| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
| Pages (31): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] |
Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 19, 2005 16:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww!!! poor rin : ( ...this is a really good story ...i hope that you write more chapters soon!! UPDATE PLEASE!!! : )
|
Reviewed By: foxfire730(amber) On: March 19, 2005 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is really hitting Rin hard! and not only her, but Sessh too! i did laugh a few times in this chap. Example: the idea if inu fingering kags in front of her mother without her knowing is definatley a funny one. imagine Ms. Higurashi's face if/when Ryen tells her! inu and kags did have a very brief talk indeed. and Souta knows just the right time to intervene! (and get his revenge if you will...) I wonder who this "doctor" will be.... hmmm..... a darker side with heart threnching moments for Rin and Sessh. but a lighter mood to inu and kag. can't wait till the next time! e-mail me! Amber
|
Reviewed By: crazed assassin On: March 19, 2005 15:13 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just have a question....u know how miroku has that wind-thingy in his palm in the original anime, well is he gonna have that issue in your fanfic too? that could pose an interesting issue.... ?_?
|
Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 17, 2005 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn!! i love this story!! it's just sooo cool and you write great too!! i really hope that you write more chapters soon!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 16, 2005 02:47 EST
Comment/Review:
aw I hope Rin gets help and a happily ever after. the whole kagome/inuyasha plus hiten and guy whose name I can't remember how to spell dynamic is great! Grease rocks!
|
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: March 14, 2005 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor Rin! Hopefully now Shess can get her the help that she needs. Defently needed some klneex's with that last part of the story. You also have my curiousty perked with how Kagome is going to handle Inu's so called "BEST FRIENDS"? and I'm glad she realizes that she has to trust and have faith in him, and there's one more thing that has my curiousty perked(yeah, i know...curiousty killed the cat but.....*smiles evilly* satisfaction brought him back.hehehehe)but seriously I was wondering about Souta, and how things are going with Ryen and Kag's mom, and I'M DIEING TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT INU'S MOM!!! The few times the Inu's talked about her it was with love or anger, and you've had him reference to her as the "2nd women" and that she worked in some sleezey places? PPPPHHHEEEWWW!!(wipes arm across forhead)(smiles brightly)and I can't wait for "Grease" the play that they are to perform, hopefully Inu will try out(wink, wink, hehe)okay I'm gonna stop nagging your eyeballs off..hehe. and I just want to say that your doing a great job, and I'm really enjoying this story so far and keep up with the great work, and I'm glad my (stupid shit-drip) had you laughing and that I had a small part in making you feel better, so intel then I'll be reading yeah!-u~.
|
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 12:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is definatley a darker side to Rin and what is going on through her mind. That it is. Also Sesshomaru showed a LOT more emotion than he has in awhile. he's got it for this girl. it's great how protective he is of her! Rin definately needs help, and finally Sessh realized that she needs professional help. now to inu and kags... kags does have inu on a leash... but it's not as tight as Bank and Hit think. but i loved the part where she says "just like i won't keep him from doing what he want." then she realizes that she kinda is if you get my meaning. she loves him and he her but sometimes it seema as if kags is trying to change him. for the better of course... but i like badboy inu. i did laugh though whenever kag told inu about having a boyfriend for the play and how jelous he got... this is going to turn out quiet interesting! It seems that inuyasha is contemplating at moments what he really wants, personality-wise. i can't wait to learn more about his mom and that stuff, like i said before, it's always interesting to learn about yasha's past (especially in this fic!). E-mail me soon! Amber
|
Reviewed By: Ebony-Rose (Not signed in) On: March 14, 2005 02:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the post-traumatic stress Rin is going through is killing me! It'z so heart-wrenching!Anywayz, you don't need me to tell you that it was another great chapter! Waiting on the edge of my seat for the next one . . . Ja Ne!
|
Title: mispelled words
Reviewed By: LaLa13 On: March 11, 2005 08:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... whenever you write the words 'tried' and 'wince' or 'winced' you spell them wrong. You write 'tired' and 'winch' or 'winched'. Other than that this is a GREAT fanfic.
|
Title: So Sorry
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 18:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not a problem it is my pleasure to read your fiction, and no you never lost me it's just that I am a horribly despicable fan who has not taken the time to praise a wonderful author. my apologies, it will not happen again. I'm glad that you won't let what some people say effect you. It is a truly amazing skill. sincerely Aurora
|
Title: hello
Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello my fav author, i have a fav to ask u im starting to write some fics, and if u dont mind, id like to see what someone thinks abouth them would u mind leaving me a review *puss in boots eyes* thnx so much:)
|
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am blind i swear... i keep slipping on my keyboard whenever i am writing the spam filter thingie! this is what, my 3rd freakin time!!! hopefully if your going to be reading this one! ok... Arghhhh! doesn't inuyasha ever learn about bets?!? (i love him anywayz!) i am interested to see where this leads (the bet), along with those 'asswipes' now in the picture! words of praise are all wayz there for those who deserve it, and you are at the top of the list! LOVE YA
|
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 21:29 EST
Comment/Review:
*clap*clap*clap*applause*applause* another great chapter in the series! doesn't inuyasha ever learn about bets?!? wonder how this is going to come along, including those 'asswipes' now in the picture. words of praise are always there for those who deserve them so... YOU ROCK!! I LOVE YOU!!! ALL HAIL YOU!!!! *ahem*... i really can't wait to see how this turns out so UPDATE SOON
|
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arghhhhhhh! another bet! doesn't he EVER learn?!?(I love him anywayzzz!!) i am very interested to see where this goes (with the bet and the 2 'asswipes') it was so AWESOME whenever Ryen opened a can of woopass on Naraku. PRICELESS!!! words of praise will be given anytime to those who deserve it... and you are definetly on the top of the list. (basically i'm saying that... YOU ROCK!!!! I LOVE YOU! ALL HAIL DOWN TO YOU!)... update soon!
|
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: sexymama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! your story is the best ive read yet! no one can even come close to comparing!!! ur plot is great and u even add sheakspear to ur work. all i can say is WOW!!! hope this story lasts forever!
|
| Pages (31): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] |
