| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 18:37 EST
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I'm FINALLY on winter break and have started to catch up on the many fics that school didn't give me time for. Had to read 3 of your chapters. Wow, again, I'm so engrossed in the plot! Wish I could be creative like you...and could write action scenes. Poor Souta! Not only is he in jail, but he's been played by the girl he was in love with! Naraku is one slimy bastard! Can't wait for justice to be served! Of course, I'm kinda curious about who this cop who "seems familiar" is...I have a guess but am not sure about it just yet. Wonder if there's a "family reunion" in the future for some of our characters.... :) Yippee for Inu-Kag...you know they're my fave. I'm glad the relationship is a-okay! And Inu might not be able to keep it in his pants, but you're so right...Kag's is hardpressed to keep it out of hers! Sorry for the cruedness. I just hope Kagome isn't stupid enough to consider Naraku's offer. Self sacrifice is great but only if your enemy has honor. Naraku clearly doesn't. He'd leave Kagome violated and broken just like Rin and probably have Souta executed as well. Keep the one shot idea in mind!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 01:14 EST
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How come everybody glares and nobody glances? Anyway I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to the room.
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 22:20 EST
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It's good. ^^ I sent you an email regarding the newest charcter.
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Reviewed By: nrok829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:34 EST
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Wow, this story is so awesome! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 11:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. This is such a good story!!! It was good at the beginning and it's only getting better!!! :D Super fanfic, really! The whole story about the drug lords is very original. And I just love your Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. They are so cool. It's so funny that Rin and Sesshy are always interrupted. I hate Naraku so much!!! He is so anoying!!! I'll quote Yash: "Go to hell Naraku... your father is waiting." Priceless!! :D Oh and I can't wait to find out who was the sergeant. I have my suspicions but I'm not sure. Although I would love it to be who I think it is. I loved the scene with the mother arriving at a bad time. It was hilarious!!! and very interesting. I just loved it when Yash and Kags thought her mother had slept with his father. That was really good. Anyways keep it up. Make the story good, lemony and long.:) Bye!
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 07:03 EST
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YAY! You updated. But I have to go to school in ten minutes... So I'm printing it out :P Haha... Lynne and I were discussing a phone booth sex scene for A Fierce Lime... what do you think the readers need, and informational chapter, or good old acidic content? Ah well, I'll review after school on what I thought. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 02:08 EST
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yey! Nice fast update-- loves it. Looks like school was rather eventfull. You did a nice job with this chapter. Enjoyed it lots!! hehe. And ut-o spaghetti O's for Souta. Can't wait to see how everything is handled. Keep up the great work! Take care! ---Aitu
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Title: The Curse of the Dragons
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Never Thought I'd find someting this enjoyable! Anywho, great job and I can't wait for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 22:05 EST
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yeah
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Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 19:24 EST
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haha, so i juggled this AND my french project, go me. Anyway, awesome chapter. I liked how Kagome's mom handled everything, very diplomatic and Kagome's mother-like. Anyway, I can't wait until next time. Is the story gonna be over soon? because it seems to be wrapping up. I still think you should include a Kikyo-death scene, but then, I had to restrain the urge to rip her action figure to itty-bitty bits the other day in Hot Topic. Whoops. Anyway, yay for FAST updating, and I can't wait until the next chapter!! Ja, Lynne.
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Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 18:26 EST
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Hi again! i finished 31. I wanna read 32, but I've got a french project that's been calling my name (and that i've been violently ignoring) for the past week. But I wanted to say that it was a good chapter, with a cool *shower scene* lemon. I liked VERY MUCH. (Inuyasha/Kagome + shower = happy readers, like me!!) Anyway, must go write and memorize an evil paragraph on the Pont Neuf (really, who cares??) Ja! Lynne.
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Title: The Curse of the Dragon
Reviewed By: SpitFYER20 On: December 13, 2004 12:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story today and I really have to tell you that I LOVED IT. Please update sometime soon:)
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 10:52 EST
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Nice, fast update-- love that!!! Well, her mother took it a lot better than I would have imagined. I was thinking that they would have to run past her and sneak out, hehehehe. So, will Inuyasha and Kagome actually be abiding by the new laws that Kagome's mother has laid down? haha-- for some reason, I can't really see that happening, lol. Great job with this chapter! I absolutly adored it. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work and take care! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy (offline) On: December 13, 2004 06:52 EST
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Wow. Her MOM walks in?? Too great, too great. :p Absoluetly love it.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 04:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to say, I love this fic... very unique and a great joy to read. Next I was, for some reason, was expecting her mother's reaction to be a lot worse then it was; I like how you went about it though. Shocker to learn Inuyasha's and dad and Kagome's mom were best friends, I was wondering the same a them... This last chapter was great, I love how everything just come together... and I'm very curious to find out if Souta was the one to kill him... anways great job, hope to see more soon ~Zonza
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