| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Aitu-- does not want to be the cause of Sue's death, therefore will not sign in. On: November 12, 2004 07:31 PST
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hahahahaha! PLEASE don't die, Sue! I thought about signing in just for once, but since it would cause your death, I think that I would have quite a few uphappy people coming after me nad that would be rather unpleasent! te he he. But who knows---maybe sometime I'll catch you off guard-- when you least expect it--- like when you're sleeping or something. hehe Did Inuyasha actually turn green there because I'm pretty sure that he did? Isn't jealously a funny thing. Poor guy though, it seems like my compassion for him can just never leave. Well at least now maybe he'll sit down and think about what he did. So yea, great chapter! Loved it! (when don't I???) Take care and happy writtings! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: firehairedpixie-n.s.i, cuz I'm @ work. On: November 12, 2004 07:04 PST
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You know, you really do write BakaYasha very well. hehe Houjou-thingy!! I like that, that was good. Made me smile, which of course got me weird looks from my co-workers. And I feel really bad for Sango. I think miscarrying as much as she has would be enough to make anyone crack. I just hope that you'll be a benevolent writer and give her one baby. :-)
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Title: Akihanah-too tired to contemplate signing in
Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 05:39 PST
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Poor Sango. She really does deserve a child. I think all it would take to stop the fighting would be for either Inuyasha or Kagome to back down. But thats my opinion. This story is already off to a great start. Two chapters, Sango's miscarried, Inuyasha and Kagome have fought three times, and Kagome's gone out and kissed Hojo. The sheer action is killing me. Keep writing more action packed episodes!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 12:48 PST
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Sue!!!! I am so SWAMPED at school that I have yet to catch up on Chronicles, but when I saw that you had started another story, I had to take a peek. Wow, you've caught my attention! Hope all is well with you. Shirin
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Title: Metamorphosis
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 09:37 PST
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Oi, Sueric, out of your imagination come true gems for my eager eyes to read. With Chronicles almost done, you've snuck in this one to dazzle and bemuse us. I have to let you know that this is an excellent chapter 1 to get the attention, and start the questions. Tell me, is his hunting trip at the SAME time every month, and is it almost a week lone? I know that sneaky wench is from Chronicles, but maybe you ought to change your Nom De Plume. I think it fits you too. lol. N E way, great start for new fic. I love your stuff, doncha know? fotclmoa. (fall off the chair laughing my a** off)
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Reviewed By: serendith (not signed in) On: November 10, 2004 21:22 PST
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And here I was worried that I would be bereft when "Chronicles" was done! What can I say - you're my hero! ;)
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not sign on) On: November 10, 2004 11:33 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! GREAT BEGINING TO A STORY I SURE IS GOING TO BE GREAT!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: firehairedpixie - not signed in On: November 10, 2004 09:11 PST
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Yay for Sue!! I'm glad I'll still have something to read from you when Chronicles ends. :-( Not that I want it to end. So Houjou huh? And the mysterious outings that BakaYasha is going on. Hmmmm But again I say, YAY FOR SUE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 04:29 PST
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Interesting story as of so far, I'm sure, with you it can only get better though, please continue once you have a chance.
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Title: Tease!
Reviewed By: Naeryn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 23:46 PST
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OooOOoo... now I want to know what happens next! Great start, Sueric, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 22:14 PST
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This promises to be another great story already! You know, it's a rare thing when I like every story an author writes, but you've made me like yours. I don't know how you do it but I'm glad you do! Thanks and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Brenda (aka babmidnight) On: November 09, 2004 21:42 PST
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omg I loved that! especially the last part. I look forward to when you post more when that time comes. :)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 21:34 PST
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Awesome. Keep up the excellent work. Inu got no right to make that kind of threat, he ain't exactly dating her. And he had better not mention something like he is after the jewel. If he likes her he better make it crystal clear or she will leave him. Though it is good to know that he cared about the date. Even thought it was in a way of a threat. coolsa.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(nis) On: November 09, 2004 21:18 PST
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just liek the tilte states i want more....ya ok i'm done...ja ne.....oh waite i forgot my manners please and thank you's
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Reviewed By: Akihanah On: November 09, 2004 21:02 PST
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I find it rather funny that Inuyasha gets mad at Kagome, and claims he has no feelings, then gets insanely jealous every time she even talks to another guy. Its really rather revealing. I like the first chapter, but I'm curious as to what happens. (duh) Good luck with this and with Chronicles. I have never tried this before, and just want to see if it works.
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