| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Title: I love it... again!
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIwould (not logged in) On: November 17, 2004 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again, you have made my day, a thousand times over! So much fluff, so little time! So any word on the Kagome/Sango/Miroku baby? If I know Inuyasha as well as I think I do, I don't think he'll be to keen about that particular scenario. Oh well! Happy trails! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 17, 2004 15:30 PST
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A favor, huh? You should never tell InuYasha of all people that you owe him ANY kind of favor. He's just got "evil" written all over him. Hehehe. So this girl is gross and evil. She just pleasured an old man who was old and, well...old. LOL. Is she as bad as Norimitsu or worse?
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Darkless_Vasion On: November 17, 2004 12:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking your storyline for this fic. It's very sad about Sango's multiple miscarriages. Sometimes there is nothing you can do. I had an Aunt with a turned uterus(I'm not sure what you call it) and she had to do a knee/chest position several times a day until she conceived, then had to continue throughout the pregnancy, until she got too big, to prevent another miscarriage. She only has the one child. I love the interaction between Kagome and InuYasha. Their unique relationship of arguing/caring just shows how much tension there is and the issues that need dealing with. They've been through a lot together and, now that Kagome is older, maybe they are ready to explore the 'boundries' a bit more. Wow, Kagome has been kissed twice now and neither time was InuYasha. He is understadably in a tizzy. (That green monster sitting on his shoulder is screaming in his ear and won't leave him alone) Poor Kagome, sometimes when the person you like is so totally clueless, you just want to smack the daylights out of them. Of course that won't really help things...will it? Your writing style shows polish and experience, very easy to read and understand. Your attention to details allows the reader to visualize what is going on. I look forward to more. Your villain looks very promising. I'm a great believer that the bad guys should be BAD! That's what make you hate them and why you root for the good guys. The badder the villain is; the louder you cheer for the heros.
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 11:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ch1. *sniffles* I loved the scene with Sango beyond all that's reasonable. Hit a little too close home, I guess. The pacing there was excellent and so moving. Congrats!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 10:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayay!!! more more! Really good so far! Can't wait for more
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Title: Favor
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 08:24 PST
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Ut - Oh Kagome owes Inuyasha a favor. I hope he doesn't ask for anything stupid like Ramen. lol
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Title: t3h burninator
Reviewed By: code_wyze On: November 16, 2004 22:29 PST
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:O! Miroku ain't gonna knock Kagome up, is he?! Kagome would actually do it, but Miroku might have a breakdown, and Inu-kun would have a caniption fit and go full-blood mode and destory everything. Haha, I'm reading this because I came to mediaminer because of a lemon chapter in Chronicls somewhere back in the late 70s/early 80s. Interesting where trails lead, ne?
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (not logged in, because people are conspiring to take over my computer through Mediaminer and kill me! Just kidding!) On: November 16, 2004 19:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a Miro/San/Kag fic? Cuz i read one of those once. You know, the whole thing that back then that was exceptable, to have 2 wives. I'm thinking either lillies or orchids. Just my opinion.
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Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 16:38 PST
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This by far the best fic I have read in a long time!! Its also very long too which is great!! Please check out my fics!!
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Reviewed By: Kagomesjewel(nsi) On: November 15, 2004 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...the last line is rather forboding for the future... What if Kagome finds a way to carry a baby to term for Sango and Miroku? There would be a lot of factors to think about - not to mention Inuyasha would probably just seal Kagome in a hut then let her do something like that. After all, there are complications to think about, morning sickness, the whole stretch mark thing, and the whole shebang of pregnancy. And even if Kagome brought the baby to term and it was healthy and everything, she probably won't be prepared to give up a small living thing that SHE grew inside of herself to Sango, no matter how worthy the cause. Will she talk to Mrs. Higurashi about something like that, or will she even mention it to Sango and Miroku? Or even Inuyasha...course, IY would probably have a few things to say about THAT...
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: November 15, 2004 19:46 PST
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Oh My! Here we go on a roller coaster of a story! I can not imagine, which direction this tale is going to take, regarding Kagome considering 'trying to have a baby for her friends.' Are we talking test tube here? It's hard to imagine Kagome having a child without InuYasha or even being able to part with one after carrying it; or better yet, InuYasha letting her have one without him. (Snigger!) I know the story's going to be good, any time Kag/Inu are fighting their attraction for one another from Chapter One on. Lead on O'Queen of Way with Words. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: November 15, 2004 19:45 PST
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is kagome going to have a baby for sango and miroku? i remember reading another fic where she did that and it was absolutely amazing. it would be intersting to see where this idea would go in your hands. by the way, did you happen to watch that monkey episode of inuyasha again while you were writng this chapter? hehehe. just wondering!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story so far. I wonder what Kagome is planing? I'll bet InuYasha won't like it. So please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ThePioden (too lazy to log in) On: November 15, 2004 19:33 PST
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I should be doing me homework right now, but... this is a helluvalot more interesting that the Social Studies text book. *hacks book into little pieces with Tetsusaiga* Oops... I slipped... Anyway, another great start to a fic. It's not freaking fair, the speed at which you update. I can't update that fast. And my chapters are short, and they suck. Yours are so... so... GOOD! Gar...
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 15, 2004 18:31 PST
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Uh, is Kagome actually considering being a surrogate mother? Or am I reading it the wrong way? LOL Would InuYasha be happy about that? I mean, if he really loves her he probably wouldn't like the idea that she would be having someone else's baby and not his. I can't see Miroku and Sango agreeing on that either. But what the hell do I know? You're the master at this stuff. You make up the plots that are unbelievable and addicting. :-D I'm not being a suck-up...noooooooo. Never. LOL
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