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Title: Whoa..
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (logged in?) On: January 09, 2005 09:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting good...I wanna know what Inu and Kag are gonna make of Sesshoumaru's advice in the future...I hope inu listens, and i wanna kno how sashoumaru helps...i think inu better get to claiming kag soon...
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 08:58 PST
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Well, seeing that Kagura is there in the future certainly gives the impression that things work out for the best. I love how scared Jaken was of Kagome, as he should be of course. How is Sango's self doubt? I know you'll get there.. just wondering.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 07:21 PST
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loved it.. can't wait to see what they find out. until then. loved it..
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Title: Don't bother asking, I don't know...sheesh!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (signed in?) wtf??? On: January 09, 2005 00:23 PST
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Uh oh, the strange lady Kasuga drops a few unwitting thoughts (or deliberate?) into Sango's head, and like seeds they will grow. Hopefully they will be weeded out before they bear fruit. ---I think my favorite part in this chapter was the short trip through the well when Kagome gets playful and InuYasha suddenly turns serious on her. I absolutly love the dynamics and the interplay between these two (tie me down before I float away) and now he's contemplating that oh-so-tempting cure for the toxin. But he also knows that's not the right reason to indulge. His heart will keep his head on straight; I have faith in our doggie-boy. ---How do you keep pulling ideas out of your hat? Sesshoumaru takes Kagura to get "father's blessing"...wow. Another originality award...hell, everything you write is so original it's amazing. If I had even a smigen of your drive...I'm completely envious. (As are we all, I'm sure! LOL) I hope you get regular back rubs from all the hours you must spend bent over the keyboard...You deserve it!
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Reviewed By: aitu-- not signed in On: January 08, 2005 23:03 PST
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*stares at review box, once again, in shock* Do you see this.. Is this really happening? I didn't even have to curse and push all the buttons repeatedly this time! I'm so shocked that I forgot what I was going to say, hahaha. Hmm. Good job? Well what I had originally thought to say was much better than a simple good job. But my brain seems to have left my head. but yeaa.. It was a job well done. hehe. Hopefully MM.org keeps behaving like this! It will make things oh so much simpler. Bye bye and take care!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: thumos flint On: January 08, 2005 22:57 PST
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Another great chapter....I'm happy we are getting to see Sesshoumaru's and kagura's relationship grow, its nice to see Sessy happy. I have one question though, isn't Sesshoumaru the Inu tai-youki (sp) so wouldn' t that mean that his rule is only "restricted" to dogs. I don't know i 've heard that his father is the Lord of the western lands or the Lord of the Dogs so i'm confused
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Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story. its unlike any other.but your killing me with how long its taking kagome and inuyasha to do the deed. other then that keep up the good work. your very creative.
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Reviewed By: Nursie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm a newbie, but Wow! I just finished all 52 written chapters! (Without my glasses... what a headache! *lol* First of all, I have to say that you are a wonderful writer. That is just plain obvious. I have to say that this is the first Inuyasha fic I have read all the way through, simply because of all the really bad fics I've found and lost complete interest in. (especially in this rating category.) I hope you will agree with me when I say that most of those are written by authors that have no understanding of the material they are trying to write about which is something you have absolutely NO trouble doing. Although I must admit I am getting just about as frustrated as Inuyasha with all the tension between him and Kagome I totally respect your reasoning behind it. (I'm a fic writer myself and have been bugged to no end by readers awaiting the steamy stuff. I don't think I'd ever venture into Inuyasha fics though, I'm having trouble with the ones I'm working on. I think I much rather read your fic! I'll stick to my Harry Potter and Voltron fics and enjoy this fic instead. =P While Inuyasha is one of my favorite animes, I don't believe I quite understand it enough to go writing about it. This is something you do very well and I can not commend you enough for it! I look forward to the rest of the story and hope you update soon. I'm a little awed at how fast you do so, I can't seem to update once a month with my own fics!!! Great story, and written very well! Hugs Nursie
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh good i'm glad Naraku isn't on a comeback. come on Kagura FIGHT fight fight... Great chapter as per always LOL waiting for the next to come soon. 'orion
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 15:54 PST
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*grins maniacially* I sense a lemon! I really do. Maybe not the next chapter but soon, dammit.... You're breaking my heart with the Sessy-Kagura parts. Argh...so perfect but...*growl* Hisadaicho.... (Please excuse this manic review...have a mentioned I haven't yet found a sane sleeping pattern since the new year?)
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 13:23 PST
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Evil laughter, huh? Now I'm scared of what you'll be coming up with in future chapters. LOL. Is InuYasha depressed or something? I mean, I'm confused. I thought he was happy with Kagome. To me, it sounds like he's comtemplating staying with her forever. All this confusion is making me think too hard and that hurts my brain. LOL And now Kagura will be Sexxhoumaru's mate? *sigh* Now I can see either Sexxhoumaru dying for her, Kagura dying for Sexxhoumaru, or Kagura killing herself and Hisadaicho at the same time...even though that can't be possible if you've already killed yourself. At least give me some kind of hint if I'm getting closer to discovering what goes on in that evil mind of yours.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 12:36 PST
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Damn Hisadaicho anyways, lol. Now Sango is gonna freak if Kagome even looks at Marisaiko. Oooh, can you see Kagome's face if she goes to touch Mari and Sango can control herself? It'll take another 40 chapters for InuYasha to get her past that hump.... Yeah, I really don't think InuYasha wants to play anymore, woooo ::fans face:: 'I can take it if you can Kagome?' Is it just me or is it getting a bit warmer in here? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 10:44 PST
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Oh boy. Looks like Sesshoumaru is finally admitting to his feelings. And Inuyasha is still in denial. He would loss his headache if he just talked to Kagome about it. I mean they are adults. Right? Hope Sango doesn't have anything to worry about. I know that Kagome had at one time wanted the baby back, but not now. But then Hisadaicho might cause problems in that area. Can't wait for more. Later.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 09:15 PST
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i loved this one to..
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Reviewed By: ixchen (again) On: January 08, 2005 08:55 PST
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loved it. can't wait to see more.
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