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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 › » ] | Reviewed By: Akihanah (its not letting me sign in..grr) On: January 16, 2005 20:47 PST
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Wow. I feel most sorry for Souta. Walking in on his sister, and I think he knew what was going on too. What a shock. Poor guy. Fanfiction.net is having lots of issues, isn't it. of course, so is mediaminer...oh well. nothing is perfect. Iwazawa? Did he just die? I doubt Hisadaicho would have sent something that weak, because it seemed like Inuyasha easily disposed of him, or so he thinks... hehehehe evil laugh. I have said this before, but you are the Update Goddess. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. I look forward to your updates. The tension between Inuyasha and Kagome is amazing. I am sure that when or if you get to that lemon people are bugging you about it will be unreal because of it! Keep on keeping us guessing!
| Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: January 16, 2005 19:29 PST
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hey...what you wrote was citrus.Lime is multiple lemon.got it?im not being mean....im just stating a fact...heh..^^;;;;
| Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: January 16, 2005 16:51 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i havent reviewed in quite awhile... but i would like to personally say that anyone who only reads fanfics for sex is totally putting shame upon themselves as human beings. the whole idea of writing is to express one's thoughts and feelings toward something in which they believe in. not something you obsess over. if you want sex then go look at porn! it's as simple as that. i know i might be coming off a little harsh but that's the reality of it all. great chappy, sueric, great ending note, and thank you for your time and effort to write such a beautiful story. goodnight.
| Reviewed By: hangover hanyou On: January 16, 2005 16:44 PST
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okay, id like to tell you for one, i love the fact you make a fanfic based on a storyline and not a lemon, and i too do think ppl are degrading themselves when they only read for literally 'porn'. theres a specialness to, as i like to put, 'making love'. (it sounds better to me than 'fucking' or having meaningless 'sex' and certainly better than 'rutting'.) but um i know this question might catch a few off guard, but do guys really resent having to 'releve' themselves? do they think it's shameful? see i've never thought about it really... and uh ..yeah. *blush*
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 15:44 PST
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*grins* Hey, I always try to squeeze a little bit o' info outta you. Can't help it, curiousity killed the Iggy. Wow, I'm amazed that you still get people begging for more naughty lemons. I've gotten over it really, have found your style nicely refreshing. Yeah...there is enough PWP out there for people to find what they want on their own (I think I may have written one of them but it's quite classy thank you very much and the sex is not at all meaningless. So does it count, i dunno?) Anyway, this was a wondeful chapter, as usual. Is Hisadaicho's boy still going to come after the vial or am I somewhat right in thinking that the vial is about to become a moot point? Hey, this time I'm thinking out loud. Really. Honest.
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 15:32 PST
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Their little sessions are very steamy of late; the sexual tension is blowing Inuyasha's poor mind and looks like his body is also trying to tell him something. Aw, he still believes it's wrong to take pleasure into his own hands; I love his innocence so much. Miroku, as always, to the rescue and a better friend for the hanyou. He knows how to talk to him without having the hanyou reveal too much. I enjoyed this chapter, especially the interaction with Miroku and Inuyasha, its great seeing them so open. Especially when one is talking to a perverted monk! lol. Looking forward to the next update!
| Title: Once again, success!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (stupid mediaminer...) On: January 16, 2005 14:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ex-ce-llent!! I love this story usually I give up reading after this amount of time, but wow. Can't wait for the next update!!
| Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: January 16, 2005 11:47 PST
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hmm... i like souta. really, i do. he's a really awesome little brother to kagome. but if i were inuyasha i probably would have strangled him at that moment! haha... well that lime was perfect, and i'm glad for the little interruption because... well, that does happen in life. it's unlikely that, when you're in house occupied by others or you're constantly surrounded by your companions, you'll never get caught. hehe. great chap, looking forward to the next one. hisadaicho... exactly what are you up to...?
| Reviewed By: LeeLu (what happened to the "sign in" rule??) On: January 16, 2005 01:05 PST
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Certain skills, huh? I SOOOO want to know what those kind of skills are! LOL Damn you Souta! Gah! So close...I feel for you, InuYasha. I say we gang up on the next person who interrupts and do a super attack on them! I've been playing the PS2 game way too much. I hope you don't think I'm begging for a lemon. 'Cause I'm not. I mean, I enjoy them when you write them, but I hope you don't think I'm just reading your story just for the lemony goodness. I love all of your chapters! ^_^ People who beg are smelly and rude and, yea... I can't think of words to describe people who beg for lemons. LOL
| Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 00:50 PST
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*giggles* Poor Inuyasha... I wonder why it is he thinks it's so unnatural and wrong to... what would be an appropriate word here? Self Love comes to mind... but, eh... I think you get the point. *falls down laughing* Interruptions... don't you hate those? I loved Souta's reaction. He didn't seem too concerned. He was probably thinking, "Hell, it's about time!" LoL. As for people demanding lemons... well, I think if it were my fic, I'd put the lemons off an extra chapter for each person who complained. But I'm evil like that. *cackles* I enjoy lemons, the little deviant that I am, but do people seriously want Inuyasha and Kagome to do it just for the sake of doing it? How tasteless.
| Title: oh yeah!
Reviewed By: kagz On: January 16, 2005 00:03 PST
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oh!! but what i wanna know is just how low did her hand go, and exactly WHEREE was she brushing him. o,o would she really do that if she was that shy just about touching his chest? >> hm.. but if it was just brushing... darnit. >
| Title: im in love! XD
Reviewed By: kagz On: January 15, 2005 23:46 PST
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oh, the bitter-sweetness of sue-chan's writing.. ::whimpers and writhes in agony:: torture! but i love it! ,o_o, ::pouts and begs and pleads, puppy eyes:: more? more??
| Title: ::fanning face::
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 23:42 PST
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Wooooo, my. I think we can safely assume InuYasha is a wee bit frustrated =) And Miroku... the Feudal Freud! LOL, he would be a wonderful psychologist if he could live through the lawsuits ^_~ I wonder what this ...new development in Yasha and Kagome's relationship will do, lol
| Reviewed By: ixchen me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 23:13 PST
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i loved it.. can't wait for more. have a good day.
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