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| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] | | Pages (31): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 17:15 EST
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I'm leaving you another review! Oh happy me. This story is getting very angsty! And kinda scary. I like scary though. I was looking at your review responses, and I was just like, Hmmmm...but nothing really sparked me. So yeah. I wanted to encourage you in your (amazing) writing, and even though there are a few grammatical errors here and there, it's all good, I love the story, adn I'm now off to read the next chapter. I worry for Inu no baka, though. >_< *worry worry worry* Ja ne, Lynne
| Reviewed By: Lynnec114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:24 EST
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This is an awesome fic. I usually don't leave reviews, b/c i'm too engrossed in the story, but I thought I should just stop by to say, wow. You've gt talent, style, and a plot line to boot. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and (eventually) the entire story. Update soon, I'ma follow this to the very end! ja ne, Lynne-chan
| Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 13:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Read your story... I liked it... the grammatical errors bugged the hell out of me, though because you're a good writer and should be able to kick those out. And I mean good; you've got some serious potential there, sweetheart. I saw a lot of misuse of common and not so common words (another pet peeve of mine like using "your" for "you're", two very different meanings.) and a lot of sentences that I could tell you re-wrote because part of the original sentence was still there. Please do not be offended. I really like the work you've done so far and I'm curious as to weather the errors were out of laziness (meaning you just didn't fell like correcting it) or weather you truly don't know all the rules of grammar or the meanings of all the words you used. Either way, you can do a lot better, I can tell. I don't want to sound like your english teacher but I know that if you worked on it, you could polish this up VERY well. Please continue writing this and PLEASE do not be offended.
| Title: ???????????
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 20:00 EST
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How can the lecherous houshi and the violent demon slayer be the lesser of the three evils?? J/k good chap update soon.
| Title: grrr...
Reviewed By: Inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:36 EST
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grrr... i wrote a review b4, then it disappeared! =( but damn.. that pool! inu and kag FINALLY Got together.. yaaay! (lol) looks like u figured out how to spell "shiskabob"! hehehe.. sorry i'm not in ny more, but TRU SUX!!! and sesshy FINALLY got to put his hand THRU Yash. i'm sure you're happy! lol! =D gr8 story! (even if it resembles PORN! hehehe) write more! MORE MORE MORE!! =D
| Reviewed By: Inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:31 EST
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yaaay. that pool.. damn. yaaay, inuyasha and kagome got it on! lol! by jove, i think u spelled shiskabob right, there! *sorry, i couldnt b in ny more! =P not my fault that TRU SUX!!!) sesshy FINALLY got to stick his hand thru Inuyasha... heheh! I luved the last 2 chapters... MORE MORE MORE!! =D
| Title: KiraLily
Reviewed By: lovekitana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:29 EST
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I can't thank you enough for updating, I do enjoy this story-and my hubby thanks you for keeping me from doing anything constructive online. He'll live, but anyways. I like musicals, I do like Grease, West Side Story, oh, I saw Phantom of The Opera last month-AWESOME. Cats(lol) Um, Little Shop of Horrors, Beauty & the Beast, etc. I hope your search goes well. Will we be seeing a bit more happier times soon? I've enjoyed the intense ride greatly, but since I can't place reality & make-believe where they belong, I need some laughs. Not that Miroku catching those two in the pool wasn't funny! Just hoping for some peace time for our beloved characters. Keep up the excellent job!
| Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:12 EST
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Wow! Wow! Wow! First off, I've got to thank you for the lemon! Inu and kag finally got it on...though I'm a little surprised that good girl Kagome would do it in a pool with people around, and without protection of any sort? Unless she's on the pill for other reasons....and for Sessh to go so deeply off the deep end is kind of...interesting. But I am so glad that Inu's deep, dark secret regarding the rape is out. His relationship with Kags needs a healthy dose of honesty if it's to survive. You really know how to lay on the drama girl..kudos to you. But I'm happy that at least for now, there's some fufillment. I just can't believe Kags would let herself be torn from an injured Inu's side..especially after they just became lovers. I sure as heck wouldn't leave him alone :)
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE. But incredibly sad. Question, why was he crying blood? Living with something like that on your conscience would definitely suck, but I think you could get past it. The story is great. Update soon and continue being the magnificent writer we all know you are.
| Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 29, 2004 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, they didn't. The two chaps and you answers cleared everything up. Thanks a lot. Can't wait for the next chap!
| Title: Grease!
Reviewed By: NewYorker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREASE or ROMEO AND JULIET! I am personally playing a big roll in Grease this year which is why i just offered it to you, and I finished reading romeo and juliet for the thrid time last week so taht's why i ageve that one to you! I love what you're doing with this story. I can't even explain how jealous i am of your talent and creativeness. this story is absolutely perfect except for the few spelling and grammar mistakes. another play you might wanna do is Damn Yankees, there's lots of racy stuff in there that might make InuYasha jealous if Kagome got a certain part and Kagome jealous if InuYasha got a certain part. ;-) you're plot is completely orrigional and extremely interesting. the only part I personally don't like about it is the fact that everyone seems to have a horrible backround. but this is coming from a girl with the nick name "Bubbles" and lots others! Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for your next chapter! ~Piggy
| Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 10:52 EST
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Sled?? OK your forgiven. It took some balls not to have Kagome fall for that I love you. The story is much better for it. Anyway, Rin's dad is a great character. I love that he doesn't repent.
| Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 26, 2004 13:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I have a question…what's up with Sesshomaru? I mean, why does he seem to hate the rest of the group? He gets together with Rin but then hates Inuyasha for being haft human. Dose Sesshomaru see the others as friends, or what? Cause he doesn't make sense, especially when he goes to protect Kagome when she's fighting with Inuyasha. Is he just doing cause of Rin? And what's Rin's problem?! She's always keeping secrets from the girls, what type of friend is she? And what up with Sango and Miroku? Its like they disappeared from the story along with Sesshomaru's mother and Myouga. I don't mean to bring down you or your story by all of these questions but your characters personalities confuses me. They do something and then go and do something else that contradicts them and how they act without an explanation on why there acting that way. I look forward to the next chap and hopefully you'll answer some of my questions.
| Reviewed By: Inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 10:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey grl! u know i luv alll ur writing... =P grrrr8 job!! i'm so glad inuyasha n kagome r back, but then again, so is naraku.. DAMN IT!! that's not very fortuitous, now, is it? hahahaha keep up the awesome job! n if u need help or dont know how to spell something (or w/e... ;P LOL), i'm always here!! =D
| Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:27 EST
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I have one question that I just thought of... I thought Kagome tried to kill herself, or did I read wrong? Just wondering if I was right or what happened, other than the odvious?
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