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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 › » ] | Reviewed By: Meggie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I finally got off my lazy butt and decided to comment! I'm really enjoying this story! Every time I'm so thrilled to see a new chapter... it brightens my day. =)Your writing is just great. Your grammar, spelling, and puncuation are always accurate, which is such a relief from all the drivel I've been finding as of late. I really like how this story is handling all the characters. They seem as though they actually have grown up becuase they're dealing with their problems in slightly different ways than when they were younger. Inuyasha's outburst at Kagome was just heart-rending. I could feel his pain through the anger, and that takes talent to convey in writing! Poor Kagome. I hope she gets a real apology from Inuyasha eventually, since he usually just ignores what happened, and she forgives him so quickly. Miroku owes a great deal to Mama Higurashi, I think. I'd hate to think what the heart-broken hanyou would have done to the monk had he not heard the whole story. This was a great chapter! I loved the emotional ups and downs, plus, we got a confession of love from Inuyasha!(Even if it was only in his head.) Can't wait for the next one! =)
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 12:48 PST
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**sniffle** Sango's garden. Kagome's decision. Inuyasha's reaction. **sniffle** can't seem to help myself. I'm such a sap. I look forward to Sango and Miroku's reaction - happy news for them.
| Reviewed By: ThumosFlint On: November 23, 2004 11:56 PST
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So sad...and those words from Inuyasha really did hurt and they weren't even directed to me.You can't blame him though, right?Well at least they kinda made up in the end. And well Inuyasha won't hate Kagome anymore. Miroku is going to be in pain very shortly.I must say its going to be a very long 9 months.
| Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: whit On: November 23, 2004 11:39 PST
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this is a really good fic and i want you to please update this ASAP!!!!!! please update really soon i lovesd yor story so much. i hope that inu comes to realize kagomes decision and that miroku and sango are happy. oh one more thing please update soon and whoo hoo yess yesssssssssssssssss oh yeah! what a story! umm...hehe had to add that in Overall rating:10
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 23, 2004 11:25 PST
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Wow. I cried when he called her a whore and said he never wanted to see her again. Damn. That hurt. I was shocked that he would actually say something like that to Kagome. So...are we gonna see "Dead-monk" red anytime soon? LOL Corny, I know. I still can't believe she's actually going to go through with this. But, ya know, I think after she has the baby, it'll spark something within InuYasha to convince Kagome to have a baby of their own if you know what I mean *wink wink, nudge nudge*. LOL
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 11:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you will always amaze me, you know that!? Making Kagome's mom great it through InuYasha's head, i never even thought of that! Well kepp up the good work, I'm falling in loev with the story all over again!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 10:24 PST
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Well, bringing Mrs. Higurashi in to help soothe the ranting Hanyou was a stroke of genius! She is one person he won't just blow off. She got him to listen and now he's thinking...about what Kagome did and didn't do...and about what he did and didn't do. He didn't listen when he should have and he let her down. That temper of his really gets him into trouble. ----- Nice little scene at the end; Kagome removing the rosary and InuYasha covering her with his haori and sitting with her until the sunrise. Now it's time to discuss things more calmly. Great Chapter.
| Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 09:30 PST
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Wow. Lots of emotions flying high here! Inuyasha. I still feel like kicking you in the head.You best make things right, boy! Do I see lots of flowers making themselves into Kagome's hands in the future? haha So where are Sango and Miroku vacationing at for the next 9 months? haha. Somewhere warm and exotic I hope. Don't think facing Inuyasha is going to be a very fun time. Hmm, so everyone else isn't able to sign in and for some reason I am perminantly signed in.. something isn't right here, hahaha. Who knows... Once again-- wow--- great chapter! Take care!! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: Nicky(might as well join mm.org) On: November 23, 2004 07:20 PST
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Ouch. The things that he said definitely hurt. Ya know I have that problem too...saying things I don't mean because I'm angry. Usually ends up with me in whole load of trouble. So it worked, huh? Kagome is having a baby! Time for celebration! Maybe some cake? Thank goodness for Mama, cause Inuyasha was definitely not listening to Kagome. :::sigh::: hope the monk has enough sense to stay away for couple of weeks. Gosh this was a great chapter. wonder how the next convo between Inuyasha and Kagome is gonna go...hopefully there'll be more talking and less yelling.Till next time.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 06:05 PST
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wow..so it's done..
| Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 06:03 PST
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Just started reading this one after enjoying the roller coaster ride of Chronicles. Oooh. Uber angsty! Surrogate parent in fudal times. Difficult! You know she's going to want to nurse the baby. That's going to be awkward. And of course, the baby's going to smell like Kagome so Inuyasha is going to have strong feelings about the child. Wow, what a set up! Be strong Inuyasha!! Sitting down, fastining seat belt, keeping hands and arms inside the vehicle. Prepared to ride Metamorphosis. Woo hoo!
| Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 23, 2004 05:05 PST
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Crazy emotional--I'd just love to see Kagome's response to seeing InuYasha having a dream about her, lol...Poor Inu, it sucks that he feels like a whole ass (not just a part of one, mind you!) Since you seem to be a pure Inu/Kag writer, I won't fret about the outcome of this story. Oh, and I wanted to say that I think it's crazy that you manage to update sometime during the day, and it's always when I'm awake. Like this last chapter? It was around 4:30-ish when you updated. And yesterday morning you updated around 9-ish, and I was awake. Either you live in a different time zone then I do, or else we both keep crazy hours. Well, this has turned out to be a pretty long review, so ttfn. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
| Reviewed By: Morly On: November 23, 2004 04:59 PST
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sniffle, wipes away the tears. What an emotionally charged chapter. The words, the power behind them and the end which I really liked. Inu can be so hotheaded and not think, I'm sure in the future he'll stop and listen to what she has to say. This really changes their relationship and I can't wait to see how you have them interact throughout the pregnancy.
| Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 00:07 PST
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Heh, nice fic, I just caught up on this..... don't read much on mediminer, but I'm gonna start reading your fics here to.
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate On: November 22, 2004 22:26 PST
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::raises a brow:: A wench, am I? You have no idea how wench-like I can be! ...Sorry, minor Aladdin moment. Hmmmm, dreams are fun aren't they? Just think what will happen when InuYasha not only sees Kagome again, but smells her. Cherry blossoms and spring rains, eh? Instead of typing my views and questions all out, I am agreeing to every point made by Sari15 in her review, and I see that someone else brought up my other question. Who is Hisadaicho's koishii? When will we see her toy with Sesshy? And what is up with the, I believe iridescent, powder?! NOTE: Keep your favorite author happy! Leave some review love! (key word: LOVE: if you don't want to read the story, just stop...don't waste review space to tell all of us, including the hard-working author, that you don't like the idea and refuse to read any further. Just go away.)
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