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| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] | | Pages (31): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kagome_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 02:13 EST
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Fantastic chapter as usual! God, I can't even imagine what my mom would do if she caught me having sex in the shower! I think you did that scene extremely well! Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! Write on!
| Title: New Yakar!
Reviewed By: NewYorker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's getting better and better every time i read it! its super great that youre going with Grease for their school musical. this is quite an addicting story. take that as a complement or not, it's up to you! i can't wait to read the next chapter! i'll be expecting it! good luck, and keep up the good work. **love much** Icki
| Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:52 EST
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HAHAHAHAHA. Oh wow. what a great ending. I feel bad for those too. Looks like somebody has some esssplainin' to do!!! This whole chapter was just great. I enjoyed every moment of it, from Kagome trying to get a room for cheap, to the dirty room its self, to the "nice" steamy shower scene! hehehehe. Great! ouu, evil cliff hanger! I hope that there is more soon!!!! Great job and keep up the fantastic work!! --Aitu
| Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 12:32 EST
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Wow, greatness too lazy to write a real review
| Title: hee hee
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 12:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow the missing mother has just decided to show up at the WRONG time. but it was awesome and hilarious, as always. Update soon.
| Title: nice chapter
Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was definitely a good chapter. I know I enjoyed it but I do hope that the Basta...Naraku will get whats coming to him, and soon.
| Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 20:38 EST
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ok, I promise to stop bitching about the spelling and grammar. The chapter was good, I really enjoyed it! It's moving FAST too, actually. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy (offline) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 19:44 EST
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Wow! So good, So good! O_O You LIKE my story? Eek! Now I'm the one feeling honored ^^" Hehe. Weeellll... are they really going to stay at a motel o_O I'd be like... uhn... please no? Hehe. I love this story, by the way, I know I've said it sooo many time... (Only 3, I think) I hope I'll update my story by next week. Lynne has to help me out. Well- loving it! TTFN ^^
| Reviewed By: Lynnec114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 18:16 EST
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yo. I snuck on to get to read this. (I read chap. 21-29 last night. GO ME!) Anyways, awesome chapter. And sweetie, I've already read Chronicles. You've actually no idea HOW MUCH fanfiction I've read within the past 3 or so months (when I discovered it). So yeah. Anyway! About this chapter, this is like, O_O. I wonder what's gonna happen, I mean, they're now in hiding. I wonder what's gonna be the closing point of the story. Naraku dying? I think it'd be cooler to have a whole death-to-Kikyo scene. I really don't like her. I feel bad for her in some ways, but then there's the time I'm like, "Bitch, you must die." Anyway, I spotted a few grammatical errors, and stuff like that, but other than that, awesome job. And Lovin Sesshomaru isnteasy is one of my good friends....I actually beta Fierce Lime. Ain't that such a good story? She's one of my favorite writers, and also an awesome friend. ANYWAY. I'll let you go, and stop rambling, and wait patiently for the next update. You update quickly, which is awesome! I actually did a little guess that you'd update today, and then opened my mail and it was like "UPDATE!" and I was like woot. Ok, I'm really going now. Ja. Lynne
| Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 20:39 EST
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Hola, me again. I got through, uh, 26 I think. Lemon chapter. I wanted to say-I loved the way you ended that. I can most definitely see InuYasha responding that way to a Miroku comment like that!!! (mwahahaha) Ok, I now need to go. I really don't think my mom will be too happy to find me reviewing your story when I'm supposed to be BANNED from this thing.
| Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 12:32 EST
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Heh heh heh. So, I've been banned from the computer (and reading your story T_T) But, I'm cool (and very very sneaky) and have printed out each of your chapters 21 through 29, you've turned me into that much of a devoted fan. I"ll say this chapter is awesome, even though I'm about three-quarters through it, so I can't say I hate the cliffhanger cuz I"m not even sure if there is one! Anyway, I'll leave you reviews when I finish a chapter and can get my ass on a school computer. >< Cuz, well, you deserve them. I still say you're a freaking amazing writer!! I can't wait until your next update, it gives me another reason to deprive my school of lots of printer paper. Ja ne! Lynne
| Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus, you need comments! This story is WAY too good, and WAY too long not to get more than this! So I've decided I shall help you, and comment. LynneC114 found this story and told me about it, so I'd thank her ^^" I'll be a regular reader from now on, I love this story so much. The ooc-ness isn't bad at all. It isn't a fanfic if you don't change SOME things. =grins= Love it, keep up the good work. Oh, one thing though- hentai, not hentia. It doesn't really matter, but it's nice to know, eh? You also switched the "I" and the "A" on some other words, but I can't think of any at the moment. I'm looking forward for your next update! ^^
| Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 19:10 EST
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yipee! another chapter. my, kagome has quite the temper in your fic. :) i mean she flips out on poor, injured inuyasha over the silliest comments! of course, the arrogant hanyou needs to be put in his place when he truly says and does something ridiculous...like ahem...trying to get our modest Kags all hot and bothered when other people are around, but really she needs to take a chill pill, ne? I mean, she has the boy of her dreams...one of them has to be a little mature! this is not a criticism by the way...it's just a rant on kagome :)
| Title: yaaay!
Reviewed By: Inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 10:45 EST
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new chapter! thanks! i liked it, even tho. kagome screamin and anger alll the time is startin to be annoying.. she cant help it tho, its who she is! lol! thanks for addin something tho. i check EVERY day! =P
| Reviewed By: inu_rika83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:15 EST
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i think its spelled "shish kebob"... according to NYC vendors... just thought i'd throw that in! (and grl u better get to postin more chapters! hehehe u know i luv ya! =D)
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