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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: DemonicCatGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 10:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand how anyone could give you grief about this story, it was so well written! I loved it immensely! I hope you would one day consider another fic like this one, I think it was your best yet. Honestly, seeing your dedication is making me want to get back into writing. Thank you for finishing this wonderful story!
| Reviewed By: Elisa On: March 26, 2005 21:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know that I'm supposed to log in when I review, but I forgot my password and don't feel like going through the trouble of looking it up right now. I just wanted to say that I enjoy your writing, and have read almost all of your Inuyasha stories. I like the way you portray them, even though you like Kikyo (just joking. I think we've gotten into mini debates about her on the adultswim board). Anyway, I have to admit that I enjoyed this story. At first I was relectant to read it because of the subject matter. I myself am 20 years old and a college student. It took me a while to get into the mindset to read the story since you portrayed Kagome to be about that age, and I couldn't imagine doing what she did. At first all I could think was how young she was, and how much she had to lose by doing that at that point in her life. All I could think was that she should be in college or hanging out with friends, and that she would lose her figure during her pregnancy (b/c I work hard to stay thin). But the more I read it, the more I liked it. It dealt with very real issues, and you portrayed the situation and characters in very realistc and honest ways. So, I'm sorry for all the flames you got for this story. It's actually one of the deepest ones I've read. P.S: I also love your story purity 3. Can't wait to see how you resolve Ryo and Nezumi's issues!
| Title: :O
Reviewed By: Laura_speed@hotmail.com On: March 20, 2005 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have 3 words for you... OH MY GOD! You have officially earned yourself a place in my favorite authors of all time list! This story was amazing and I was shocked and appauled at the people who had any negative comments on it. I will admit, at first I was a little against the surrogate motehr thing Kaogme wanted to do, but it worked out unbelievably well and I feel kinda bad about doubting that it would work. Thank you ffor continuing to post this story despite the losers who spammed you with requests for lemons (that was stupid... seriously ppl should go find themsleves a life if all they want is a bunch of lemons!) well anywho, I ~LOVE~ your work (I've read Purity and it also blew me away) thanks again for sharing your amazing talent with us ttyl, TTFN!!!
| Reviewed By: jenswit On: March 18, 2005 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are just such an amazing author- I hope to write sagas like you do someday soon. There isn't a single other author I have found on this site and enjoyed as much that writes believable epics like yours. It is really rare to find a good long fic in this fandom with canon pairings (heh, not that I don't enjoy a few uncanon kinks every now and then). I'm sorry that not all people responded as kindly as they should have to this. Keep up the excellent work- you are providing a much needed service ;p
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: March 16, 2005 08:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love all of your stories and im sooo sorry for the hurtful things some ppl have said. this is an amazing story its been an emotional ride since the beginning this is byfar the BEST story i have read! you are truly and awesome writer and i thank you for sharing you amazing stories and creative mind i say you should publish your stories like His Brother's Keeper i would so buy the books and all the other origional stories you have done. THANK YOU SO MUCH for all your hard work and dedaction. you are truly an amazing person. i love this story for its beauty, its passion everything about it Kagome is a wonderful girl who is very caring and you have portrade that very well and i love the idea about Kagome haveing a child for Miroku and Sango i thought it was brilently writen and it portraded Kagomes true natureTHANK YOU SO MUCH for all that you have done, this is truly an awesome story ~~Laura my e-mail sweet_november1@hotmail.com THANK YOU
| Reviewed By: Wesley Jeffords On: March 15, 2005 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated this fic as such beause out of all of the Inuyasha fan fictions i've read, this is by far one of the best. I can't say it's my number one fav, but your writing style, and character accuracy is. I don't think I've read a fic with the characters so honestly rendered as this one. I do have to mention though that I did have the same reaction to Kagome's having a baby for Sango and Miroku as some of the other readers did, although I wish they wouldn't have so hurtful about it. But despite that I kept reading, and I can honestly say i'm glad I did. So despite the emotional rollercoaster this story was, I want to thank you for writing it, because I trully loved reading it. If anything I've written you want to defend, or otherwise talk against, I honor your right to do so. My email is castorgun@hotmail.com
| Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: March 15, 2005 00:49 PST
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hey sueric... i'm sorry you could no longer find joy in writing Metamorphosis due to the words of some ignorant, narrow-minded people. you have a gift, and it is your readers' privilege that you have chosen to share it. i know it was hard for you to finish the story; in truth i could tell you couldn't wait for this story to be over, as the last few chapters seemed rather rushed. however, as an open-minded reader who appreciates well-written works, i still want to thank you for finishing. i know it's easier said than done, but please don't allow your writing spirit to diminish because of other people's stupidity. people can hack at your pride, but they can't touch what's in your heart; and i believe that you, sueric, have an incredibly solid and beautiful heart to have written a story encompassing the wonderful strength found in love and compassion and friendship. your passion for writing in your heart is also very strongly reflected in your works, and i implore you to remember that THAT can NOT be taken away. i look forward to reading more from you.
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 10:27 PST
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whew! i finally finished reading it and i just have to say "ITS SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY!!" AWWWWW i luv the humour in it and the twist of the enemy in the story as well [i dont remember how to spell her name] but ne wayz i c that ur gonna write a continuation...hmmm i cant wait to read that too! and i'll probably try to find the time to read ur other stories too, since i enjoy ur writing style especially of the humour and suspense, and the ending is wonderful as well, my two favorite couples made it through hehe and finally let me jus say it again the story wuz indeed wonderful!
| Title: I loved the story!
Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 12:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:(:(:( How sad! its over! it was such an INCREDIBLE story! I love reading your writing because...well...they're so good...and...I LOVE THEM!!!! What can I say? You have to be one of the best authors in HISTORY!!! ^_^
| Title: gfunkcui03
Reviewed By: gfunkcui03 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 12:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank you so much for all the hard work you put into writing this story. I read Chronicles, then Metamorphosis and I must say they are equally great stories. I will agree that the subject matter in Meta is deeper, if somewhat darker. I will apologize for not reviewing as I went along, but as the stories were completed (half the reason I read them), I wanted to get the whole story before I said anything. Truth be told, this is my first review. Just wanted to say that I love your work and hope that you keep writing. And I wanted to apologize for the unfortunate readers who simply glanced at the rating and starting reading waiting for something that they never fully received. Every scene you created could easily be pictured as occuring with the original characters. Thank you again, and keep up the great work. Gary Christensen gary.christensen2@mchsi.com
| Reviewed By: MissEmily On: March 08, 2005 21:37 PST
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*sigh* You have a very wonderful fic but it makes me sad. I know this guy at college who's arrogant and stuff and I like him. But he likes the other Emily (that's right, she has the same name! Ironic, ne?) and will probably never like me. It's all well and good for Kagome because she and InuYasha always end up together, and it was worth the wait. But for me... Anyway enough about my life, I like your fic! It's very wonderful. You deserve every review you've gotten and more.
| Reviewed By: kaiku7194 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 19:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Great but next time you make a fanfic don't make it too long......
| Title: wow!
Reviewed By: animebaby1686 (not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 11:42 PST
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Omg! this was one of the best stories i have ever read. some of the chapters left me speechless and wondering. i think u did just an awsome job with this story. i can't wait till ur next story comes out and i hope u stick with the pairings.....i think they are the best to write with.
| Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 00:06 PST
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i cant believe its over... i dont have access to the net for two weeks and its over... *sigh* it made me happy though. good ending.. btw.. i think the phrase "It Should Be Good" would be interesting as a title lol.. when i was reading your A/N it took me three times of reading that part to figure out that you werent saying that that phrase was the title.. lmao.. thats what i get for reading at three in the morning... ~Kat
| Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 20:10 PST
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I really admired the way you slowly brought Inuyasha and Kagome together over the course of the story. Given the circumstances, it would have been all too easy to have them give in and "kick it up a notch" for the wrong reasons. This way is *so* much better! (flamers and other bakas, be damned!) And in the process, IY and Kag became so much closer and gave so much more to each other. IY's innate understanding of what Kagome needed during the emotional meltdown of dealing with her post-surrogate feelings was just amazing. I'll admit that it was really difficult for me to have the tension between Kagome and Sango for such a long portion of the story (I hate it when the core group is split or at odds - one of the reasons I love "Chroncles" so much!), but again, you dealt with the situation realistically. It wouldn't have been our Kagome and Sango if the situation hadn't affected them (can you see Kagome just happily popping out the kid and everything being back to normal immediately? Me, either!). I both love and hate that angsty, twisty, lengthy process of emotional discovery - it's hard to read, because (at least for me) it hurts to see them going through all that. But your wonderful, happy ending makes it all worth it. One last thing - you have officially made me a Sexxhoumaru/Kagura fan! Once again, you amaze me with the depth that you bring to Sesshy. I feel like I learn more and more about him with each fic. You are just amazing - can't wait for the next fic!
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