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Reviewed By: GranolaBar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 16:54 PST
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I loved it. A little monkey youkai stealing the jewel. Who would've thought that would ever happen? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 15, 2004 16:35 PST
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With all of those "I wish" statements being thrown out-- I keep thinking that maybe one of them will come true. Kagome be the surrogate mother of Miroku and Sango's children?! =O I'm sure that Miroku would enjoy that-- but what about Inuyasha-- just wait till Kagome has to explain those terms, hehehehe. Once again--- great chapter! I can already tell that this will be a giant success! Good luck and keep up the amazing work that never ceases to impress me. ---Aitu
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Title: suppys!
Reviewed By: JadeFighter (never signed in) On: November 14, 2004 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hellos!!! mes is back for this story too!! :D i just wantsta says i love all your writings and i think this is gonna be another wonderful fanfic. but maybe inuyasha needs a little bit of payback...hehe just a thought...ya buddy, whos da bi-otch now?!!! woops, crazy moment... laterz jade
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 14, 2004 16:02 PST
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Ooooo! A sinister villain lurking in the shadows! Hmmm, she sounds interesting. Uh, she is a 'she', right? LOL Cuz that would be funny if in the next chapter she was actually a guy. Hahaha! I'm just a little crazy today so bear with me. At least InuYasha thanked Kagome for the ramen. A little compliment sometimes goes a long way. He has much to learn!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 01:21 PST
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Great chapter. Though I do find that last thought of Inu's ironic. Cause he would just die if he caught Hojo doing that. So what is this villian. Why can't they figure out how to purify the Shikon? Could it be that it the Shikon is needed now and it can't be used until that certain time? Will the wish be one to save the life of someone? Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Title: yea
Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:39 PST
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i love how it's going so far..
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Title: You have a gift...
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (not logged in) On: November 13, 2004 17:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sueric, I clicked on the link for this story, not even knowing it was yours (I've read and re-read your work, because I love every piece.), and as I started reading, I thought, 'Well, damn, this is really great. It reminds me of something else I've read. Maybe not a story, but a feeling.'Then I found out you wrote it, and I was sure of one thing: You have a recognizably eloquent style when you write, and every piece you submit is equally as good as the last, if not better. You have a gift to captivate anyone who reads what you write, and you exercise this gift to your fullest extent, AND you have kids. How do you do it? Thank you for making the world of fictions not suck. PS. You said you're a writer, so I pose this question... Where can I buy something you've written? Thanks. ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Not Signed In On: November 12, 2004 16:51 PST
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Don't you just love it when I'm not signed in? :P Anyways... I loved the chapter! Inuyasha sure is acting very jealous... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 11:10 PST
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Why doesn't Kagome just explain to Inuyasha what happened with the kiss? And why the heck didn't Hojo hear Inu growl!? It would have solved the whole problem! yea yea i know with out it the story wouldn't be nearly as interesting. Still doesn't mean i can't be angry! It's only just begun and there's already so much angst. And poor Sango! Her and Miro really deserve a baby. And hey i'm not lazy today! (well acctually i am but i needed to sign in any way)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 12, 2004 10:19 PST
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I feel some angsty-ness coming about! I know I'm already going to fall in love with this story. I fall in love with every story of yours. Are you trying to brainwash us? 'Cause if you are...that's okay. I don't mind having someone else in my mind once in a while. LOL
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 09:50 PST
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woo-hoo, another great beginning to what i'm sure will be another great fic by sue. :-) great opening premise...poor sango. :-( thats really tough on the poor girl.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 07:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good so far, I feel so sorry for Sango. Also I wish for once InuYasha and Kagome would operate on the same frequency, but where would the drama be in that. I hope thier misunderstanding of eachother dosen't lead to thier down fall. So please update soon.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Aitu-- does not want to be the cause of Sue's death, therefore will not sign in. On: November 12, 2004 07:31 PST
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hahahahaha! PLEASE don't die, Sue! I thought about signing in just for once, but since it would cause your death, I think that I would have quite a few uphappy people coming after me nad that would be rather unpleasent! te he he. But who knows---maybe sometime I'll catch you off guard-- when you least expect it--- like when you're sleeping or something. hehe Did Inuyasha actually turn green there because I'm pretty sure that he did? Isn't jealously a funny thing. Poor guy though, it seems like my compassion for him can just never leave. Well at least now maybe he'll sit down and think about what he did. So yea, great chapter! Loved it! (when don't I???) Take care and happy writtings! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: firehairedpixie-n.s.i, cuz I'm @ work. On: November 12, 2004 07:04 PST
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You know, you really do write BakaYasha very well. hehe Houjou-thingy!! I like that, that was good. Made me smile, which of course got me weird looks from my co-workers. And I feel really bad for Sango. I think miscarrying as much as she has would be enough to make anyone crack. I just hope that you'll be a benevolent writer and give her one baby. :-)
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Title: Akihanah-too tired to contemplate signing in
Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 05:39 PST
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Poor Sango. She really does deserve a child. I think all it would take to stop the fighting would be for either Inuyasha or Kagome to back down. But thats my opinion. This story is already off to a great start. Two chapters, Sango's miscarried, Inuyasha and Kagome have fought three times, and Kagome's gone out and kissed Hojo. The sheer action is killing me. Keep writing more action packed episodes!
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