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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 › » ] | Title: Lena17
Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 21:55 PST
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Oh man..what a desicion for Kagome to make....to have the kid or not. I would have thuoght that the option would have been all Sango and Sango was the one who would have her own kid. I commend you for your twists...very unexpected, an keeps me reading on through. Excellent job!
| Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (wont let me login) On: November 18, 2004 18:20 PST
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HI! I so wish my mom was like Mrs. H! So when is Kagome going to even ask Sango if she WANTS Kagome to be their surogate mother? Not that kags wouldn't be a great one it's just that i know some people don't feel confortable having their child born to another mother, or having their husband make love to another woman even in their situation and era.Well atleast we have Mrs. H there to work things through! She can be used to solve so many problems! (not being sarcastic which i know is hard to beleive from me ^_^)
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 18, 2004 16:55 PST
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Ack. You had to bring Kikyou up in this, didn't you? Don't get me wrong. I love seeing Kagome beat up on InuYasha about him seeing her, but it just reminds me of how stupid InuYasha can be sometimes. I knew Kagome would end up going to her mother about this surrogate thing. I'm not an expert at these surrogate things but if Kagome does go through with this, isn't it a bit more complicated if you're a virgin? Or am I just being an ass and making you go crazy because of the stupid questions I ask? LOL It was just a random thought that popped into my head (that happens too much nowadays LOL) and I was curious. Anyway, good chappie!
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 16:42 PST
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Oh Dear ... InuYasha's head is going to explode when Kagome tells him her plan to have a baby (assuming she decides to ... which knowing her caring personality it will likely happen). The fur will fly! I just hope that Miroku survives because somehow I am sure he will enjoy the idea way too much (even if they do it the "non-physical" way) and knowing his penchant for taunting InuYasah ... we might see the return of "Monk-in-pain" red! ;) I love how you have totally recreated your characters (Inu and Kags) so completely for this new story. Both stories have them in character and yet they are so different! Intriguing...
| Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Asa Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 16:12 PST
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are you really serious with this...is kagome really going to be sango and miroku's surrogate. omg, i don't even know what to think abou that. i can't picture that AT ALL. but if anyone can pull it off you can *bows* WORK YOUR MAGIC ALMIGHTY SUERIC.
| Reviewed By: Naeryn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 13:59 PST
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Somehow, I had a feeling that you were going to take this story in the direction of Kagome being a surrogate mother, or at least, considering it? It's about time she got smart and talked this over with the one person who knows exactly what it will mean - her mother. Moms are a lot smarter than most of us realize, and Mrs. Higurashi has always struck me as being one of the smartest and most perceptive mothers out there. If anyone can give Kagome some perspective on what to do, it's good old Mama. As for Kagome being "lip-raped and it's Inuyasha's fault," ... ummm, I'm more inclined to be a little less forgiving of Kagome for not telling Houjou to get lost and Kouga that she has no intention of ever being his mate. While Kouga, admittedly, probably won't listen very well, anyway, it would make her relationship with Inuyasha about the situation a lot better. Hurray for how Chronicles ended, I can't wait to see how you pull this one together. :)
| Reviewed By: jubes On: November 18, 2004 12:21 PST
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Just a question: how is kagome supposed to be a surrogate when she can't bring Miroku or Sango to her time for a doctor to furtilize Sangos egg and put it into Kagome?
| Reviewed By: Morly On: November 18, 2004 10:55 PST
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Well I just finished reading Chronicles and after catching up to this point I can see it wasn't a fluke, amazing writer I'm hooked into the story already. One question Kags didn't put Inu on the cons list. She knows how jealous he is, how would he react to her having another man's pup. And not just another man's the letches pup ta boot.
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 18, 2004 09:49 PST
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haha-- lip raped-- who said that? Anywho-- it was funny and made me laugh. Loved it. And loved this chapter as well. Never a bad one, in my opinion. So Kagome's going to her mama to ask her opinions. I'm not going to lie to you-- I don't think that I could goto my mom with that kind of dilema even at my age >.< They must have a very completely open and honest relationship. La, La, La, can't wait to see what's next! Great job Sue; you're the bestest!!!! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: Prsnr24601-FFICsimon On: November 18, 2004 09:43 PST
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I am pleased to see your story is progressing nicely. How long do you think it will take before the first major conflict will occur in the story? Oh and by the way, I commend you on your obviously keen sense of observation. Not many people realize that the McDonald's parody of Inuyasha is really called WacDnald's. Most people say it's WacDonald's because of the resemblence. And for I while I thought I was the only one who noticed that!
| Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 07:53 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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To be sincere I have very strong, ehem, issues regarding surrogate mothers. I think it'll be interesting to see how you board the theme through Kagome's eyes. --- The story is good, its foundation is strong and, most importantly, it makes me curious about what is to come. The new villain, IY's feeling, IY's reaction to Kagome's thoughts, M/S's reactions to Kagome's thoughts. Kagome's thoughts in themselves... lol --- I still don't know where you're planning to go with this story, but I can tell you this, it's been quite a long time since I've wanted so hard to know the outcome of a fic. (well, mostly because I don't do WIPs, too. But you update quickly enough for me to follow. *g*) --- The only thing I don't understand is why Kagome doesn't consider adoption before this, I mean, with all the wars, it's not as if there wouldn't be a baby in need of parents in the past.
| Title: in love once again........
Reviewed By: Asa Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 19:25 PST
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No offense sue but inuyasha is kinda an asshole in this fic. I found myself wanting for Kagome to go with Kouga...lol...but i must say whoever this Hisadaicho is im lovin her. Serioulsy i think she is so kewl...dunno why, especially since i hated ayamakita so much in chronicles. Ah well....anywayz im luvin the story so far, keep it up
| Title: I love it... again!
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIwould (not logged in) On: November 17, 2004 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again, you have made my day, a thousand times over! So much fluff, so little time! So any word on the Kagome/Sango/Miroku baby? If I know Inuyasha as well as I think I do, I don't think he'll be to keen about that particular scenario. Oh well! Happy trails! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 17, 2004 15:30 PST
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A favor, huh? You should never tell InuYasha of all people that you owe him ANY kind of favor. He's just got "evil" written all over him. Hehehe. So this girl is gross and evil. She just pleasured an old man who was old and, well...old. LOL. Is she as bad as Norimitsu or worse?
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Darkless_Vasion On: November 17, 2004 12:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking your storyline for this fic. It's very sad about Sango's multiple miscarriages. Sometimes there is nothing you can do. I had an Aunt with a turned uterus(I'm not sure what you call it) and she had to do a knee/chest position several times a day until she conceived, then had to continue throughout the pregnancy, until she got too big, to prevent another miscarriage. She only has the one child. I love the interaction between Kagome and InuYasha. Their unique relationship of arguing/caring just shows how much tension there is and the issues that need dealing with. They've been through a lot together and, now that Kagome is older, maybe they are ready to explore the 'boundries' a bit more. Wow, Kagome has been kissed twice now and neither time was InuYasha. He is understadably in a tizzy. (That green monster sitting on his shoulder is screaming in his ear and won't leave him alone) Poor Kagome, sometimes when the person you like is so totally clueless, you just want to smack the daylights out of them. Of course that won't really help things...will it? Your writing style shows polish and experience, very easy to read and understand. Your attention to details allows the reader to visualize what is going on. I look forward to more. Your villain looks very promising. I'm a great believer that the bad guys should be BAD! That's what make you hate them and why you root for the good guys. The badder the villain is; the louder you cheer for the heros.
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