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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:24 PST
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oO hmm....well...where to start. monkeys...hehe. thats great. mirokus closing comment was even better..don't stop for monkeys. priceless. next, kagome carrying for them? if inu is pissed that houjo kissed Kagome, imagine how he would feel about her carrying their child...specially being that they can't go through the well and artificially insiminate her....wow...real 'monk dead red'. hehe. keep it up, as always, great job.
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Title: Oh my gosh!
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIwould [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS. I love it I love it I love it. It's so ADORABLE! But I REALLY REALLY hope that this whole surrogate mother thing is with ARTIFICIAL INSEMINATION (with emphasis on artificial) or using SANGO'S eggs, because as much as I love Miroku, that's just gross. Don't go there! OR ELSE! I think you're thinking that too, but if you're not, RETHINK IT. I loved Inuyasha's comment about liking to carry Kagome. Very kawai. I think I'll go read it again. :D ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 17:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story so far. Why are girls always such saps for a cute little animal? I am subject to this too, so i really wanna know. I'm trying to think of how Kagome could carry Sango and Miroku's kid without them able to go to the future. So invetro fertilization is out. That leaves something with the jewel, at least that's what i am assuming. Anyway, great story, eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 16:54 PST
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I loved it. A little monkey youkai stealing the jewel. Who would've thought that would ever happen? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 15, 2004 16:35 PST
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With all of those "I wish" statements being thrown out-- I keep thinking that maybe one of them will come true. Kagome be the surrogate mother of Miroku and Sango's children?! =O I'm sure that Miroku would enjoy that-- but what about Inuyasha-- just wait till Kagome has to explain those terms, hehehehe. Once again--- great chapter! I can already tell that this will be a giant success! Good luck and keep up the amazing work that never ceases to impress me. ---Aitu
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Title: suppys!
Reviewed By: JadeFighter (never signed in) On: November 14, 2004 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hellos!!! mes is back for this story too!! :D i just wantsta says i love all your writings and i think this is gonna be another wonderful fanfic. but maybe inuyasha needs a little bit of payback...hehe just a thought...ya buddy, whos da bi-otch now?!!! woops, crazy moment... laterz jade
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 14, 2004 16:02 PST
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Ooooo! A sinister villain lurking in the shadows! Hmmm, she sounds interesting. Uh, she is a 'she', right? LOL Cuz that would be funny if in the next chapter she was actually a guy. Hahaha! I'm just a little crazy today so bear with me. At least InuYasha thanked Kagome for the ramen. A little compliment sometimes goes a long way. He has much to learn!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 01:21 PST
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Great chapter. Though I do find that last thought of Inu's ironic. Cause he would just die if he caught Hojo doing that. So what is this villian. Why can't they figure out how to purify the Shikon? Could it be that it the Shikon is needed now and it can't be used until that certain time? Will the wish be one to save the life of someone? Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Title: yea
Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 21:39 PST
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i love how it's going so far..
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Title: You have a gift...
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (not logged in) On: November 13, 2004 17:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sueric, I clicked on the link for this story, not even knowing it was yours (I've read and re-read your work, because I love every piece.), and as I started reading, I thought, 'Well, damn, this is really great. It reminds me of something else I've read. Maybe not a story, but a feeling.'Then I found out you wrote it, and I was sure of one thing: You have a recognizably eloquent style when you write, and every piece you submit is equally as good as the last, if not better. You have a gift to captivate anyone who reads what you write, and you exercise this gift to your fullest extent, AND you have kids. How do you do it? Thank you for making the world of fictions not suck. PS. You said you're a writer, so I pose this question... Where can I buy something you've written? Thanks. ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Not Signed In On: November 12, 2004 16:51 PST
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Don't you just love it when I'm not signed in? :P Anyways... I loved the chapter! Inuyasha sure is acting very jealous... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 11:10 PST
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Why doesn't Kagome just explain to Inuyasha what happened with the kiss? And why the heck didn't Hojo hear Inu growl!? It would have solved the whole problem! yea yea i know with out it the story wouldn't be nearly as interesting. Still doesn't mean i can't be angry! It's only just begun and there's already so much angst. And poor Sango! Her and Miro really deserve a baby. And hey i'm not lazy today! (well acctually i am but i needed to sign in any way)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 12, 2004 10:19 PST
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I feel some angsty-ness coming about! I know I'm already going to fall in love with this story. I fall in love with every story of yours. Are you trying to brainwash us? 'Cause if you are...that's okay. I don't mind having someone else in my mind once in a while. LOL
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 09:50 PST
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woo-hoo, another great beginning to what i'm sure will be another great fic by sue. :-) great opening premise...poor sango. :-( thats really tough on the poor girl.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 07:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good so far, I feel so sorry for Sango. Also I wish for once InuYasha and Kagome would operate on the same frequency, but where would the drama be in that. I hope thier misunderstanding of eachother dosen't lead to thier down fall. So please update soon.
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