| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a great job with this story. I like reading stories about the Inu-tachi in high school or an Alternate Universe story. I am also a big Inu/Kag fan. Keep up the good work! Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Wowed..... [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 09:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like my name says, wow... All I have to say is.... UPDATE QUICKLY!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:08 EST
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Hey there, first off...I'm flattered that you took my review to heart! I didn't mean to imply that I was giving up on your story...or that I was demanding you to change your ideas. But I'm humbled that my words caused you to take stock of your characters. My last review was just my gut honest reaction to what I had been reading. Your fic is very different from all the other high school AU ones in that you really have given Inuyasha - a big, partially self created hole to climb out of in order to achieve the "knight in shining armor" status that we like our heros to have. The thing is, the world isn't so black and white all the time. And people should be allowed to redeem themselves if they make mistakes. And I feel like you're doing a great job treading that fine line. Even though Inuyasha has these very unappealing habits/deeds in his past (rape of Karensa, escape into sex, alcohol, and drugs) he has moments where the noble parts of his nature do shine through (his feelings about Kagome, his defense of Rin). I think you're also moving things along very believably...and you're giving your characters have enough mono/dialogue to show that their thought processes aren't all black and white either -which is again, very realistic. Believe me, I'm dying to know how Inu gets out of the situation he's in...so I hope you update soon. Oh, and *thank you* for saying "no" to future rapes. There's only so much angst and sexual violence I think a fic can handle :)
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Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 17:24 EST
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Nice. unfortunately this chapter held alot of vile people. i can only hope that the almighty author will dish out the punishment these creatures deserve. Justice is a sweet thing. tho i dont think in real life Naraku would stand a snowballs chance in hell agianst fluffy. thanks for your time and efforts they are appreciated greatly.
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Title: AW
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:56 EST
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This is so good!!! Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 18:37 EST
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inuyasha's in trouble but i think that kag might be overreactin a bit. plus what koga said about yash sayin he'd already 'mated/ kags was so not true. hope he gets his ass kicked. naraku and kikyo to. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 18:22 EST
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Part of my brain can't get over just how partially slimy you've made Inuyasha. I'm not used to fanfics that give him such a...sordid past! Yet, you've also managed to make him seem somewhat sympathetic in the last few chapters. Now of course I'm wondering how Kagome will be persuaded to give Inu another chance...how can she believe that he really cares about her and not just about getting into her pants? And then there's that sicko Naraku...now that Kags is going to isolate herself from Inu, will Naraku see it as his opportunity to get to Kags? My one plea is that there be no more rape - Kerensa and Rin - that's already too many victims. But of course it's your story :) I am a very blatant Inu-Kager and can't wait for consensual lemons b/w them!
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Reviewed By: modra On: November 13, 2004 07:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i sooo love this story! i've seen a lot of these high school inu/kag fics and they're almost always disappointingly similar... but yours is well written, original and interesting. some minor grammar mistakes but nothing too distracting. the relationships between the characters are actually progressing in a way that's pretty realistic. they are a bit ooc but i think it works realy well in this case, since you seem to have put a lot of thought into why they act the way they do. so, kouga has managed fairly well to fuck this up, huh? i wonder how inu will dig himself out of this one :P any plans on bringing evil-slut-kikyo back in to complicate things more? just curious... anyway, naraku needs to get his ass kicked and pronto. please please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Nightstarangel On: November 12, 2004 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story. Keep going at it u r a wonderful writter. I hope that u update soon. ;) Ja ne.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it it is so sweet. not to mention that you portray our lovable puppies as the sex gods that they are. I like your style and cant wait for the next update. Your fawninf fan. me Au Revoir.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 14:06 EST
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I love your story. It protrays Inu-boy as a bad ass and a sweetheart, but with a little secret twist. I think that in the next chapter you should have Naraku try something to get kagome and then have Naraku kick his sorry butt. Lol. Just an oppinion. I'm trying to write my first fanfic myself but it seems to be going no where. I love your style and think you are doing a great job. Keep up the kick ass story!
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Reviewed By: Evangelion842 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 05:42 EST
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I really like this story, but please give Kagome enough strength not to give in to Inu Yasha before he shows her some real tenderness and respect.
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 08:28 EST
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Very awesome story. It's so much more gritty and real than all the others I've read. Congrats. And don't pay any attention to those who criticize you for putting in that stuff about the drugs and stuff. While I definitely don't condone it, it fits with the story. Oh, and your depiction of the relationship between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha is fantastic! I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: lonely girl On: November 09, 2004 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY (ya get the idea) love this fic, it's really original and good to read and you update quickly, thanx for that.
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Title: KiraLily
Reviewed By: lovekitana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 17:14 EST
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BRILLIANT!!!!! Thanks for updating. Inuyasha is way ooc, however, it fits with your story well. Besides, he has a heart, that's obvious, but circumstances have left his inner compassion in hiding. Who doesn't wear masks these days? I like the other pairings, I have a feeling this story will have many chapters, but I'm up for it-Especially since it appears you put so much effort into it. I'll be waiting for another update.
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