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Title: Metamorphosis Ch. 9
Reviewed By: Squalleon On: November 21, 2004 18:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just great! I admire the fact that you bring up a topic that could go largely ignored. It is easy to think that everything is happy and bright for everyone, but that you choose to push the envelope is highly fantastic, especially after a masterpiece like Chronicles. Many would sit back on their laurels and let the accolades accumulate without feeling the need to go further, to explore something a bit darker. Hisadaicho, while completely vile thus far, is far more compelling because of the layers of sexual tension. Again, I cannot wait to see where you go with this, and I look forward to reading your updates! ~Squalleon~
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 17:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, a wonderful story and so soon after yet another amazing story (Chronicles was awesome). I always can't wait to read your stories Sueric. Hmmm will Kagome's choice be mute in the end I wonder? After all, doesn't Ichisaru need a family to love him?
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:03 PST
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Just read the lemon...my my my...See now if you could combine that sort of raw sensuality with your emotionally intense lemons for Inu-Yasha and Kagome...then we'd have a treat, now wouldn't we. I really don't understand why you decided not to post it on media miner, though. Have you *read* my "Love's Fierce Purity"? Not much better in the smut respect.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 15:52 PST
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I'm still not sure if I'm going to head off to read the...errr...lemon. I assume the reason why you put it on was because it's not your ususal emotionally driven stuff. Hmm, interesting. I still don't know how to react to this...slutty demon(?) woman, except if she she thinks she can seduce Sessy....LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, and the rest is good, poor Kagome can't get around to telling Inu-Yasha about the surrogate idea. Since the artificial incemination thing is out, what other choices does she have...? Ummm. Scratch that. Don't answer that. *Sheesh* Talk about monk-in-pain red....
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: Flames101 On: November 21, 2004 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 10:18 PST
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i loved it.. i can't wait to see what is going to happen..
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: November 21, 2004 10:10 PST
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Still loving it! I have a feeling I'm gonna love all your stories. I've already read Purity and am working my way through Chronicles (I am amazed at how fast you produce your chapters) ----Anyway, Kagome as a surrogate mother; yes, I can see her doing it. When you know before hand that the child is wanted and will be loved, as well as being able to be a part of the child's life as Auntie, I think that Kagome will find that the 'giving' of the child won't be a difficult as it could be. She knows that Sango & Miroku will be wonderful parents; there is no mystery because she knows who the prospective parents are. As for all the technical assisstance that will obviously not be available to her (and the fact you said that there will be NO "relations" between Miroku & Kagome) there's always the old joke of using a "Turkey Baster" LoL!! Who knows, it might actually work. Let's hear it for Low-Tech!! :P --- And InuYasha is definately going to explode when Kagome finally gets him to listen to her plan. Hoo boy! The imminent fireworks are going to rival the 4th of July celebration in New York & Chicago put together. With InuYasha's tendency to jump to conclusions...well, I hope Kagome knows where to buy a 'blast shield' or maybe some riot gear to protect herself (Miroku too, once he thinks about it and jumps to another conclusion about "how" Kagome could possibly carry the Monk's child) ROFLMAO!! I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 09:16 PST
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=O!!!!! What in the world?! It says I'm signed in again... This is getting rather strange. Once again, I feel like hitting Inuyasha several times. JUST TELL HER!!!! graaah! And Kagome: JUST TELL HIM TOO!!! hehehe Great job-- loved it. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Nicky from FF.net On: November 21, 2004 09:11 PST
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So ff.net won't let me review, so i came here. In response to your A/N I agree that there is definitely a difference between a mother and a mommy. And I believe that Kagome would realize that the baby would be Sango and Miroku's not her's. Plus I don't think she'd have too many problems(besides the physical ones.) with carrying a baby for her friends. Ah well once again Inuyasha is just screwing up. Use those cute fuzzy ears and listen! He's gonna be pretty upset if Kagome decides to do this without his thoughts on the plan. Hmm...really hope the villianess isn't at the cave or else Inuyasha may be in big trouble.
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Title: : - D
Reviewed By: IfIICouldMarryInuyashaIWould On: November 21, 2004 08:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey hey! Sorry I missed reviewing, I've been uber busy, but when I finally got TWO chapters after waiting patiently to get off of work and out of school, I was rewarded with TWO, count 'em, TWO chapters! SCORE! Anyway, I had a question: It seems like when Inuyasha and Kagome talked about helping Sango and Miroku, they kind of just "passed" on maybe transporting them through the well, like they wouldn't even try. Had they tried it already and were sure it wouldn't work another way, or do you have a real (plot important)reason for not trying. I've seen attempts where Inuyasha constructs a harness and they all have to touch either Inuyasha or Kagome to get through; I didn't like that scenario, but that's just me. I just felt like you gave up on the well. Anyway, thanks for listening. Ja ne. ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Title: damn it ill try again
Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sigh:: having to write this review again ... damn you mmorg! ... ok to start off I am not a hentai beta, but if I am it's from you're excellent hentai writing lol =P ... all I can say for Chapter 8 is damn that was intense ... your new villianess is so creepy, evil but intriguing... I can't wait to see where you go with this fic ... once again superb writing, but what else would I expect from you =)
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love introspective IY, even when he's so unnecessarily hard on himself. But sometimes you manage to make his feelings so real that I can almost see him angsting his little hanyou heart out. --- I don't know why I get the idea Kagome won't go through it. I could be wrong but... dunno. Call it a bet against myself.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 16:15 PST
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*sighs* I'm really not digging this surrogate mother thing. Maybe I'm just not looking forward to Inu-Yasha's reaction (I can hear the screamng, can you?). But, it's you're story and do what thy whilt and all that good stuff. Other than that I'm enjoying the story and am glad that the sharp and prickly edges off Inu-Yasha's temper have worn down a bit more. He was just off his rocker in the couple two chapters, I still don't get that.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 20, 2004 14:47 PST
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Wow. I read the lemon on AFF and that was...different. LOL. Not in a bad way, I guess. But she seems evil, and it fits her perfectly. She might just be more evil than Norimitsu. And Kagome can't even tell InuYasha what she really wanted to say. I wonder how she's going to approach him about this.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 11:13 PST
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Why isn't the uncensored version on mm.org? AFF goes down so much now and its database is messed up even as I type this. Please post the uncensored version here on mm.org too. Thanks. I'm enjoying this story.
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