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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 › » ] | Reviewed By: Silent Sky On: November 22, 2004 21:24 PST
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wow, that's three chapters for me in one day! yay! (angelica incarnate is keeping me updated, since ff.net is still down.) so kagome is going to do it. good for her. (but i still have to wonder, will it work? will she get pregnant? we have a month (in story time)to find out...) but, ah, inuyasha will freak. but then again, think about what he does every day for kagome, the sacrifices he makes. can he really fault her for helping those she's cares about? and it's not like she slept with miroku. i dunno, once inu gets over his initial explosion (which is inevitable) maybe he will aceept it and not be too upset. well, we can hope. okay, i dunno if i'm just totally creating this in my head, or if there is some truth to my suspicions, so i'm going to muse out loud. for how long exactly has inu been having these (very naughty) dreams about kagome? i wonder if it has anything to do with that powder he got on his hand, and probably breathed in. perhaps it is the bad woman's (i'm not going to attempt to spell her name) influence that is forcing these very naughty dreams on him. i mean, inu is not the type to fantasize about women. is she getting him all riled up so when she shows up, he'll be vulnerable and needing some, ahem, loving? what's poor inu to do? i hope he gets back to kagome fast. she'll protect him from the evil woman... i hope. well, i'd babble on more, but sadly, i'm out of characters to type. (darn...) awesome chappy! ~Sky
| Title: FayeMegan
Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 20:53 PST
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oh! it's getting better and better! I can't wait for more, I hope something good happens with InuYasha and Kagome!
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 22, 2004 20:37 PST
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I'm getting all excited about InuYasha finding out about this. Why? I'm weird and I'm a fanatic...of the story! LOL How will he react? Will he go berserk? Will he cry? Will he yell? Will he beat the crap out of Miroku? Why he would beat the crap out of Miroku beats me. LOL
| Reviewed By: Ashra_Ab On: November 22, 2004 20:28 PST
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Wow!!! I think that this fic is great and also that to have a baby or not is a very hard decision, I dont know if I could do it without getting a lil attached u know? If Im so fond of my cousin's baby, I cant imagine what would it be if I had to bear it for 9 months.... But I also think that is the right thing to do and Im just waitin to see how will Inuyasha react to the news.... pls update soon [and a chapter a lil longer if you can] great work [as always] see ya
| Reviewed By: Nicky (swear ff,net hates me) On: November 22, 2004 20:15 PST
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First off lemme just say how excited I was to get 2 chapters in one day! Always a treat. Second of all Inuyasha no baka! Never touch the weird looking powder because it always ends up bad. If his dreams are getting worse each night I think he just may need to take up permanent residence under the water fall(or have Kagome bring him lots of coffee.) And definitely a good idea for Miroku to be out of the village when he finds out what Kagome has done. Miroku may want to look into moving to the mainland. Man Kagome is gonna have a lot to deal with when Inuyasha comes back. Although if my Aunt's pregnancy was any indication you do NOT want to mess with a pregnant woman. Not if you value your life that is. Ah well we shall just have to watch and see how things all play out.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 20:01 PST
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wow..it's getting down to the wire..can't wait..
| Reviewed By: fred10-1 On: November 22, 2004 19:48 PST
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I personnaly think its a bad idea-but- its your story to do what you will with it. good luck!!!!!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 19:16 PST
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I know I said this, but I'm glad Kagome has decided to do this for her friends. I just hope that everybody doesn't die from embarressment. ----Oh my, InuYasha's having some difficulties. Maybe going back to Kagome right now would not be a good thing for him. What if his dreams push him beyond his control when confronted with the real thing? Hmm...can't wait to find out. Good chapter.
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 19:08 PST
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I'm just loving it. I'm here for the whole ride!
| Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: Squalleon On: November 22, 2004 18:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter. I tell you, it amazes me, the depth of which you handle your characters. I wonder, however, about this dream of Inuyasha's. While it seems a typical young man's dream of his significant other, there are a few interesting things of note that do give the (intentional, I'm sure) impression of an overhanging anxiety to the entire thing. Maybe not as wholesome as it may seem? Now I would guess that he had somehow gotten a bit of that odd powder in his eyes but I noticed that he quite thoroughly washed his hands, did he not? Again, so interesting. I assume that the last bit in the chapter dealt with Kagome's actually making ready to conceive. It will be interesting to see how Inuyasha reacts in the end. I have a feeling that it will not be a pretty sight but I could be wrong. His reactions and your grasp of them do compel me to a greater understanding of his character. Though he tends to be hot headed, he also adores Kagome. Quite the dynamic. I salute you. All the best, Squalleon
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: November 22, 2004 18:07 PST
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WOW, what a story this is turning out to be! I was wondering what Kagome what going to do with Miroku's 'esscence'. Is Kagome going to get pregnant this time around? How is she going to keep it from her friends and the ever-persistant Houjo? How is Inuyasha going to react to all this?
| Title: hakama-inuyasha's pants that he tries to remove while sleeping
Reviewed By: Sari15- who can't log in...ever On: November 22, 2004 18:03 PST
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I am rolling here!!! HAHAHAHHAHA Our poor little hanyou...having nocturnal dreams that get worse and worse every night. By the time he gets home to his 'Kagome-bear' he's gonna be exhausted, sleep deprived and horney as hell. Poor guy will probably climb all over her while their sleeping, with those dreams trying to become reality. Imagine Kagome's shock for that one!!! So why is he having these weird dreams anyway?? Something tells me it has to do with those cocoons he found.... Poor guy has a REAL reason to hate his 'pathetic' human side now....rotflmao. OH the horrors of self satisfaction.....hahahahahaha Well...Kagome is going to do it!!! I hate to be her when Inu gets home.....boy is he going to be PISSED
| Reviewed By: Silent Sky On: November 22, 2004 17:29 PST
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wowzers, it sure is more complicated to leave a review on mediaminer than it is on ff.net...i hope i didn't screw this up... as you may have guessed, ff.net is not working (and here i was, waiting desperately for another chapter, day after day, hope flaring every time i checked only to be dashed to pieces in a surge of disappointment, and you were writing chappies all along. ::sigh:: well, i know now, thanks to angelica incarnate. ^^) so i'm using mediaminer for the time being. hmmm...will kagome really become a surrogate mom? and what will inuyasha do? (lol, i'm picturing kagome six months pregnant and inuyasha still clueless.) and how will sesshy deal with this lavender-eyed vixen? somehow, i can't picture sesshy falling for her charms... that powder is worrying me...and inu got some on his hand...oh dear oh dear oh dear... well, awesome two chappies. you got me guessing (and i love it. predictableness (is that a word? i doubt it...) is one of my major pet peeves when it comes to writing/reading. thank goodness you're immune to the cliche-syndrome. ~.^) i have no clue what's to come. ~Sky
| Title: Okay that's just mean of me. Sorry i promise to update next time.
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (I'll log in if you update) On: November 22, 2004 17:24 PST
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Inuyasha's so impudent! (I had to look that up) I know what you were talking about a couple chapters ago with the Mother/Mommy thing (though mine is Father/Dad)My father left me and my mother and my mother met my Dad3 years later and I love him and he has always been there fo0r me so i consider him my Dad. Enough about me, That Hidasaicho(?)is evil!!!! Kidnapping Rin! Lord Fluffy isn't going to be very happy!! Andwho is her koishii? (Not expecting an answer) Good luck to Kagome!
| Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 16:04 PST
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I like the story, but you seem to be repeating yourself alot. Sometimes repetition is good. It adds to the severity of feelings and the importants of events, but it can get out of hand. You do not have to address every problem in every chapter. Repetition is good, but it does get tedious to read.
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