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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 › » ] | Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 14:23 PST
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i loved it. i can't wait to see what happens with inuyasha's favor..
| Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: November 27, 2004 14:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(amused) i can't believe some jerk had the nerve to tell you to 'stop writing'. frankly, you are one of the most unbelievable writers i have ever come across. I have no idea where you find the time or inspiration, but I am in awe. Kudos to you. I love all your fics, and I look for their updates all the time. keep up the most excellent work.
| Reviewed By: Kellen (can't sign in...idiot internet!!!) On: November 27, 2004 13:34 PST
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Oi, Sue, I've said it before on Chronicles, and I'll say it here: you write what you wish to write. This is a story of magnificent proportions, and if the romance was too easy, I'd question the longetivity of the relationship. It is a beautiful story with such interesting dynamics. That said, I really must tell you how much I LOVED the InuYasha/Sango dynamic at the end of chapter 14. They are my favorite characters and to see them interact is a wonderful thing. :o) (To clarify, they are my favorite characters, but I don't like to see them in a romantic relationship.) Poor InuYasha and the mood swings. This is going to be a LONG few months, eh? LoL. Looking forward to more, cheers, Kellen
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not signed in) On: November 27, 2004 13:34 PST
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Okay, I'm loving the pregnancy storyline,anything to get the ball roling, eh? LOL. But I think Inu-Yasha and Kagome are adorable right now, and the Koga confruntation, pure brilliance. I'm looking forward to a lot of weight fights though. Somehow, I don't think Inu-Yasha's the type to pull the "no koibito, you're not fat, you're glowing" crap. Hisadaciho...oh, what a clever woman! Still though, what on earth could she be wanting Sessy for? I mean, it doesn't seem like the obvious is in mind.... Interesting. Rin was adorable, by the way. The whole thing about Kikyo having to give back Kagome's soul because it doesn't belong to her was very sweet. Who would've though: Sessy's teaching her manners!
| Reviewed By: RadioNmyHead... not logged in On: November 27, 2004 13:16 PST
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What happened to Monday? Hahaha, not that I'm complaining, I just hope you aren't neglecting your family to appease your hungry readers. I love Kouga's reaction! Such a good puppy... will InuYasha learn a lesson from this boy? Doubtful... but it would be nice if he did. Some days I wonder why Kagome doesn't go with wolfy. Great chapter!
| Title: omoshiroi
Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: November 27, 2004 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
mou, some people are really, really narrow-minded, ne? one of the things i love about fanfiction is the FREEDOM to get CREATIVE. so for those who flame because you can't open your minds just a little bit more... i feel really sorry for you. one day you'll realize that the world isn't black and white, but shades of gray... anyway... i will get off my soapbox now... sueric, only rumiko takahashi is rumiko takahashi, and of course no one will ever assume her greatness... but you and your fanfics are pretty damn awesome! keep it up. =) haha, will kouga EVER get a clue?!
| Reviewed By: kikyou_1049( not signed in cuz i can't..it's so sad:'( ) On: November 27, 2004 12:34 PST
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Will koga ever learn....he has to be the guy with the thickest head....well any ways i love this story actually i love all your storys they make me cry, laugh, jump for joy, they have everything a great story needs....in my books your the writer if the century....well i hope you had or have a happy thanks giving (ya i live in Canada so thanks giving here is in october)...Ja ne
| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 12:22 PST
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LOL! Kouga is a hoot! Thanks for continuing with this story. I think you are doing an excellent job at keeping them in character given the situation you have dropped them all into, and I'm glad you didn't make us wait until Monday for an update! You've spoiled me so badly that I NEED a daily update from you. Thanks and keep following your muse!
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Kadaede [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 11:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Fan-fucking-tasic" that is priceless and so Inuyasha. You have the best story I have seen by far and I surf AS, MM, and AFF! I hope that you continue the good work. I also wanted to say thank you for your attention to detail, your writing picks up nuances that most writers leave on the shelf. Metamorphasis in a word is stupendous! As well as your other works. I hope you had a great Turkey Day and hope to be able to read more from you soon.
| Reviewed By: Rinicat On: November 27, 2004 11:35 PST
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No kissing....blinks...what an odd...favor? Can you ahem elaborate on that?
| Title: ch15
Reviewed By: Flames101 On: November 27, 2004 11:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: Nicky (lala ff.net sucks) On: November 27, 2004 10:35 PST
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So Kouga handled that well. Better than Inuyasha did.Inuyasha is so gonna regret that favor of his. No kissing anyone?At all? So Sesshy may wanna tape Rins mouth shut for awhile. And is Hi...(forgot how to spell again.) gonna kill Kikyou? Cause Kikyou is actually kinda likeable in this story. Plus she did give Inuyasha some really good advice. Anywhoo till next time!
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 10:35 PST
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That's not how I expected Kogua to act, but it makes since because it supports the 'pack'. I love how Sango and Miroku are way to over protective, they are going to drive Kagome nuts, and Inuyasha is already dealing with her being mental with food cravings and mood swings. As I recall, the pregnant state makes the sex drive more like an overdrive... to many rpms.. every single touch, brush, sigh... Oh and the Dreams!! Yikes!!! It could make for some interesting encounters for the early parts of the 2nd trimester...
| Reviewed By: Morly On: November 27, 2004 09:51 PST
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Inu is a baka what a waste of a favor.
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 09:46 PST
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Huzzah! I am so amused that you said that to him (Jason)! I was talking to a friend about his post and I mentioned that I could barely contain myself from going into the grammar of "im 27"! Yes, we shall all bask in the glories that are his typos - *bask* ... Anywho, I LOVE that you are capitalizing on the "pregnant-mood-swings" thing this time! I don't think you did that in previous stories - it's great! I wonder how InuYasha will take it if Kagome starts to get morning sickness ... heh, Miroku better go into some serious hiding! And for the record, I might have let InuYasha scare Sango and Miroku a bit more - it is going to be a LONG nine months with the way that they are carrying on! I can sympathize with them but it would drive me INSANE. Thank you for the pre-Monday update!
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