshomarusgirl56
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