| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Title: finally. (do a little jig)
Reviewed By: Boop On: March 13, 2006 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! one of the BEST endings every!!! the wedding was simply gorgeous and im like totally speechless. glad u FINALLY finished it and now my sleepless nights can come to an end, and for that , i thank. oh yeah, and...i...LOVED ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! thank u thank u thank u for the wonderful fic. and once again, THANK U!!^_^ -love ya, Boop
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Reviewed By: Bulma the babe2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 15:02 EST
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this story has me hooked. I'm supposed to be in bed curled up with a bottle of nyquil but instead my eyes are glued to the computer screen. THis is amazing. up to chapter 20 after only reading it for 3 days. Its amazing how well the High school thing works and the characterization is fantastic! the school sounds a lot like mine...minus the demons and drugs..lol...we had set social groups like that. I love the way Inuyasha acts in this...as bad as that seems. It just works. I hope he'll get a little less self distructive but oh well. :) I cant say anything though...i think i still hold the record of how many individual class periods you can skip before getting caught. 127 is the magic number. Anyway I cant wait to read more ^.^
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 18:31 EST
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sigh* are u still gonna have a last chapter? if so, wheeen? but so glad *tear* that inuyasha and kagome got back together. this has to most definately be one of the top 3 fics i've ever read!! (and i have no life so that's out of a lot of fics)
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Reviewed By: Bulma the babe2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 12:19 EST
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woohoo! another amazing WELL WRITTEN story to satisfy my fanfiction cravings! and keep me entertained at work :) this is great...so yes i've only read a couple chapters so far but this is VERY cool! I'll review as i read more :) Jessi
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Reviewed By: Fuega1 On: February 26, 2006 15:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it is one of the best i have read and i am sad it is pretty much over. the grammar could be better but it is as bas as others i have read. this is diffently best writing i have read except for maybe sueric. i hpe you add the last chapter soon-
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 13:18 EST
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I'm sorry to say that this is the first chance I've had to read this chapter, and I feel bad about that since this is one of my favorite stories. Normally I read the chapters you put out as soon as I see the notice in my e-mail, but my kids and other reading were taking up my time. Now for the reason I'm reviewing. You said in the A/N that there would be one more chapter... how long until we see it? I can't wait for it now!!! Take your time, I'm not trying to pressure you. Keep up the good work, you rock!! work
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Reviewed By: Rain867 On: February 19, 2006 20:02 EST
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the story started off real well and then just lagged with each succeeding chapter. you're a pretty good writer and the lemons and building sexual tension were nice suspense builders at the beginning but they just wandered off to get more technical...almost like a cliched erotic novel (though most are). i'm at odds with this piece because you write very well but i guess the 'structure' of the story is what gets in my craw...it just lags without much momentum driving it forward. after 70 chapters....it kind of needs to be put to rest.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: luvinpie On: February 19, 2006 12:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm finished reading this, I've looked for fanfics to read but i can't find one that is good as this one, I am so sad, I love this story, its so exciting, well im going to search for a story now, and i am so sad i cannot believe it, anyways bye bye! ~luvinpie
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 05:28 EST
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I love your writting, and I hope you're able to post that last chapter soon. Just wanted to say that, since I haven't been able to every other time I tried to give a review!!
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Title: angry with u
Reviewed By: Boop On: February 02, 2006 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im begging u. PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSE give me a new chappy. it has like been ffffffffffooooooorrrrreeeeeevvvvvvvvveeeerrrrrr since that most touching engagement/wedding scene. Bank, Miro,and Inu singing "On Bended Knee" was so fuckin hot and sweet i had to listen to the song and read the chapter at the same time.it gives the whole scene some serious affect. i seriously wanted to cry. I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!! God, i love that song. i gotta listen to it now. just please hurry and give me the final. -love ya, Boop
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I've been reading some good fanfics for a couple of months now but I would have never expected such an awsome story. You made everything and everyone turn out to be someone in our world. I liked how you took everyday situations and put them into the story. And the way you kept the story going w/a lot of drama was incredible. I am definatly rating this the best stoy I have read...please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: harpersong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 02:58 EST
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The last 2 chapters have made me laugh my ass off! I'm just waiting for the last bits! (If I threaten not to update until you do would it help inspire you? lol) I love Bank's turn around and I'm almost tempted to steal your Jak and stuff him in my closet ^.^ *bows* may your fortune cookies be crunchy and your inspiration flow like piss from a wino...or a waterfall, whichever visual you prefer.
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Title: Dammit! I didn't get an update!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 08, 2006 08:44 EST
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FUCKING HILARIOUS GIRL!!! You hear me? I laughed my ass off. Jakotsu is da shit! OMG, that reminded me sooooo much of my friends in the village & how we used to hang on Christopher street. I was such a fag hag, lmao. I love how you write Bankotsu too. Just brilliant. You put my chi-chis back together again...I guess I'll call off the hit now. *shifty eyes* But seriously, absolute excellence!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: January 03, 2006 16:47 EST
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aw yay!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 03:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, *tear*... That... was so sweet, I loved Boyz II Men. After reading that, now I want to but their gretest hits album, which includes that song. That chapter was so cute, and sweet, and beautiful, I loved it. It was long, and that was great. I can't wait for the next and last chapter. I'm a bit sad this story is ending, I read it since the beginning, and it was a favorite. I'll miss it, but I know I'll read more great things from you... :-) -TrinityK
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