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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very kind of mysterious chapter because it brought up some questions like will Kouga kill Hisadaicho and will he die himself. Also if to say Inuyasha killed Hisadaicho how would this affect Kouga since that is his mate? Like I said it just brought up some questions but anyway I love how Kagome and Inuyasha are getting closer together. I love the way in which you show how their relationship is progressing. I have read a lot of fanfics and I must say that you have shown their relationship in the best light. As always you have done a wonderful job on this chapter with your beautiful writing style. Great job!!
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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 06:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful chapter and I love how you put Sessshomaru and Kagura together. The romantic in me just smiled and went AHHHHH! Also thank you for answering my questions. It is nice to know that you pay attention. I can't wait til the next chapter and as always great job!
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Title: Here's 1500 characters of love to you Sue!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 01:39 PST
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Sue, you give us so many breath-taking moments in your writing. I don't think anyone has mentioned specifically, but the moment when InuYasha was reflecting on how long it's been since he's been that close to another person was probably my absolute favourite InuYasha/Kagome moment in all of InuYasha fandom. I beta-ed it when you first wrote it, I beta-ed it before you posted, and I've read it twice tonight before reviewing... I have had a fresh wave of tears for it every single time. It is the most stunningly beautiful representation of their relationship that I've read. Ever. Period. I know you said you wanted the betas to review and make you laugh, but I don't think that's what you need today. You've heard my opinions on the last few days of reviews, so I won't harp too much here... I simply want to say that above everything else you're doing this for yourself--not for the fools that continue to plague your boards. Writing is an outpouring of your heart that you share with all of us. It is a privlege for us to be able to read and it is sheer benevolence on your part to continually share yourself with all of us in this manner. To all who read this: Sue gives us 500% everyday. If you don't have the guts to leave a signed review to share your opinions, then don't share. If you can't sign it, we probably don't want to hear it. Own up to your words and think before you use them. They are, as Sue demonstrates daily, very powerful. Sorry I had to do this here. |
Reviewed By: silver_angel_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:37 PST
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Okay, can Kagura still fly? like on her feather? if so i cant remember when she did, so can ya pin-point the chapter in which she does? this Oro person, could it be Hisadaicho in disguise? (like how the pharamones affected Inuyasha, did they effect Ichisaru? and what i really want to know is if inuyasha and kagome shake the vile, then go to sleep, then they both wake up again, and then go back to sleep, and do NOT shake the vile the second time, do they still have dreams? because if you think about it, it's really the same thing as waking up, doing something for a lil while and then heading back to sleep, or even waking up, doing something for an entire day and then heading back to sleep. (and in that case you state they have to shake the vial in order for them not to have dreams). so why does it make a difference between say... 5 min. and 24 hrs. ? just basically explain to me what the 'rules' are stated for the vial.
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Title: guess who's back?
Reviewed By: silver_angel_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:21 PST
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Yep! thats right, I have returned to the reviewing board! i thought it was really mean that everyone gave up on reviewing just cause they didnt wanna register. its been sooo long since ive got to write to you! and since last time I wrote, I have been wanting to ask some major questions! so finally i go through all this mess in order to register, just so i can review for your story. cause 1: i felt bad for tellin ya i would try to review everyday, and 2: your stories are some of the best ive ever read and i think you should be congradulated constantly for your great effort in updating everyday, writing good storylines with non-OCC characters (which really is very very hard), and put up with other peoples criticism day after day. so with that said, i think ive about run outta space so i'll just make another review with some of my questions ive been DYING to ask!
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Reviewed By: SarahGray [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story and i love the way you always update so quickly dont listen to the bad critics, i may not be the all knowing guru on anime fanfiction, but i am enjoying you fanfic very much. thank you for writing it. oh yea and i kinda am hoping that it is a happy, romantic, lemony ending. im a sucker for those
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 17:51 PST
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As all ways another great chapter. I love the way Kagome always throws Inuyasha off balance. It's great. Hope they will be able to save Kagura. It just won't be fair for Sesshoumaru. Later.
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 17:30 PST
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HAHAH! See?? I knew you were planning one! And I bet the first one will be between Sexxhoumaru and Kagura...am I right? I have to be right. Please let me be right? LOL I gasped--loudly, I might add--when Sesshoumaru kissed Kagura. I couldn't believe it! I thought she would do it to him. Although, she's probably scared because he's all "I'm beautiful and pretty so you can't touch me or you'll mess up my prettiness." LOL Hey, that's what I think of him. He's all prissy and stuff, especially when he flips his hair back. I always think of the Covergirl commercials whenever he does that. LMAO!
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Title: 602 or 589?
Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 17:22 PST
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oooooh going to find Oro.. i wonder if he will be able to tell them anything about Hisa or if there will be a fight? Awww such a sweet moment for Sesshy and Kagura... this only means the angst must not be too far away =P But, i do wonder what all could he do with the fliuff ... mmmm... another great chapter =) but then again what else do i expect from you? random question for you: do you like grapes? or apples? have you ever tried a grapple (weird hybrid apple that tastes like a grape)? they are very good. =)
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 16:30 PST
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Ahhh...lovely scene between Kagura and Sessy. Actually made me sad because of what *I* know is really going on and...*sigh* Please, I want a happy ending for them, I do.
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 13:02 PST
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Oh wow. Just... WOW. Kagura and Sesshoumaru... beautiful! They are so perfect together. I haven't gotten that far in the manga (only the first eight volumes) and I don't think Viz has it translated that far, so I don't know what really happens, but you've portrayed the way Sesshoumaru feels about Kagura so beautifully. Oh, and Inuyasha and Kagome fluff! All I can say is 'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!'
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Reviewed By: ixchen (won't let me sign in...aahhh.) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 11:21 PST
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wonderful as always. can't wait for more..lol. until then.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 11:19 PST
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wonderful as always. can't wait for more..lol. until then.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 11:19 PST
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wonderful as always. can't wait for more..lol. until then.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 11:19 PST
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wonderful as always. can't wait for more..lol. until then.
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