| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 20:48 PST
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i loved it.. can't wait for more.. till then
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen angel On: February 03, 2005 20:23 PST
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awesome. wonderfully written, the end was cute. XD heheh. can't wait to see how long they stay in there before someone drags them out.. XD lol.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:07 PST
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You know, I had to go back to Shooting Stars to find the difference. And I liked it. He was afraid of giving himself to her completely. He thought that she didn't deserve to have an instinct driven partner. Great piece and I hope you have more for us soon. Oh and by the way, your story sure has a lot of twist. Just who did they kill that was Hisadaicho love? If I remember right you said it wasn't Naraku. Anyway's update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:44 PST
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Okay, so I'm guessing here Hisadaicho assumes that such sexual freedom and carnality will destroy Kagome's purity as a miko. Am i close? I've been a little unsure as to what exactly she's plotting in that respect. Since she was once a miko, though, I'm thinking even her current wanton behaviour is shaded by the ideal that sexuality is somehow impure and I'm not even going into sexuality with a hanyou! You don't have to confirm any of this if you don't want to, I'm just thinking out loud. Oh, completely off subject, but I just saw the episode "Souta's Brave Confession of Love". Between Inu-Yasha and Kagome there was a whole lotta blushing going on and I just have to say every time Inu-Yasha's cheeks coloured I thought of your "fire-rat" and "monk-in-pain" reds. *laughs*
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 03, 2005 15:33 PST
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Hmmm....yeah. Kagomeis definately evil...sweet and evil....hrm......interesting.
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Title: lolz
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (^^) On: February 03, 2005 15:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw poor inu! quesiton tho, kag's power was supposed to be released or she was supposed to get pregnant the nite of the full/new moon. if she didn't actually complete the act that nite, and if it was the following morning, does it still count?? lolz great chappie, poor miroku always so nosy, and inu is finally gettin what he deserves! great update!! write more!!
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Reviewed By: Lara Roberts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 14:12 PST
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I thought that the chapter was very well planned out, written, and detail oriented. I can tell that you have been scheming for quite some time to finally be able to let Inuyasha overcome his complexes of being a nobody and nothing more but a filthy half breed. I'm so glad that Kagome broke through his walls and showed him that he really was her everything. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great writing ^_^
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Title: Don't look Kids!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 03, 2005 13:19 PST
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Lovely. Kagome's relaxed response once she woke up was perfect for calming InuYasha's anxiety. Poor hanyou didn't know what hit him! LoL --- Now who's sneaky? InuYasha hisses, "Hush, wench! Tell `em I ain't told you yet." The only thing missing was him winking at her. LMAO!! -- Great! Loved it!!
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Title: Score for the sneaky wench
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 13:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter as always Sue. The love scene was beautiful and touching. I got all emotional reading about it 'cause I'm such a romantic at heart and reading about a love as pure and ethereal as Yasha and Kagome's just makes me blubber with tears of happiness. Anyways I get this feeling that Hisadachio was thinking about preventing the two of them from breaking the toxin. Is there a still part of her that is Emi inside her and that part had her hesitate? And as for Hisadachio's koishii, for the life of me I can't figure out who it is although there's little nagging voice in the back of the voice that says I already know the answer. I think I better go back and read all the earlier Hisa scenes because I'm sure there has to be clue that I'm missing in them somewhere. Hmmm... I wonder how long Yasha and Kagome are going to stay in that hut. And secondly, how much the hut stand of their lovemaking before it starts to fall apart? ^_~
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 03, 2005 13:00 PST
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ou la la la la. What a stubborn little Hanyou. So.. the big question.. Did that break the toxin? hahaha. And just how long are those two love, birds?, going to stay locked up in the hut before someone becomes suspicious? te he he I enjoyed that very very much. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 12:42 PST
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wait, I'm a bit confused, did they do it before, or after he transformed back to a hanyou...
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: February 03, 2005 10:58 PST
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How ironic that the very ones who had destroyed him would be the ones to give him life again.... What?!?! So that has to be Naraku! Right? It has to be! Who else could it be??? Watch it be somebody else that I totally forgot about. LOL So that's it? The toxin is broken? And Hisadaicho won...in a way? I was a little confused about that explanation about how her "koishii" would be brought back. Or maybe it's just 'cause I'm slow and don't get these things right away. Don't worry. I'll get it in like a day or so. LOL
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 10:00 PST
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so even though Kagome was still asleep when InuYasha realized what was going on, did they really break the toxin? I thought they had to be fully awake and do everything from the dreams to break it.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 09:37 PST
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A lovely chapter as always. They deserve alone time - away from the others - it's to bad Kagome had to seal his ass into a hut for it - but at least he got the point- This will help the whole mated/married thing. Of course Marko will probably find ways to needle them both, as he takes such delight in making them blush and stammer. There needs to be a time when Kagome or InuYasha turns the tables on him - if that's even possible.
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 09:24 PST
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Now that the toxin's broken, I wonder what the warped mind of our villaness has planned for my favorite couple. Obviously it has something to do with relasing Kagomes sexuality, but what? And if Inuyasha didn't accidently expose himself to the toxin in the first place, how would that have affected Hisadaicho's plan?? Wonderful chapter even without the citrus.
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