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 Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 18:45 PST
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Geez, are we ever going to find out who her koishii is? This is driving me crazy!! So, he's a youkai who has appeared in the series..who has sort of died.. and Inuyasha had something to do with his death... well, that leaves a lot open. Well, who's ruled out....Naraku, Yura, Sesshy...thats it. Wow. Tell us soon please. I don't think we will be able to take the suspense much longer.
 Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in)  On: February 07, 2005 17:04 PST
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NOOO!!! That doesn't help me at all!! That just makes it harder to figure out who the hell he is!! I had figured out who it could be and then you go and say he's not a moth or butterfly demon. Damnit! LOL I thought it was Gatenmaru or someone like that. Oh well, back to my thinking spot. I thought for a second that the woman was Hisadaicho. And I love how you put in the Dragon Scaled Tetsusaiga, being that it just came out in the manga last week. LOL. "Tetsusaiga is hot." I cracked up when he said that. LOL Ok, I'm done being stupid. XD
 Reviewed By: Serendith (still but a pigment...)  On: February 07, 2005 16:47 PST
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... a Hoover vacuum for youkai. *bursts out laughing*
 Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 16:03 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi Sue, I missed not seeing updates over the weekend but I do understand about your desire to update some of the other stories you are currently writing. As always, this is a great story and very well written. I have read all of the stories you have done and although all are excellent, "Metamorphosis" is the best. Reading this story is like eating the best piece of chocolate ever made and savoring it to the end. LOL I do have a question about the "Koishi". Is this a character that you made up or will it be someone who has appeared in either the movies, manga, or anime? Thanks again, J.
 Reviewed By: Lena17  On: February 07, 2005 15:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Bwahahahaha. Bet you can't stand all these ridiuclous review that I send you...but I guess I'm just an eternal torture!! *insert evil laugh here* Anyways, it isn't a problem. Glad to be of service. Let's see...as for the story? Hmm..what can I say that's unusual but still shows how good I thought of the chapter. AH, dang. I'll work on that at another point. Anyways, congratulations once more! :P
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 15:03 PST
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Okay, got another question about "Koishii": Is he a recently appearing character (as in not yet in the states for us poor sods who don't read online spoilers and wait around for it to come to the states)? He can't be the Neko-Youkai badass, right? Since he was technically killed by Inu-Yasha and Sessy.... Anyway, it doesn't seem quite right....
 Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 15:00 PST
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A/N: Would it help if I say that koishii is not any kind of moth or butterfly youkai? I'll take that as a joke. Keep the chapters comming you seem to be on quite the update roll lets see how long you can keep it up.
 Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 14:46 PST
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so 'rin' would be the translation for scale? I got a little conused because after that fight I figured I would see it as Ryuujin no Tetsusaiga in your fic. lol, but look what assumptions do.
 Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 13:44 PST
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loved it..
 Reviewed By: Corta  On: February 07, 2005 13:29 PST
Comment/Review:
Well yes, it does help a lot! Her koishii's got to be really powerful, then. Right now I don't really care about who he is, but how he managed to change a human into a hanyou of a differnt youkai species. Does her koishii appear before or after ryuukotsei? I haven't seen that far, I've almost read that far and I need to get the rest from a friend who has. Geez, I feel really behind ^^. Continue, onegai! Ja ne, Sue-san!
 Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 12:30 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh, I had a sneaky feeling you'd be able to add your twist on Ryuurin no Tessaiga sometime in this fic! You pulled it off great too! Though i still think its less than impressive compared to that of Bakuryuuha or Kongousouha, but serves its purpose where Tessaiga is concerned. Now there is no surprise there, Madame Butterfly's "Koishii" is still undiscovered and as always, you've upper handed us mere mortals lol. I can't wait to find out who it is; though you've given enough hints, my mind is now drawing a blank... somewhat. This youkai has to be strong and evil in every way for it to have disturbed slumbering youkai and lesser demons and still stir enough Jyaki to cause this kind of reaction… hmm
 Title: Me again...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in  On: February 07, 2005 12:20 PST
Comment/Review:
Jeez people!! I'm reading the other reviews and I can't believe how many still think that Hisa's koishii is the moth-demon Gatenmaru from eps. 51-52 or his cousin from episode 100. (I forget his name *shrugs*) They were both obliterated. Sue has also said that "koishii" wasn't moth or butterfly...so give it a rest already!! - From other reviews I gleened that Adult Swim is up to episode 90 and Sue said that 'koishii' has been aired in the subs! (Gee, I feel like I should get out a notebook and call in a forensics team! hehe) So he was seen somewhere between eps. 1 to 90! @.@? "Time to go digging!" I love a good mystery! Good luck, Minna!!
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: February 07, 2005 11:54 PST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for clearing that up. Hmmm. Not a butterfly or moth, cannon, hates Sess too, and fairly early in the series if he's already been on Adult Swim. (Digging out manga) Back to the drawing board. Thanks for the clues. Oh, and great chapter of course. As for the A/N: don't worry Kagome, subtlety is Inuyasha's middle name (heh).
 Title: Rabid with curiosity....
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in  On: February 07, 2005 11:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Now Hisa is breaking seals...hmm, and her 'Koishi' is cannon! Now I'm going to be wracking my brain to figure out who he is. Many have speculated about his revenge, but you never said that it was the Inu-tachi that were the focus of that revenge; Her first target was Sesshoumaru. (How DID she know about Kagura? That still bugs me. Sess himself barely aknowledged the connection. LOL) Hisa is after Kagome but as a means to an end, and she had to be "primed" for the process first. (pardon my phrasing *snicker*) --- Nice use of the 'dragon scaled' aspect of Tessaiga! (considering he only just used it in the manga, hehe) I'm sure we all can't wait to find out why it gets hot after that technique. "Hurry and tell us, Takahashi-sama!" --- Great chapter. Fast paced and with a little bit of everything; action, drama, suspence and a bit of WaFF at the end, leaving us on a high note!
 Reviewed By: tdgtink85 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2005 11:17 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
is Hisadaicho's koishii the Lord who Naraku took over like when Sango's father died? In that episode he took over the lord or the lord's son's body...something like that. could it be him? My roommate and I are dying trying to figure this out. Is her koishii even human or is he youkai? Don't give us another excuse to rewatch the series lol!
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