| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 15:54 PST
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I think Hisa has Kagome where she wants her. Her soul is whole, and has been - ah - matured? - completed? something like that because of the mating. With the toxic effects not broken, Inuyasha will still not be able to hurt her as well. I guess it's time that Hisa starts to bring back her koi, she's has Kagrua doing something, so - hum.. all things come 'round.
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Reviewed By: cla8012 On: January 20, 2005 13:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, all I can say is that you are an amazing writer! Your stories are great and your portrayal of Inuyasha's & Kagome's relationship is really wonderful. It's not too much fluff, not too much angst, and good enough sexual tension =) I've been reading your other stories Torrent, Purity, and am in the middle of Chronicles. I've stayed up way past bedtime to finish your stories, hehe. Thank heavens for writers like u!
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 08:56 PST
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well the toxin problem sucks, but hey at least Sesshoumaru can't give him anymore shit. I liked the way you made this scene, I don't think either of them were ooc from the manga/graphic novel, i am confused as to why mating wasn't good enough to break the effect of the toxin, that's what he was dreaming about right? Ja ne Kurisu
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Title: im finally all caught up!
Reviewed By: coldfeet007 On: January 19, 2005 21:09 PST
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and what a wonderful chapter to cap off my metamorphosis binge hehehe... this chapter contained so much beauty and emotion that it leaves me wordless ... wow i read your best lemons and think that was so amazing how can it get any better and low and behold it does ... that was like all the best things put together ... sex, love, rocknroll, chocolate, donuts etc etc etc and just leaves you with that happy after sex glow of ahhhhh that was good ... you are the queen of the lemons =) .... now on a different note ... poor Kagura ... will she ever be able to get out of underneath Hisa's wrist? ::sigh:: i hope so poor sesshy this doesnt bode well for him either ... thanks for this wonderful chapter! good luck on the project for your friend i'm sure they will love it =)
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Title: chap60
Reviewed By: procrastinating007 On: January 19, 2005 20:50 PST
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ooooooh Hisa is up to so much evil .... ::bites her:: but i do look forward to seeing what her evil plan is mwahahahahahahahaha... and Inu Yasha and Kagome just keep getting sweeter and sweeter ... you write them so well =) .... and wanting lots od bathes is not unnatural at all lol =P
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Reviewed By: ixchen (still away) On: January 19, 2005 17:32 PST
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loved it... very good.. can't wait to see what will happen
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Reviewed By: keifu On: January 19, 2005 16:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah.. this chapter is so good. it's perfect. The lemon scene was just so beautiful & not overrated. They are now mated weeeeeeeeee so happy. Yet I'm hvin this bad feelin bout Kagura....hmmm.. and wuld Hisa wanna break the vial, to torment Inuyasha w/ his erotic dreams?? and yah, the toxin was not broken because, both Inuyasha and Kagome havnt performed the dream?? aniweis.. A very very good chapter. Thanx so much. God bless (cannot wait till next ch)
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 14:26 PST
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I can't breathe. I can't wait for Inuyasha to explain to her what he's been dreaming. . . Do I see "monk-in-pain red"??
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 12:17 PST
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Hmmm...didn't act out the dream, eh? I think I know what that means, but you know too. So I won't voice it. Kinda glaringly obvious. Tho' I think Inu-Yasha's wrong on that one. I think Kagome would do *that* for him. Oh gods...the shit's about to hit the fan in Sessy-land. I'm crossing my fingers for the realization of their future life. Fantastic lemon, by the way. I'd say one of your best. I'm sure all the irritating people are happy. Or maybe not. Who knows. LOL.
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 10:37 PST
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^_^ Yay! They finally did it!...hmm will they have a traditional marriage? hmm?
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 08:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, how perfect an opportunity that was for them? All that poor hanyou has gone through and still down on his luck! (covers snicker) that's what you get for having such *cough* graphic dreams (chuckles) poor puppy! (LOL) I wonder if he'll kiss and tell that the toxin is still in affect? I can see him being secretive about shaking the veil until he gets caught! We all know Kagome has eyes like a hawk; still I really don't think she'll mind acting out his dreams! Maybe luck is on his side if that were to randomly happen!! I can't believe Sesshoumaru wouldn't have been instantly alerted to Kagura's wonderings, I hope he really will be her knight in shinning armour this time around…
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (I'm not even gonna bother...) On: January 19, 2005 00:06 PST
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*dies* Wow! It finally happened! But the toxin, that sucks. I don't think Kagome would mind a little *ahem* roughness. LOL Was that even what happened in his dreams? I remember only vague details. But yea! Kool! And Kagura, she's gonna end up dying. I know it. Just have this feeling. And hey, if you have to help a friend out, worry about that more than this story. I would drop anything to help a friend. ^.^
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 23:22 PST
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Wonderfully warm and sensual. The long awaited lemon has arrived with a starry accompaniment. WAFFage galore! ---- Kagura's time is up and her summons has come. Can she really sneak away in the middle of the night without the oh-so-alert Sesshoumaru's notice? He knows that something has been bothering her and would be doubly watchful. --- oh my...I had a feeling about the terms of 'acting out the dreams' to rid InuYasha of the toxin's effects. I'm not sure if I should laugh or not. InuYasha has been through so much to get this far...only to find it isn't quite enough! Hoo boy! Maybe he can keep shaking the vial in secret...but Kagome is a little too observant. She'll probably notice and then grill him about "why?" *shakes head* Poor, poor doggie-boy...will he finally spill the beans or still be too embarrassed to tell her just how 'graphic' his dreams are? LMAO! (I guess I chose to laugh after all)
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Title: sixty WOOWOO
Reviewed By: hotcocoa007 On: January 18, 2005 22:12 PST
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i can so understand the super ticklishness ... once it starts there's not stopping it until i can't really breath anymore.... hehehe i feel like we are moving closer and closer to something ... but i dont knwo what that it is yet .....
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Title: chap59review
Reviewed By: tails007 On: January 18, 2005 21:59 PST
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wow it DOES seem like the forces of the universe are working against InuYasha ... lol but at least he got some loving in the bathroom until Souta had to interrupt and damn thats gotta be embarassing ... lol he's a hanyou on the edge lol
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