| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 01:05 EST
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You did it again!! I love this story!! Now, if I can only get to work finishing my story......
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Reviewed By: xxdarkn3ssxwithinxx(not logged in) On: November 24, 2004 22:10 EST
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great fic! i luv it! i'm hooked to tell you the truth! all the angst pulls you in for more and the pure essence of the story is wonderful! keep updating- kasha
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: November 24, 2004 10:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done it once again, it was wonderful. Sometimes a girl just needs some fluff and you gave it so well. I just love all the love and then you mixed in some evil and it came out perfect. Thank you so much for your sweet words at the end of the chapter. I am very glad that my praise was noted and liked. But your story is so very praise worthy... you really made it all to easy to say. And for me to keep saying.
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Title: i love sesshomaru
Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 01:14 EST
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I must say I'm enjoying this story so far. It is very entertaining. A couple of thing did bug me. There were a couple of grammatical flubs. Nothing detrimental to the story, but distracting none the less. A stogie is a cigar so I was a little confused when Miroku had to force Inuyasha not to smoke one. Also, I never bought Seshomaru as a martini drinker. When you first had him drinking tequila I thought it was quirky but reasonable. I always figured him with either scotch neat or straight vodka. Anyway, nobody is one word and I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 16:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was amazing!! i luved it from beginning to end!! plz keep goin! lol (u may know me, just so u know.. hahaha) but, no seriously, u've done an amazing job w/ everyone. too bad this couldnt be a book cuz i'd buy it!! =D
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 15:23 EST
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Wow, I think you just about nailed Sesshoumaru. One thing I noticed was that in the first chapter you said inu had a joint, but in the second chapter you said a blunt thier not the same thing.
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 14:23 EST
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cool
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 22:50 EST
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Oh gods! You just killed me! Took a bloody blow torch and burnt my heart out. That was some major angst for Inuyasha and Kagome (they're my fave couple so I always focus on them). I understand that Kagome is afraid to be involved with Inuyasha...and seems to have an ongoing pattern of pushing people away...first her brother...now Inuyasha. But is there an actual reason why? Some trauma in her past? Or is this just part of her immaturity? (It can occur in different forms for different people, right?). Good grief, you had her say "yes" to Hojo? Why?!?!? (Shrieks in pain!) Inuyasha and Kagome belong together! I've really been fascinated with your last few chapters..and your rehabiliation of Inuyasha. I hope...I really, really hope that Inuyasha somehow manages to rise above this setback with Kagome...and doesn't backslide into his sex, drugs, alcohol haze. That would be so, so bad! He's made of tougher stuff. I know it! My poor Inu...even when he's so bad, you see the good lil' boy inside just dying for affection. C'mon Kagome, snap out of it and go get your man!!!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 22:15 EST
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I love your story. Just one problem, How could you let Kagome and old Inu boy split up? Not a flame. I think it provides angst but you are gonna get then back together right. I love your way of writing. I am in the process of writing my first story. It might look like it is easy but i know it's not. Keep up the good work. Oh, how do you deal with writer's block?
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouuuu--- great story-- very interesting. I have enjoyed reading it so far and cannot wait to see what you will have happen next. So it the gang going to form their own elite little society? hehe. Great job with everything! It was fun to read. :) Keep up the great work!! I'll be adding this to the favorites veryvery soon. Buh-bye! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: November 19, 2004 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I love this story so completly it isn't even funny!!!! I just found it and read all that you have so far and I think it is by far the best Inu fic I have read yet!!! Everything is detailed out to a T! Yeah Inu Yashe is a bit OOC but you make it work perfect.I can honsetly say that there isn't a single thing I would change about your story. You give such awsome detail to every scene and to each person. The fights are worded so well it is too easy to picture them as you read and the romance is just devine!!! Thank you so much for writing this fic. I am more than looking foward to your next chapter, please don't make this humble fan wait too long?!
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 22:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
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Love this story, keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a great job with this story. I like reading stories about the Inu-tachi in high school or an Alternate Universe story. I am also a big Inu/Kag fan. Keep up the good work! Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: Wowed..... [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 09:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like my name says, wow... All I have to say is.... UPDATE QUICKLY!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:08 EST
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Hey there, first off...I'm flattered that you took my review to heart! I didn't mean to imply that I was giving up on your story...or that I was demanding you to change your ideas. But I'm humbled that my words caused you to take stock of your characters. My last review was just my gut honest reaction to what I had been reading. Your fic is very different from all the other high school AU ones in that you really have given Inuyasha - a big, partially self created hole to climb out of in order to achieve the "knight in shining armor" status that we like our heros to have. The thing is, the world isn't so black and white all the time. And people should be allowed to redeem themselves if they make mistakes. And I feel like you're doing a great job treading that fine line. Even though Inuyasha has these very unappealing habits/deeds in his past (rape of Karensa, escape into sex, alcohol, and drugs) he has moments where the noble parts of his nature do shine through (his feelings about Kagome, his defense of Rin). I think you're also moving things along very believably...and you're giving your characters have enough mono/dialogue to show that their thought processes aren't all black and white either -which is again, very realistic. Believe me, I'm dying to know how Inu gets out of the situation he's in...so I hope you update soon. Oh, and *thank you* for saying "no" to future rapes. There's only so much angst and sexual violence I think a fic can handle :)
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